VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Gold613]

I think Eva just had something different in mind for Lena, Jeremy and Ian which makes the relationship between her and Ian get in the way. Maybe even saying "it's getting in the way" isn't a correct thing to say; more like it's just not the direction Eva wants to take.

I am all for it if there are different plans for one of the 2 main characters, however 1 is getting a constant short end of the stick when it involves the both of them, in my personal opinion. So for example what I said about the Holly situation for the both of em. The Jeremy situation is a bit different but however what I am trying to say in this respect is that the Jeremy thing makes not so much sense, but if she had other plans then by all means, however in this case make it so that Ian get's his fair share, for example Ivy and Louise, make em both available for him.

I don't think it is all that weird -- it's common for people to treat people with different degree of respect, and to care about some more than others, depending on personal preferences. Lena is on record as a big fan of Holly even before they meet and get to know each other. In contrast she doesn't hold that high opinion of Louise (not surprising when you can see every day the way Louise can act) and even less about Mike's girlfriend she doesn't know anything about (other than said gf has allegedly smaller bust) So, caring about Holly's feelings more than she cares about Louise's or Mike's girlfriend's, it's easy enough to explain.

A lot of this is true, When it involves people you know nothing about or having no attachment too, there is no loyalty or care. However if it is someone you know or are invested in then emotions do act and enter the stage.

 

[| Vee |]

I am just waiting for 3 Scenes to happen
1) Ian fucking Axel's sister (if he has any)
2) Give viagra to Stan and tie him to a chair then fuck in front of him.
3) Ian dominating Ivy's scene (I doubt if Ivy would let him do that, but from the gym scene it might just happen)

A guy can dream

 

[Deleted member 53157]

The last entry Eva claimed only one scene left to render and some "art touching" before compiling the chapter into Alpha build. That 3 weeks ago. Almost a month to finish a single scene?

 

[Asmodean2]

Her last Update was 4 days ago. She finished writing and is now playtesting and finishing the art.
So by the looks an end of June release is realistic.

 

[bitofaperv]

I am just waiting for 3 Scenes to happen
1) Ian fucking Axel's sister (if he has any)

A guy can dream

NGL, I hate Axel. I hate the type he represents.

The wish fulfillment side of me would fucking love this option. The unstable fuck who can't deal with not getting something he wants, and never takes no for an answer... This is the kind of character that needs to have his legs kicked out from under him. Hopefully it will happen by Lena allowing Ian to openly antagonise Axel with their relationship at a later stage.

Failing that, fucking his hypothetical sister and sending him the pictures would be extremely satisfying.

It's definitely an "average joe" empowerment fantasy though, and the game has a really strong feminine touch (for the better, in my opinion), so I won't hold my breath for anything like this to happen.

 

[Flowing Thought]

I hope there is a chance for Lena to get back with Axel. Her being submissive to him is really hot. Then post it to Stalkfap.

 

[Jacey.ci]

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Seems about right

 

[jaylop09]

I hope there is a chance for Lena to get back with Axel. Her being submissive to him is really hot. Then post it to Stalkfap.

As much as I also hate Axel (I even think he´s not attractive, he looks way too cartoonish), his scene with Lena is probably the hottest one so far

 

[LongoMcFap]

How about a rope?

A strap-on in his ass?

Lena and Louise can build their own Eiffel tower.

A bullet in the head from a cop who stopped him from committing a mass shooting?

Oh my poor, poor duderinos, our man, the Stan, Stan the man, Stan the Stallion will fuck the hottest chick in the game, which is Lena, to countless multiple orgasms and you can't do anything about this, except shedding gallons of tears! And spilling body fluids is what the winner team will do too ...

 

[DeemLeem12]

It's a Patreon funded porn game not Finnegans Wake, I'm not looking for perfect writing.

Finnegan's wake isn't that good. It tries so hard but its execution just doesn't hit the mark.

 

[bitofaperv]

I hope there is a chance for Lena to get back with Axel. Her being submissive to him is really hot. Then post it to Stalkfap.

I'd rather she was just allowed to be more submissive to Ian or Mike. I really don't like the Axel submission, because there's an element of manipulation and emotional abuse to it all.

Ian gets dom points for two potential actions in sex scenes with Lena, so hopefully that shows this is going to be a thing.

But yeah, Lena and Axel's dom scene is the hottest in the game so far by a fucking mile.

 

[ArcherHades46]

Be patient, most likely we are expecting the alpha version this week, if Eva's colorists are not surprised by our expectation. Good luck to everyone and keep your hands on the table until there is an update)

 

[Flowing Thought]

Finnegan's wake isn't that good. It tries so hard but its execution just doesn't hit the mark.

Feel free to insert whatever book you think is appropriate into this analogy.

I'd rather she was just allowed to be more submissive to Ian or Mike. I really don't like the Axel submission, because there's an element of manipulation and emotional abuse to it all.

Ian gets dom points for two potential actions in sex scenes with Lena, so hopefully that shows this is going to be a thing.

But yeah, Lena and Axel's dom scene is the hottest in the game so far by a fucking mile.

Ian or Mike I just don't feel the dom vibes from. They might try, but they don't have it.

 

[Mr. Muscles]

Almost a month to finish a single scene?

Why not?

 

[mommysboiii]

I'd rather she was just allowed to be more submissive to Ian or Mike. I really don't like the Axel submission, because there's an element of manipulation and emotional abuse to it all.

full corruption game and manipulation no this cant be the case

and get of your horse this are just pixels dont interpret to much into it
just pixels dont worry JUST PIXELS

 

[bitofaperv]

full corruption game and manipulation no this cant be the case

and get of your horse this are just pixels dont interpret to much into it
just pixels dont worry JUST PIXELS

Get out of here with your reductionist bullshit.

 

[mommysboiii]

Get out of here with your reductionist bullshit.

you are the one that interpret things into pixels

 

[IDoAThing]

I am just waiting for 3 Scenes to happen
1) Ian fucking Axel's sister (if he has any)
2) Give viagra to Stan and tie him to a chair then fuck in front of him.
3) Ian dominating Ivy's scene (I doubt if Ivy would let him do that, but from the gym scene it might just happen)

A guy can dream

you think eva is gonna just tease a ivy and ian route? nah they gon be fuckin for sure.

 

[bitofaperv]

Ian or Mike I just don't feel the dom vibes from. They might try, but they don't have it.

I understand your point... buuuut...

... Man, you learn that shit.

No baby came out of the womb knowing how to "choke a bitch."

 

[Flowing Thought]

I understand your point... buuuut...

... Man, you learn that shit.

No baby came out of the womb knowing how to "choke a bitch."

Ian is too much of a dork. Just can't take him serious as a dom. He spends his time writing, living off money from his parents, some routes he delivers fucking pizza. Subs to Lena's Stalkfap and feels jealous about it. I'd let Axel choke me. Ian I'd tell him to stop. Mike I can see growing into the role.