VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[tbs9090]

I think he does attack her morality too regarding having access to her banking statements but yeah he goes after livelihood more than her morals. Seymour is a true relativistic villain, nothing is black and white; everything is grey if we try to probe him more. The no-touching clause is very dubcon.


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The red alt dress bad jess looked good. The leopard print really made her trashy . Aye, Ivy is too hot for Wildcats.

I had to look up what dubcon meant and yeesh i didn't think seymour could get any sleazier in my eyes but it seems i was wrong.

 

[SearingFive]

So Seymour is willing to blackmail her to try and force her to do what he wants but want get forceful in a sexual situation seems a bit...dubious. For me they will never get physical but it's good protection for Lena. This does make me wonder if there will be another Axel like situation where he wants you to get physical with someone else and tries to argue that the clause only meant him.

I understand doing background checks on people who you want to hire but it seems he used his power to do more than that. Yeah I was thinking that the moral attacks would also be him trying to convince her she's to good to work for Molly even if Lena does it due to her frail health. Does she leave for the money or convince him that helping out is the right thing.

Wow the red really does look good on her. I'm guessing it was changed to show that Jess' life really went to shit and the trashy redo was the best way to do that.

s "In fact, the contract explicitly states that I'm not allowed to lay a finger on you... unless you'd want me to."
 l "Why would I want you to lay your fingers on me?"
        $ fseymour = "evil"
        s "Exactly. Why would you?"
        
        Seymour knows about Lena/Axel photoshoot
        if lena_axel_dating:
                            s "Not even Axel. You'll never make it to Wildcats."
                            l "He also knew about my photo shoot with Axel?"

I think with enough disposition; Lena will ask Seymour to touch her. He was pretty confident at the restaurant. If Agnes gets involved more, there will be Axel/Lena situation. The oldbag is nuts for Axel. Also, the new mayoral candidate was showing some interest towards Lena. High-end escort here we come.

 

[| Vee |]

The issue with wildcats matter is not that Ivy is not selected but Axel's "promise" to her. Agencies have certain criteria's so they will take people accordingly. Ivy doesn't make it according to what they were looking for, cool. It's Axel's backstabbing which was the issue IMO as Ivy think Axel favored Cindy despite promising her. The issue on Ivy's end is that she believed "Axel's Words" and on Axel's end is he "promised" her.

 

[SearingFive]

The issue with wildcats matter is not that Ivy is not selected but Axel's "promise" to her. Agencies have certain criteria's so they will take people accordingly. Ivy doesn't make it according to what they were looking for, cool. It's Axel's backstabbing which was the issue IMO.

Ivy probably rejected his "BABYGIRL" name-calling .

 

[Leongen43]

The issue with wildcats matter is not that Ivy is not selected but Axel's "promise" to her. Agencies have certain criteria's so they will take people accordingly. Ivy doesn't make it according to what they were looking for, cool. It's Axel's backstabbing which was the issue IMO.

As I said many times, Axel's toxic used her to get back into Lena's life, he was never going to keep his promise, because he knew that Ivy did not meet the requirements that the agencies were looking for, unlike Cindy, who does.

 

[| Vee |]

Ivy probably rejected his "BABYGIRL" name-calling .

It was idiotic for Ivy to expect different result from Axel especially when she knew his nature.

As I said many times, Axel's toxic used her to get back into Lena's life, he was never going to keep his promise, because he knew that Ivy did not meet the requirements that the agencies were looking for, unlike Cindy, who does.

Exactly!

 

[yuvce]

It was idiotic for Ivy to expect different result from Axel especially when she knew his nature.

More of a miscalculation. Ivy is an opportunist. If she's given an opportunity that would benefit her, she'll jump at a chance without thinking about what might go wrong. Billy's project, she accepts immediately, doesn't question how the structure will be, and Lena loses points with her if she rejects it. Axel and the Wild Cats, jumps at the chance thinking there's no way she'll get rejected. The excitement clouds her judgement.

