VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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MrRealHero

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Our Red String - Chapter 12 ALPHA release!

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Here's the freshly baked Alpha for Chapter 12! As you know, in this update will be focused on the beach house event, which will be concluded in the next release to cap off this long chapter. Also, a new companion will be joining Ian and his friends during their summer vacation :)

(I've also added a small addition to the mma torunament scene, if anyone's curious and wants to check it out, to set up some future plot points).

I can't think of much else to say, other than I hope you enjoy this update and have fun exploring and finding all the different paths, scenes and variations. I think this one has some of my favourite lewd scenes and animations! Work on the last part of the beach house event is already underway, and I will continue writing and drawing during this release cycle to have it ready as soon as I can.

As always, let me know your thoughts, opinion and bug reports.
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Ok, there is some hot scene , couple very hot pics , but five months for this?
Unfortunately, it seems to me that maybe Evakiss has lost interest in this project, and now she's just struggling.
It’s a shamefully small update for 5 months of "work". If she continues at the same speed. (short updates every six months), we will find out how photoshoot with Cindy on the yacht went, no earlier than the end of 2025, no joke. It is so sad, I really liked ORS at the beginning, Eva is very talented, but the pace has dropped too much. Although who doesn’t give a fuck about this whining? On Patreon her fans are happy with everything, so it will continue to be so, or even worse.
 
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mer2333 said:
Ok, there is some hot scene , couple very hot pics , but five months for this?
Unfortunately, it seems to me that maybe Evakiss has lost interest in this project, and now she's just struggling.
It’s a shamefully small update for 5 months of "work".
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Uhh, this isn't a small update by any means. The new content is ~750k large file, the only individual ones bigger are the chapter 10 halves, and this one isn't even complete yet. It's also larger than any of entire Chapters 1-5. With this in mind and the extra complexity the time it took to put together isn't really all that surprising.
 
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PilotLara a small note regarding the script in this new alpha build: it seems the game is presuming that the highest perry_emma variable can get is 2, but it's actually possible to push it to 3 (in Ch.9, taking option You're exaggerating when speaking with Perry) As such, it might be better to change the checks
if perry_emma == 2
to
if perry_emma >= 2
to ensure Perry's odds and text variants fire correctly.

edit: for this Lena's scene:
Python: 
            menu:
                "{image=icon_will.webp}{image=icon_ring.webp}Stop cheating and commit" if lena_will > 0:
//...
                "{image=icon_broken.webp}Break up with Ian":
//...
                "{image=icon_lust.webp}Continue cheating":
It currently doesn't show the disabled option, but it might work better to display it, so the player knows it is a possibility to patch things up, even if they don't have will point to make it happen.

Same thing for Ian's equivalent:
Python: 
                menu:
                    "{image=icon_lust.webp}I want it all":
//...
                    "{image=icon_will.webp}This needs to stop" if ian_will > 0:
//....
                    "{image=icon_broken.webp}I need to break up with her":
Even if it's more likely for Ian to have spare will point, he can still be out of them, so showing this option, even if disabled, would be a good move.
 
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Darth Helmet said:
Our Red String - Chapter 12 ALPHA release!

PC:
Mega

MAC:
Mega

ANDROID:

Mega


Here's the freshly baked Alpha for Chapter 12! As you know, in this update will be focused on the beach house event, which will be concluded in the next release to cap off this long chapter. Also, a new companion will be joining Ian and his friends during their summer vacation :)

(I've also added a small addition to the mma torunament scene, if anyone's curious and wants to check it out, to set up some future plot points).

I can't think of much else to say, other than I hope you enjoy this update and have fun exploring and finding all the different paths, scenes and variations. I think this one has some of my favourite lewd scenes and animations! Work on the last part of the beach house event is already underway, and I will continue writing and drawing during this release cycle to have it ready as soon as I can.

As always, let me know your thoughts, opinion and bug reports.
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I'm a bit disappointed in how Lena seems to regard Eli and Jack differently. Even though Holly's involved with Mark for the save I used. When I choose the heart option, wanting Lena to pursue Holly romantically, she then dismisses things happening with Eli on that basis but when considering Jack right after she just goes "we'll see what happens"

If Eli wants something serious with Lena, sure it would be best to not mess with her. But if it's just going to be casual, like how Lena specifically worded their potential encounter in her internal monologue, it would be nice to at least leave the option open.
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I'm a bit disappointed in how Lena seems to regard Eli and Jack differently. Even though Holly's involved with Mark for the save I used. When I choose the heart option, wanting Lena to pursue Holly romantically, she then dismisses things happening with Eli on that basis but when considering Jack right after she just goes "we'll see what happens"

If Eli wants something serious with Lena, sure it would be best to not mess with her. But if it's just going to be casual, like how Lena specifically worded their potential encounter in her internal monologue, it would be nice to at least leave the option open.

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Uhh, this isn't a small update by any means. The new content is ~750k large file, the only individual ones bigger are the chapter 10 halves, and this one isn't even complete yet. It's also larger than any of entire Chapters 1-5. With this in mind and the extra complexity the time it took to put together isn't really all that surprising.
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Weird, because I've played it through twice with two different 'canon' playthroughs. Both times the only things I encountered were:

At work (small bit with Holly and Nat)
Potential Scene with Cindy
Potential Scene with Jessica
Shopping/Interaction with Perry
MMA
Small bit with Wade and Emma

And to make matters more sad, the Cindy scene were all repeat images (case-in-point, continuing sex with her she's suddenly wearing stockings).

Maybe my saves are borked or something, but I was genuinely shocked when the 'end of Ch 12' popped up. There was no beach house or anything.
 
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CassieBare said:
Maybe my saves are borked or something, but I was genuinely shocked when the 'end of Ch 12' popped up. There was no beach house or anything.
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This sounds like you have earlier version, 12.1 which ends when the scooby gang meets at train station to visit the beach house. The one posted today goes farther and covers first couple days at the beach house.
 
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Leongen43 said:
The only thing I know is Emma gives Ian rimjobs(true love :love: ), that puts her first on my list, that makes her the best girl for me, why the hell don't we have the option of having a relationship with Emma? :unsure: :mad::mad:
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Not sure how that relates to the comment you quoted. Good for you though! I was quite pleased that Ian/Emma finally had a real choice when it came to vaginal/anal content. I am curious to go into the chapter without Ian/Emma in the future too though, to see how differently she might act. She was quite forward, at this point Perry almost seems to be wilfully gullible.

I want Lena to come clean to Holly about receiving "updates" from Ivy too though, or for Holly to tell Lena that she knows she sees them, I hope this whole Eli thing isn't an indication that Eva is neglecting the more sexually open option that's been going on with the Lena/Holly pairing too.

I'm curious about Louise too.
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