VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[mommysboiii]

Suicide can be a powerful literal tool in fiction. It was pretty effective gutter punch to let Ashleys dad break over the course of the game or bullying Eva into it. Not applying it to RL, in case someone here thinks I want to encourage it.

I dont like sucide as a topic especially if you have cheating or emotional instable relationships there are guys that are very emotional (espacilly the kind of guys that like this type of womens/rollercoaster relationships) that play this games too so its a bit dangerouse topic to be honest especially if you have good deep writting skills like eva.

Ivy doesn't strike me as the type to dominate wimpy boys. She wants confident chads that make her feel good to compliment her as a confident girl that makes her partner feel good, not needy subs. The closest I'd say is having a pet like Holly or Louise, but thats a girls thing linking to their sister-rival-like mentality that doesn't apply to boys. Even purified Ivy could only happen with a grounded, confident Ian convincing her by his natural charme and charisma to consider a steady long-term relationship with some emotional balance.

did you see the interaction between perry and ivy?? or ivy corrupting holly ?? ivy seems like the type that likes dominant chads true but she also is the type that likes to corrupt people and play with her food so she seems like she can do both take control and let oher people take charge but to me it seems like she likes taking control and plays with her food more.

 

[Gicoo]

That's not flirting to make a move on Perry but belittlement to distance herself from the low lives to booster her ego. She pulled off a similar move with Ed, buttering him up and then laughing what a fool he is once he is gone. Consider how she views her viewership: She boasts how she drains their wallets by putting of a show. By contrast, Lena wants to maintain a serious image, sees beauty and art behind her work, she shows introspection and is curios if not even concerned about her viewers and how they see her. As a natural big sister Lena is far more inclined to worry and pity, hence she can open up to dominate and enable cucks and simps, a psychological appeal that eludes someone like Ivy, likely because Ivy doesn't need it due to having different childhood and relationships.

 

[mommysboiii]

That's not flirting to make a move on Perry but belittlement to distance herself from the low lives to booster her ego. She pulled off a similar move with Ed, buttering him up and then laughing what a fool he is once he is gone. Consider how she views her viewership: She boasts how she drains their wallets by putting of a show. By contrast, Lena wants to maintain a serious image, sees beauty and art behind her work, she shows introspection and is curios if not even concerned about her viewers and how they see her. As a natural big sister Lena is far more inclined to worry and pity, hence she can open up to dominate and enable cucks and simps, a psychological appeal that eludes someone like Ivy, likely because Ivy doesn't need it due to having different childhood and relationships.

but every interaction we saw with ivy ivy lena ,or the game with ivy louise ,perry ivy,and so on.... she seems to like to be in control and likes being worhipped so I would say she dosent do this only for her ego or money she seem to quite like it a alot at least in my opinion based what I saw with her.

 

[Gicoo]

She likes that, but being worshipped by low lifes from a distance to stroke her ego is different than bonding and interacting with them like Lena does. I associate pegging as a form of sadomasochism, which requires an arrangement from both sides and a certain amount of emotional investement that Ivy is yet willing to give after that traumatic experience in high school. I don't see Ivy fucking a sub, all her potential partners are required to have confidence and be the typical dominating male to compliment her. E.g. if its an older dude, it would rather be a rich gent like Seymour (and have fun trying domming him) and not drooling Ed.

 

[mommysboiii]

She likes that, but being worshipped by low lifes from a distance to stroke her ego is different than bonding and interacting with them like Lena does. I associate pegging as a form of sadomasochism, which requires an arrangement from both sides and a certain amount of emotional investement that Ivy is yet willing to give after that traumatic experience in high school. I don't see Ivy fucking a sub, all her potential partners are required to have confidence and be the typical dominating male to compliment her. E.g. if its an older dude, it would rather be a rich gent like Seymour (and have fun trying domming him) and not drooling Ed.

I dont think that we will see pegging too but I dont think that the reason will be that it dosent fit her cheracter more that eva dosent like it or because of the male audiance she writes for that would riot over that but it would definitly fit her cheracter at least in my opinion based on the writting I saw.

We dont saw any interaction with her that she constantly feel drawn to people like axel which is the most dominant chad in game or any other person she more like to use people as tools,being worshipped,corrupt people play with her food, likes winning(is a bad/sore loser) likes turning heads that are the interactions that we saw until now but we will see in the future we did not see that much from her anyway.

 

[fatpussy123]

It looks like we are looking at mid to late June release. maybe if July if Eva Kiss really struggles with this last scene. Also we will get a small update after the chapter releases, similar to how we got the prologue after chapter 10 released.

 

[ffive]

Stan and Mark because of the same reason

Now that's a pairing we don't see brought up often.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Now that's a pairing we don't see brought up often.

Stan got cakes.

 

[Xupuzulla]

5 lewd scenes for Holly,cool.
How many for Stan through?

 

[dolfe67]

5 lewd scenes for Holly and none in my PT

 

[IkarusWestwood]

What I want to see in future updates? Hm...
-Holly
-More of Holly
-Sex scenes with Holly
-Relationship progress with Holly
-Wholesome scenes with Holly
-Dirty scenes with Holly
-Steamy scenes with Holly

Holly fans are in luck, since she's the character who has more lewd scenes this chapter, with 5 total (4 of them being quitev substantial).

Damn, mf predicted this

 

[BloodyMares]

What upcoming scenes do you guys look forward to the most?

