VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Samuel Hidayat]

remind me again when did the Ian Mike conversation happened?

Nah, that's small l, not I lmao.

 

[camube]

Nah, that's small l, not I lmao.

sorry freudian slip, yeah i meant Lena and mike convo. when did that happen again?

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I bet it has something with unfaithful in it

Whatever the case, it can't be good for Ian.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

sorry freudian slip, yeah i meant Lena and mike convo. when did that happen again?

Iirc, when Mike visits Lena after carrying her luggage. When she returns from her parents' house, Lena needs to call Mike to ask for his help.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Incidentally, a fun thought regarding Gillian...

                "Ask about Mike's girlfriend" if v9miketalkb == False:
                    l "So... How's it going with your girl?"
                    mk "It's okay..."
                    l "Just okay?"
                    mk "It's fine. It's my first time living together with my girlfriend, so I'm still getting used to it."
                    mk "She's pretty busy with her new job though, so she gives me plenty of space, which is nice. So far everything's been going alright."
                    l "How long have you been with her?"
                    mk "About a year... And we moved here like three months ago or so."

So, Mike and his girlfriend have been together for about a year. And until few months ago lived elsewhere.

We also know that Mike's girlfriend has relatively small breasts.

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Just... kind of makes you wonder.

I really hope not. Just too many implausible coincidences already, rolled into the "red string" copout. Makes it feel as if the world is literally comprised of 40 people, 20 of which haven't met each other until the past year for some strange reason. That's been a weak-point in the writing of ORS to me.

Also reminds me of that (imo crappy) 90's show Friends, where every F/M character combination must date at some point in the show for fan-service or whatever other inexplicable reason, except for the only interesting combo that would get the show booted from Patreon.

 

[Necrosian]

Hey people, is there a way to avoid seymore as Lena?

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Hey people, is there a way to avoid seymore as Lena?

Don't call him, simple as.

Lena will still be hunted by him, but at least she won't be involved with his erotic photoshoots.

 

[dundun]

Incidentally, a fun thought regarding Gillian...

                "Ask about Mike's girlfriend" if v9miketalkb == False:
                    l "So... How's it going with your girl?"
                    mk "It's okay..."
                    l "Just okay?"
                    mk "It's fine. It's my first time living together with my girlfriend, so I'm still getting used to it."
                    mk "She's pretty busy with her new job though, so she gives me plenty of space, which is nice. So far everything's been going alright."
                    l "How long have you been with her?"
                    mk "About a year... And we moved here like three months ago or so."

So, Mike and his girlfriend have been together for about a year. And until few months ago lived elsewhere.
We also know that Mike's girlfriend has relatively small breasts.
Just... kind of makes you wonder.

A lot of people think that's the case, Red Strings and such. And it is pretty compelling. She left for her hometown one year ago and had planned to find a job here.

It is just that last Q&A EvaKiss was asked if we would ever meet Mike's girlfriend and Evakiss wrote:
I'd like to develop that side of Mike's story more, but right now the focus is elsewhere.

 

[Chuck_Bass]

"handsome"

You should say no homo before calling a guy handsome like that in the open dude!

 

[spenk]

Louise as puppygirl (pet training) and cuckquean would be awesome

 

[fishbrain]

Is it normal for her to do the prologue like this? I can't remember seeing one before, but betas usually. Just wondering how long it might be until the full update is out. I feel like it's been a while and it shouldn't be far off.

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Is it normal for her to do the prologue like this? I can't remember seeing one before, but betas usually. Just wondering how long it might be until the full update is out. I feel like it's been a while and it shouldn't be far off.

Ch.10 was fully released a day before Christmas I think. So it's safe to assume ch11 will take some time. Like 11 months.

 

[hakarlman]

The game has a million fucking characters in the beginning, jesus. They need to put a picture of the NPC next to the NPC name in the dialogue text box.

Multiple protagonist is f'ing stupid as hell.

You start as Ian, then one you finally understand what's going on, and get immersed, it switches to a whole new protagonist, and you have to start all over again.

Why ... WHY do you guys like this? WHY?!

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Why ... WHY do you guys like this? WHY?!

Because its fun.

 

[hakarlman]

Because its fun.

Multiple protagonist kills any sense of immersion.

The game mechanics make no sense.

If you think the game is fun now, it would be more fun if it was just a single protagonist. Unless your writing skills are as good as Quentin Tarantino, I wouldn't try for multiple protagonist.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

The game mechanics make no sense.

Which mechanics that don't make sense?

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Multiple protagonist kills any sense of immersion.

For you maybe, I am doing just fine.

 

[BlondieAngelEyes]

Multiple protagonist kills any sense of immersion.

The game mechanics make no sense.

If you think the game is fun now, it would be more fun if it was just a single protagonist. Unless your writing skills are as good as Quentin Tarantino, I wouldn't try for multiple protagonist.

your are right. it should be only Lena. ja

 

[fishbrain]

Ch.10 was fully released a day before Christmas I think. So it's safe to assume ch11 will take some time. Like 11 months.

Ahhh that's a bummer, guess I don't see the point in releasing this if that's the case. I think she remastered the whole thing faster than that so hopefully you're exaggerating a bit.

 

[sztrb]

There is. It looks like this:
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You need v10_lena_sex < 2, which you can get if v9_axel_sex or (lena_seymour_dating and seymour_disposition < 2). Pretty much, you are in a relationship with Ian but cheat on him with Axel or you accept to work with Seymour. Important, don't be insecure during the hand job. Otherwise you'll end up on the other cuck path.


I said "Hardcore" because on that route is a complete nightmare for Ian. He is whinny and insecure. Lena puts him in his place and is more dominant. You might think that is not so bad, but you can also get this lines:

"Do you like seeing me act like a dirty little slut?"
"How does rubbing one out for me feel? I bet you like it..."
"But I'm sure you'd really like to stick it inside me... Feel my wet pussy around your cock..."
Ian: "Yes..."
"Robert for sure liked it a lot... And it felt so good having his hard cock deep inside of me..."
"His hot cum filling my pussy... Mhhh..."

Is hard to see anything worse in this game .... Just imagine how fucked up Ian is. First Gillian and now Lena (with Robert).

The sex scenes might look the same, but on "Normal" the writing is not that harsh towards Ian.

Imagine citing Robert as a thing to try and trigger anyone...

I'm still pissed that Ian just dumps Alison through a phone call instead of talk about it during the lunch. Wasted opportunity for them to end things amicably, messily, or Ian to even seduce Alison to continue the affair (since she doesn't seem to mind being the sidechick).

Can't help but feeling that it's one of those contents that got trimmed up, just like Ed's route.

Apart from the breeding fetish, Allison is just too fucking vanilla tbh if her and Ian stay faithful to one another. But even with Jeremy and his picture taking, it seems like apart from a threesome, the sex is pretty vanilla. Although than again, he is a 5 pump chump.

Given how the route with Minerva, Emma and Cherry have gone. The fact that you can seemingly get Cindy to agree to fuck Ian behind Wade's loser back and the potential for Holly to explore her sexuality further; with potential paths with Ivy, Louise and Jessica... I think Allison by comparison feels very much like a female Robert.

My hope for future h-scenes are for scenes with Gillian (whether or not flashback), the aforementioned trio of Ivy, Louise and Jessica and for the buttslut from GGGB (Natasha?) to become available. Apart from continuation with others.