VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Xupuzulla]

*sigh* you have just shown your predilection for a scenario in which Axel's domination of Lena is choreographed by Agnes. You make me look so vanilla. If it comes to pass...I hope EK dispenses with the repulsive term "bg" that Axel uses for Lena and that Lena uses for Lola. It makes my Puritan skin crawl.

Axel babygirl or Jack princess,wich one is better?

 

[SearingFive]

Axel babygirl or Jack princess,wich one is better?

Princess is still fine but babygirl is

 

[| Vee |]

Axel babygirl or Jack princess,wich one is better?

I just hope next time Ian is not making baby noises and saying "bu bu bu wanna drink milk, here suck on this." "SLURP!"

 

[SearingFive]

I just hope next time Ian is not making baby noises and saying "bu bu bu wanna drink milk, here suck on this. SLURP!"

Baby trapper Alison reporting for milk duty.

 

[Leongen43]

Axel babygirl or Jack princess,wich one is better?

NONE!!!
The best thing is to throw them over a building, maybe if they break their skulls and their dead brains will become one and capes will be more intelligent and that when they were alive and their brains were separated, maybe their dialogues will improve?

 

[Xupuzulla]

Princess is still fine but babygirl is

Princess sounds so condescending through

 

[SearingFive]

Princess sounds so condescending through

Treating and calling your girl princess once in a while is fine, but calling her princess and treating her like a slut is condescending.

 

[yuvce]

Axel babygirl or Jack princess,wich one is better?

Trash vs Garbage

 

[SearingFive]

Babygirl~~~

 

[Andrea9999]

Trash vs Garbage

Apt comparison. Princess is repulsive....but bg is way worse...it has some connotation that I won't get into explicitly; I wish EK would take it out.
I also wish , to a much much lesser extent, that she replace the word "urethra" in a certain place with the word "bladder".

 

[SearingFive]

Apt comparison. Princess is repulsive....but bg is way worse...it has some connotation that I won't get into explicitly; I wish EK would take it out.
I also wish , to a much much lesser extent, that she replace the word "urethra" in a certain place with the word "bladder".

The 'urethra' is probably a mistake by EK or she wants to educate people that squirting happens from there and not the vagina. It's just like saying 'Pee is stored in the balls'. Instead of using "of my" it can be changed to "from my" which makes sense. It looks like a preposition mistake.
Of my - Bladder
From my - Urethra

if v9_axel_sex:
            "I couldn't believe it. First with Axel and now this, too...!"
            "Spasm after spasm, I emptied the content of my urethra in front of Seymour."
        else:
            "I couldn't believe it. I was squirting in front of Seymour, emptying the content of my urethra spasm after spasm...!"

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

The 'urethra' is probably a mistake by EK or she doesn't know what it is. It's just like saying 'Pee is stored in the balls'.

if v9_axel_sex:
            "I couldn't believe it. First with Axel and now this, too...!"
            "Spasm after spasm, I emptied the content of my urethra in front of Seymour."
        else:
            "I couldn't believe it. I was squirting in front of Seymour, emptying the content of my urethra spasm after spasm...!"

not to get all 9th grade health class, but doesnt that liquid come from Skene's glands, not the urethra?

 

[SearingFive]

not to get all 9th grade health class, but doesnt that liquid come from Skene's glands, not the urethra?

It's the lubrication, not the jet stream from squirting. Squirting is just the involuntary emission of urine during sexual activity.

 

[Andrea9999]

The bladder is the storage tank; the urethra is the channel. Emptying the bladder also sounds more gushingly erotic.

 

[SearingFive]

The bladder is the storage tank; the urethra is the channel. Emptying the bladder also sounds more gushingly erotic.

I edited my previous post for easier understanding. I'll put it here.
Instead of using "of my" it can be changed to "from my" which makes sense. It looks like a preposition mistake.
Of my - Bladder
From my - Urethra
Emptying the bladder sounds fine it's the other word that follows that makes it painful 'Spasming bladder'.

 

[Andrea9999]

I edited my previous post for easier understanding. I'll put it here.
Instead of using "of my" it can be changed to "from my" which makes sense. It looks like a preposition mistake.
Of my - Bladder
From my - Urethra
Emptying the bladder sounds fine it's the other word that follows that makes it painful 'Spasming bladder'.

I only recall it through the Seymour route. For urethra, I believe "through" would be the best preposition. But emptying of the bladder, to me, expresses more of the loss of control involved both in fluid release and in dignity and in will...she becomes the puppet doll....losing her free will. Just my subjective view.

 

[SearingFive]

I only recall it through the Seymour route. For urethra, I believe "through" would be the best preposition. But emptying of the bladder, to me, expresses more of the loss of control involved both in fluid release and in dignity and in will...she becomes the puppet doll....losing her free will. Just my subjective view.

Yeah, I've linked the code for both Axel and Seymour in my previous post. Yes, 'Through' can also be used as a preposition. Emptying does come close to submission or giving up, which is right from your POV.

 

[Blurpee69]

Apt comparison. Princess is repulsive....but bg is way worse...it has some connotation that I won't get into explicitly; I wish EK would take it out.

Isn't that kind of the point though? Like, I understand the connotation, but he's supposed to be unlikable, so "Baby Girl" is just an additional way to reinforce that notion.

 

[SearingFive]

Isn't that kind of the point though? Like, I understand the connotation, but he's supposed to be unlikable, so "Baby Girl" is just an additional way to reinforce that notion.

Yup, it's the babygirl-daddy trope.

 

[tbs9090]

Doesn't seymour call lena doll or am i misremembering?
because i find that just as creepy as babygirl and as condescending as princess.