Here is my list in no particular order: anything with Ivy, Seymore, some BDSM stuff (Holly or Louise) and an actual DP

Not really in relation to Ch 11 but in general I wish for more Ian and Holly's interactions with Nat. Nat is known to not really be professional if we take her GGGB actions into account (casually suggesting a threesome to her employee), so hopefully she could be an alternative chaotic / liberating force for Ian's relationship with Holly as opposed to Ivy. Pass down the kinky / open relationship torch from one book-smart redhead to another. Imagine a threesome with her and Holly where Nat teaches her young protege the art of anal sex

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Not really in relation to Ch 11 but in general I wish for more Ian and Holly's interactions with Nat. Nat is known to not really be professional if we take her GGGB actions into account (casually suggesting a threesome to her employee), so hopefully she could be an alternative chaotic / liberating force for Ian's relationship with Holly as opposed to Ivy. Pass down the kinky / open relationship torch from one book-smart redhead to another. Imagine a threesome with her and Holly where Nat teaches her young protege the art of anal sex

Agreed. Nat's ethical slut vibe much preferable over Ivy's skank tank, while still racking up the same number of bodies. She just doesn't need painted-on eyebrows & plastic insta-ho parts to do it. Much better tutor for Holly to learn-by-example from, rather than learning from a walking venereal disease.

 

[King Tommen]

Not really in relation to Ch 11 but in general I wish for more Ian and Holly's interactions with Nat. Nat is known to not really be professional if we take her GGGB actions into account (casually suggesting a threesome to her employee), so hopefully she could be an alternative chaotic / liberating force for Ian's relationship with Holly as opposed to Ivy. Pass down the kinky / open relationship torch from one book-smart redhead to another. Imagine a threesome with her and Holly where Nat teaches her young protege the art of anal sex

Lies! She fired Ashley before so it's ok

 

[kjj308]

In Eva's latest post she said that Holly will get the most lewd scenes in the upcoming chapter.

There can never be too much Holly!

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I don't see any problems!

5 lewd scenes for Holly,cool.
How many for Stan through?

None unless he cleans himself up, that's my opinion, lol.

Damn, mf predicted this

YSSSSSSS

 

[lockerxx]

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Here I am with another status report. I've been picking up the writing, slow but steady, and I'm now finishing writing the last scene. Once that's done, I'll make sure everything fits nicely and finish touching up the art. All the illustrations are drawn (though I'd like to add one or two more) and right now the colorist is working on the last batch of illustrations.

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I've shared the process before, but here you can see the 4 different passes each image has: I send the linework to the colorist, and she sends back the colored image. I go over it adjusting colors and adding an additional layer of light, shadow and detail, making the volumes pop and the image look more attractive. Finally, I add the background and ambient light, as well as adding any layered cosmetics like tattoos and piercings.

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Holly fans are in luck, since she's the character who has more lewd scenes this chapter, with 5 total (4 of them being quitev substantial). The chapter will feature 16 lewd scenes total, though I had to cut one planned scene: the scenario provides room for a lot of interesting stuff, and as I developed the chapter new scenes popped into my mind and it wouldn't be a shame to let those opportunities go to waste. That particular scene is already drawn, but I'll add it and at least 2 more after the core chapter 11 has been released. My mental health demands that I publish it as soon as possible, and hopefully I have everything ready in a couple weeks. I can begin to see the light at the end of the tunnel!

I'll keep you posted.

5 scene can i dream with a Holly/ivy scene

 

[Princess Groundhog]

5 scene can i dream with a Holly/ivy scene

I’m guessing:

1. Lena/Holly (romantic/kinky versions)
2. Lena/Ivy/Holly
3. Ian/Holly (romantic/kinky versions)

 

[mommysboiii]

I’m guessing:

1. Lena/Holly (romantic/kinky versions)
2. Lena/Ivy/Holly
3. Ian/Holly (romantic/kinky versions)

I was hoping for more interesting corruptions scenes or scenes at the beach house at the cooler party or something kinky

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

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Here I am with another status report. I've been picking up the writing, slow but steady, and I'm now finishing writing the last scene. Once that's done, I'll make sure everything fits nicely and finish touching up the art. All the illustrations are drawn (though I'd like to add one or two more) and right now the colorist is working on the last batch of illustrations.

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I've shared the process before, but here you can see the 4 different passes each image has: I send the linework to the colorist, and she sends back the colored image. I go over it adjusting colors and adding an additional layer of light, shadow and detail, making the volumes pop and the image look more attractive. Finally, I add the background and ambient light, as well as adding any layered cosmetics like tattoos and piercings.

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Holly fans are in luck, since she's the character who has more lewd scenes this chapter, with 5 total (4 of them being quitev substantial). The chapter will feature 16 lewd scenes total, though I had to cut one planned scene: the scenario provides room for a lot of interesting stuff, and as I developed the chapter new scenes popped into my mind and it wouldn't be a shame to let those opportunities go to waste. That particular scene is already drawn, but I'll add it and at least 2 more after the core chapter 11 has been released. My mental health demands that I publish it as soon as possible, and hopefully I have everything ready in a couple weeks. I can begin to see the light at the end of the tunnel!

I'll keep you posted.

It's good that Eva is nearing the finish line and sees the light at the end of the tunnel. but my position is that it would be better if she did everything she wanted and released the update completely without releasing DLC later, than chasing deadlines.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

I was hoping for more interesting corruptions scenes or scenes at the beach house at the cooler party or something kinky

Probably a little too soon for that. If Lena is letting Ivy corrupt her then maybe another scene with Mike.