VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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HunterWithEH said:
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Chapter 9 weekly status report (8)
Hey there,
not much new to report about Chapter 9 other than I'm hacking away at the last bits of writing, I still have one major scene to finish and a few other exposition sequences to fill in the gaps. I'll try to finish as much as possible this week, hopefully leaving only the testing and some small visual tasks to complete.


I'm getting there, I hate to reiterate but thanks for your patience and be sure that the episode will come out before the end of the month, that much I can guarantee. Meanwhile, let me know what pairings are you hoping to see in this chapter and which scenes are your most anticipated ones.
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Another deadline given... Another deadline to be missed. I cancelled my subscription last month when she missed the deadline again.
 
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ferr0 said:
There is this threesome scene (five-some if you unclude the guys) with August Ames and Abella Danger and in an effort to waste away some time 'till the new update I made an attempt to trace it.

I don't know how likely this storyline is, but if anyone is able to pull it off it's bound to be our boy Stan.
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Wow, that's amazing! Aside from some minor brush-work and Lena totally looking like Riley Reid instead of having her own face, this looks the closest to official art. Impressive. Shared with Eva.
 
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zhengyus said:
If that's not a promise, what is? Is it kidding? I can take the long grind, but I can't take the repeated failure to keep my promise. Promises are like cheap waste paper. They serve no purpose other than to disappoint and disgust people.
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Promises usually go this way: "Trust me, I'll definitely pull out before I cum! You have nothing to worry about, I promise".
To compare, "Hopefully I'll be able to get it up this time" is hardly a promise.
 
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HunterWithEH said:
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Chapter 9 weekly status report (8)
Hey there,
not much new to report about Chapter 9 other than I'm hacking away at the last bits of writing, I still have one major scene to finish and a few other exposition sequences to fill in the gaps. I'll try to finish as much as possible this week, hopefully leaving only the testing and some small visual tasks to complete.


I'm getting there, I hate to reiterate but thanks for your patience and be sure that the episode will come out before the end of the month, that much I can guarantee. Meanwhile, let me know what pairings are you hoping to see in this chapter and which scenes are your most anticipated ones.
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September - by the end of the month
October - by the end of the month
Mid-November - 1% left
End of November - finished, now you need to check
Mid-December - testers checked and found an error in one word
End of December - I decided to rewrite the chapter from the beginning, since the meaning of the word in which the error was not revealed
This is sarcasm)) do not take it seriously)))
 
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17demon said:
September - by the end of the month
October - by the end of the month
Mid-November - 1% left
End of November - finished, now you need to check
Mid-December - testers checked and found an error in one word
End of December - I decided to rewrite the chapter from the beginning, since the meaning of the word in which the error was not revealed
This is sarcasm)) do not take it seriously)))
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Bets are already being made. Which will be released first: THE ELDER SCROLLS 6 or the final & bugfixed full version of OUR RED STRING. Incidentally, the estimated release year is 2028-2030. :cool:
 
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BlandChili said:
I'm really glad we don't. I pay Eva because I like the female POV content and the concise weave with which the narrative between Lena and Ian is stitched together.

Don't need to see what the secondary characters get up to, I don't give a damn about them, so glad Eva isn't wasting development time on that. :geek:

EDIT: New update just posted.
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That's fair, good point. I was just thinking that I'm actually interes
BlandChili said:
I'm really glad we don't. I pay Eva because I like the female POV content and the concise weave with which the narrative between Lena and Ian is stitched together.

Don't need to see what the secondary characters get up to, I don't give a damn about them, so glad Eva isn't wasting development time on that. :geek:

EDIT: New update just posted.
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That's fair, I just think that the secondary characters in this story are actually pretty interesting!
 
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HunterWithEH said:
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Chapter 9 weekly status report (8)
Hey there,
not much new to report about Chapter 9 other than I'm hacking away at the last bits of writing, I still have one major scene to finish and a few other exposition sequences to fill in the gaps. I'll try to finish as much as possible this week, hopefully leaving only the testing and some small visual tasks to complete.


I'm getting there, I hate to reiterate but thanks for your patience and be sure that the episode will come out before the end of the month, that much I can guarantee. Meanwhile, let me know what pairings are you hoping to see in this chapter and which scenes are your most anticipated ones.
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Dang, I have seriously conflicting feeling about Seymour in this pic. On the one hand he looks like a seriously fuckable daddy right there, and not just that, but good enough to be romance-able; as in, he doesn't look slimy like his sprite often does - he looks respectable.
On the other hand, I know it's all an illusion and the man cannot be trusted, and I'll probably hate the scene cos classy, intimate images like this make me want things for my Lena that I probably won't be getting in a long time (if ever), and definately not in this scene. Damn it!

Really nice art though. Fingers crossed we get some equally nice Cindy and Alison art. :)
 
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gisgus said:
I mostly agree with Zedire on this one; to me his personality just seems so straightforward that there's not very much to flesh out. I also think he's unlikeable exactly because he's less well-written than several of the other characters. Alison and Cindy also have some very uncharming traits—spoiled (Cindy), self-centred (both) and jealous (Alison)—but I have no problem seeing why they act that way in their current situation, so for me that only gives them more character depth. Jeremy is just… a not too bright guy whose whole personality revolves around his female conquests, and who we've been told was a nerd at some point.
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I might have mentioned this before, but for my part I don't actually dislike Jeremy. I don't care about him, which (for me) is worse then liking or disliking or feeling intrigued to know more about a character.

What I do care about is Jeremy's backstory (in telling a good story overall), and how implementing it in subtle and clever ways could take him from being a character whom I wouldn't care one bit if he was replaced with some other random black dude who likes women and kickboxing, to someone I could genuinely like or be interested in. What's more, bringing in a bit more of his nerdy side or intelligence might actually make him a bit more suitable for Lena and her own creative, intellectual side - something for her to connect with beyond him just being a bbc. It wouldn't exactly hurt to have another guy who was semi-normal for Lena to get into a healthy relationship with, and still have her bbc.

As he is now, Jeremy is one-dimensional and forgettable - filling a niche for people who love their bbc kink, and that's it. I don't think it's too late in the story to change Jeremy for the better, giving him a growth path just like a bunch of other characters are getting - bringing out strengths and flaws as it goes. His would be quite interesting as he's torn between the nerd he was and the chad he is, and eventually finding that balance, or going full nerd again (but with confidence in being a nerd, by the end).

There's also the potential for Jeremy to be end-game for Holly, or at least someone for her to work up to. Maybe she's nerdy and intellectual enough to connect with that side of Jeremy too, as she goes on her own journey of sexual self-expression/discovery. Might be interesting.

We have Billy and whatever guys he recruits to take over player's sterotypical bbc kink needs if they want to go down that route (it probably won't be that long until those kinds of scenes start happening anyway), which can free up Jeremy to become a bit more then he is.
 
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zhengyus said:
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I never ever would have thought that an update from Eva would take about 5 (!) months. 3 months were realistic recently, but 5? With Eva's GGGB (1 month)and the first few ORS updates (2 months) it seems now like you're waiting forever for it.
Hopefully this will level off at a maximum of 3 months in the future. But: more stuff, more routes, more branches...more complications and problems for Eva? :/
 
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