VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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This choice doesn't sound like it would improve the rleationship. Wade admits that he is unhappy with her. But if the code says so and the dialogue changes, I take it that Eva wants to sell it as an improvement. That plotline drags on.
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This choice is a setup for Ian to kick Wade in the ass to start working on things:
Python: 
            "{image=icon_wits.webp}Are you even happy with her?" if ian_wits > 7:
                if wade_cindy < 2:
                    $ wade_cindy += 1
                i "Dude, I don't want to be too harsh, but... Are you even happy with that relationship?"
                w "Not at the moment... But I was hoping to turn things around..."
                i "I don't think that's been your focus. You've been more preoccupied with other stuff, like those tournaments."
                w "..."
                w "Maybe you're right..."
 
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FFS, things were already difficult enough with one redhead ex. Why the hell do you need to make Louise appealing now too, EK.

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Ian is soooo fucked :cautious:

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soooooooo fucked. One crazy insistent woman gunning for his creampies clearly wasn't enough.
 
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All I know is Perry better finally get humiliated in this update.

Like, everything comes out about Cindy, Emma, etc. and Perry acts like his usual toxic self and finally Holly snaps and starts bitching him out, complete with openly mocking his stutter, and Perry ends up being written out of the story after this.


Perry: Y-Y-You slept with Cindy? W-W-What is w-w-wrong with y-y-

Holly: JESUS CHRIST! SHUT UP!!!!!!!!

Ian: Holly!!??

Holly: All you do is sleep, jerk off, and get drunk! You are a pathetic excuse of a human being! You are an incredibly toxic 'friend,' and let's be honest, you're stutter is so fucking annoying!

Perry: W-W-What the fuck!?? How dare you m-m-mock my st-st-

Holly: See??!!! His stutter is so goddamned irritating! GET THERAPY FOR IT!!!! THEY HAVE SPEECH THERAPISTS TO HELP PEOPLE OVERCOME STUTTERS, YOU GODDAMNED WORTHLESS DRUNK!!!!! YOU'RE SO FUCKING LAZY AND WORTHLESS YOU WON'T EVEN GET THERAPY TO FIX YOUR STUTTER AND HELP YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Perry starts crying and runs out of the AirBnB.]

Jeremy: Damn, dude. That was fucking harsh! But, he definitely had it coming...
 
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FFS, things were already difficult enough with one redhead ex. Why the hell do you need to make Louise appealing now too, EK.

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Ian is soooo fucked :cautious:
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Wonder what Louises game is. Lonely and just desperate for any guy who showed a slimmer of kindness to give her some attention, even though that guy could date Lena. Or Louise trying to hurt Lena or Jeremy by making a move on Ian.
Or Eva just wrote this scene on a whim without considering how and if it fits with the remaining story. It does come out of nowhere and is weirdly placed.
 
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Wonder what Louises game is. Lonely and just desperate for any guy who showed a slimmer of kindness to give her some attention, even though that guy could date Lena. Or Louise trying to hurt Lena or Jeremy by making a move on Ian.
Or Eva just wrote this scene on a whim without considering how and if it fits with the remaining story.
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I'm pretty sure it's the former, given Louise's behavior to date and how this convo plays out similarly regardless of exact relationship setup (but they do get tailored variants).
 
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Gicoo said:
Wonder what Louises game is. Lonely and just desperate for any guy who showed a slimmer of kindness to give her some attention, even though that guy could date Lena. Or Louise trying to hurt Lena or Jeremy by making a move on Ian.
Or Eva just wrote this scene on a whim without considering how and if it fits with the remaining story. It does come out of nowhere and is weirdly placed.
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Ian getting with Lena's girls better mean Lena can get with his in return!! :LOL:
 
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Gicoo said:
This choice doesn't sound like it would improve the rleationship. Wade admits that he is unhappy with her. But if the code says so and the dialogue changes, I take it that Eva wants to sell it as an improvement. That plotline drags on.
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Too much girl for wade, Chad Ian is always the best choice.
 
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alpha, beta and final are the same, beta and final just patch up the bug and add scenes that weren't finished at the alpha release.

Also, a chapter gets a prologue and epilogue. AND now chapters are further split to have more releases between the months.

So we had something like

Chapter 12 Prologue alpha
Chapter 12 Prologue beta
Chapter 12 Prologue Final

Chapter 12 alpha (now)
Chapter 12 beta (in a few days/weeks)
Chaper 12 final (in a few days/weeks)

later on, we likely get

Chapter 12 part 2 alpha
Chapter 12 part 2 beta
Chapter 12 part 2 final

Chapter 12 epilogue alpha
Chapter 12 epilogue beta
Chapter 12 epilogue final

Chapter 13 prologue alpha
Chapter 13 prologue beta
Chapter 13 prologue final

And so on.
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Basically one full chapter will now take one full year in a good "year"
So now development for the game slowed by 4 folds??
 
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Ohh, interesting. Lena's backstory is determined by her stats and there's actually three different options how it goes.
*snips*
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Correct me if I'm wrong, but it implies that wits is the default, but is replaced if her lust or charisma is higher. Does lust just have extra priority over charisma, say if both stats were the same but also higher than wits? Lena doing stalkfap of increasingly lewd variety bumps up the likelihood of that background too.
 
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BlandChili said:
Correct me if I'm wrong, but it implies that wits is the default, but is replaced if her lust or charisma is higher. Does lust just have extra priority over charisma, say if both stats were the same but also higher than wits? Lena doing stalkfap of increasingly lewd variety bumps up the likelihood of that background too.
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Yes, that's pretty much correct. It's the easiest for Lena to get the "slut" background based on lust, since even if she didn't sleep with too many people she will level up her lust to match her wits. If she is very restrained she is likely to keep her wits background. And to have charisma beat the other two attributes you'd need to intentionally lose out on some wits/lust level-ups.
 
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Yes, that's pretty much correct. It's the easiest for Lena to get the "slut" background based on lust, since even if she didn't sleep with too many people she will level up her lust to match her wits. If she is very restrained she is likely to keep her wits background. And to have charisma beat the other two attributes you'd need to intentionally lose out on some wits/lust level-ups.
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Kinda sad there isn't an athletic option. :ROFLMAO:
"Ah, I dated a couple of weaklings when I was younger, one time I crushed my partners pelvis while I was riding him, since then I've had trouble with romance...."
 
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