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ah, a man of culture, I salute theeWe need more Cindy in the gameView attachment 2770673
ah, a man of culture, I salute theeWe need more Cindy in the gameView attachment 2770673
Same could be said for Holly, at least on the Ian path. Chapter 10 it was established for both Holly and Cindy that they were going to date Ian officially. With Holly it was made clear when Ian called Holly his favourite and Cindy when they discussed it. Fast forward to chapter 11 and scenes basically repeat themselves. Ian and Cindy have a scene where they reaffirm they want to be together and Holly has a scene where it is reaffirmed that Ian cares about her/is falling in love with her.Cindy was the best girl for a while, the chapter 1-9 build-up was gold. But her progress has stalled and fucking her in chapter 10 and 11 was boring.
I spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.Seymour diversifying his corruption. Emma doing something.
Emma pegs SeymourI spot an obvious way to address both of these issues.![]()
Yep it set up some plot points that will be relevant later, but it's own content left a lot to be desired imo and it could have had more of it's own payoffs. Still enjoyed the update and a lot of the scene were really good.Chapter 11 at least introduced some drama in the Axel/Cindy rumours and the questions of whether you can trust Ivy.
And a little thruple progress for Holly.
I agree it the recent chapter only moves their stories forward by inches but I do believe those are the seedlings for larger plot points to come being watered for growth.
But Holly isn't Ian exclusive and has a large chunk of content on Lena's path. Lena, Ivy, Mark, set-up for Marcel and even Robert and Stan.Same could be said for Holly, at least on the Ian path.
I found the Alison Ch 11 scene sorta disturbing in the Ian variant where Ian never (or rarely) does things with Alison. I have a playthrough where Ian and Lena doesn't love each other, and Ian have a thing for Cherry instead.But Holly isn't Ian exclusive and has a large chunk of content on Lena's path. Lena, Ivy, Mark, set-up for Marcel and even Robert and Stan.
Ians chapters are more and more lackluster, though admittably the tournament, book contest and vacation may put him in the spotlight more. I hope he starts committing instead of being half-assed with Holly and Alison and can give Cherry and Emma more attention. And Jessica was a sidething to begin with and is disappearing quickly. I hated how we couldn't control his actions on the birthday party (and Lena couldn't even sleep with any of the boys, she is automatically directed to some meaningless Ivy sex, which feels more like a consolation prize than a reward for trying to get the man of your choice for this special night). The Lena focus in chapter 10 and 11 turned this game more in a fuckfest, the threesomes seemed more distant and out of obligation compared to the Alison threesomes which has a lot of different outcomes and aspects to it.
Ian can underperform or outperform, he can secure his soon-to-be-girlfriend or can impress a mere sexfriend, can potentially impregnate her or let her be impregnated. It can end awkward or a fun experience for all three of them. There are stakes and drama brooding. Ian/Lena/Louise was dispassionate, Ian and Louise had no development, there is no conflict with Jeremy, no potential jealousy, conquering Louise or falling for her, strengthening his bond with Lena etc.. Ian doesn't even comments if Louise is an utter sub to Lena.
That scene is supposed to be creepy, even more so if Ian is already dating Lena or Holly, something Alison knows (and tries to justify with BS "let's fuck BEFORE we enter a relationship with someone else"). Its a set-up for the pregnancy I assume.I found the Alison Ch 11 scene sorta disturbing in the Ian variant where Ian never (or rarely) does things with Alison. I have a playthrough where Ian and Lena doesn't love each other, and Ian have a thing for Cherry instead.
Alison just like, "hey, wanna come over?" and then there's no talk about condoms and stuffs, she just let him cum inside.
It's a bit jarring to me considering how strict Alison was with protection in the previous 10 chapters
I believe she is already pregnant(via Jeremy) and now baby trapping Ian. How the fuck you have that 180 turn from no creampies to not even objecting, not even a single sigh on top of that and instead in morning she is again hopping on Ian and creampies herself KNOWINGLY.I found the Alison Ch 11 scene sorta disturbing in the Ian variant where Ian never (or rarely) does things with Alison. I have a playthrough where Ian and Lena doesn't love each other, and Ian have a thing for Cherry instead.
Alison just like, "hey, wanna come over?" and then there's no talk about condoms and stuffs, she just let him cum inside.
It's a bit jarring to me considering how strict Alison was with protection in the previous 10 chapters
Alison is getting desperate to snare Ian and has moved on from not so subtle hints to full on baby entrapment.I found the Alison Ch 11 scene sorta disturbing in the Ian variant where Ian never (or rarely) does things with Alison. I have a playthrough where Ian and Lena doesn't love each other, and Ian have a thing for Cherry instead.
Alison just like, "hey, wanna come over?" and then there's no talk about condoms and stuffs, she just let him cum inside.
It's a bit jarring to me considering how strict Alison was with protection in the previous 10 chapters
I even like her bratty attitude. Cinders is a top tier fuck.For such a petite girl Cindy have amazing tushy, don't ya think?
Louise's reaction to the idea of threesome with Ian and her reactions during the act are actually influenced by her relationship with him, which depends on their earlier, admittedly limited, interactions.Ian and Louise had no development,
If Ian is in a relationship then Alison doesn't talk about "fucking before we enter a relationship". She talks how it's a pity they didn't get to fuck even once before Ian committed again, and tempts him with the idea of trying what it'd be like.That scene is supposed to be creepy, even more so if Ian is already dating Lena or Holly, something Alison knows (and tries to justify with BS "let's fuck BEFORE we enter a relationship with someone else")
There's just one problem with that clever plot.I believe she is already pregnant(via Jeremy) and now baby trapping Ian
what?There's just one problem with that clever plot.![]()
Yep. Can't wait to see it fucked.For such a petite girl Cindy have amazing tushy, don't ya think?