 

[Andrea9999]

Seymour still sabotages Lena's other working prospect to guide her towards himself. If Lena likes working for Seymour the blackmail dynamic is never brought up and she is kept in the dark. Declining Seymour forces him to tell us about his underhanded approach.

I know that.....yet it still does not ruin my day.

 

[| Vee |]

More of a miscalculation. Ivy is an opportunist. If she's given an opportunity that would benefit her, she'll jump at a chance without thinking about what might go wrong. Billy's project, she accepts immediately, doesn't question how the structure will be, and Lena loses points with her if she rejects it. Axel and the Wild Cats, jumps at the chance thinking there's no way she'll get rejected. The excitement clouds her judgement.

Every one will want to jump on opportunities that are this big. She just tend to be less cautious more impulsive.

 

[Krysis_here]

It was idiotic for Ivy to expect different result from Axel especially when she knew his nature.


Exactly!

Axel is Pretty much Desperate What he wants he would try to achieve it by any means. Lena was Broken up with After a Relationship with him, He followed her to the Restaurant where She worked, He is Abusive with Robert (though Robert is not washed with good manners as he is also an Opportunist) least on that time He tries to Protect her(Lena)

As per Ivy and Cindy, Ivy is not Easy prey after She was tricked by Axel and now She knows and understands Axel's tricks But the case with Cindy doesn't understand and traps of Axel and Steps into it Now Ivy (Late though) knows that Axel is a liar and a fishy person but as a result, Cindy can work as a Model and Ivy couldn't

 

[robrize2169]

just hope that EK doesn't make us wait too long to give us Ian beating the crap out of Axel after Axel sees Lena and Ian together and loses his shit in front of Cindy. then she will see what kind of colossal asshole Axel really is.

 

[Leongen43]

just hope that EK doesn't make us wait too long to give us Ian beating the crap out of Axel after Axel sees Lena and Ian together and loses his shit in front of Cindy. then she will see what kind of colossal asshole Axel really is.

I prefer that the beating that Ian gives to Axel be in a public place so that everyone can see a toxic Neanderthal son of a bitch lying on the floor crying like a pussy so that Ian doesn't hit him anymore and it's more than clear that I'm going to give a damn And I'm going to keep hitting him until he's unconscious (better dead), right?

 

[| Vee |]

I prefer that the beating that Ian gives to Axel be in a public place so that everyone can see a toxic Neanderthal son of a bitch lying on the floor crying like a pussy so that Ian doesn't hit him anymore and it's more than clear that I'm going to give a damn And I'm going to keep hitting him until he's unconscious (better dead), right?

 

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[SearingFive]

Sadly we will never get Jeremy+Holly,it would be too forced,they never interact with each other.
Marcel+Holly through...

Maybe cheating Holly can happen if she is in a relationship with Ian. She already interacted with Perry/Wade/Cindy. Just a matter of time before Jeremy and Holly talk to each other as friends rather than acquaintances.

 

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Hasn't Ian only been training for like a month at this point? Really doubt the dev would allow for Ian to beat him so early in the game especially if more is planned for Axel.

 

[SearingFive]

Hasn't Ian only been training for like a month at this point? Really doubt the dev would allow for Ian to beat him so early in the game especially if more is planned for Axel.

Less than 3 months at CH8 which was June. CH12 begins in August. I'd say 3.5 or close to 4 months of training. He floored Jeremy's weight division opponent (weight-cutting). His opponent was pretty nasty with kickboxing and more built than Jeremy.

 

[mommysboiii]

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Mommysboiii on some good shit.

Mate did you saw that string bikini pic cindy send??? If axel sees this its instant GAME OVER screen

Someone post that cindy bikini pic its over boissss

 

[mommysboiii]

Im just saying,if i had the power Holly would be pounded by the whole black population of Baluart.
Also If Jeremy and Holly have sex some of the regulars in this thread are going to be MAD MAD

The eskimo brothers need a deeper bonding

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

axel will get his ass beat if he comes near the girl that ian put all his time into stealing from wade