VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Socrambus]

To be fair this update included tons of fixes for errors in the earlier dialogues. Probably took as much time as writing the new stuff, if not more. Even though it's something that'll go pretty much unnoticed.

True but I expected a more comprehensive epilogue tbh. I think it doesn't take into account as much variations as I thought when I read Eva saying it was giving her trouble. For example, it ignores:

• If you fucked Emma before Lena arrives and you end up with the Holly trinity.
• Lena's relationship with Axel for the instagram post as well as Lena's relationship with Cindy for her reaction.
• Lena's relationship with Perry and Wade.
• No reaction to Ian and Emma dating, Perry reacts the same if you just fucked her or if you started a relationship.
• Only a small comment from Emma about the Holly trinity happening.
• No ambivalence on Ian's answer to Gilian, he's either totally over her and blocks her or he's still after her.
• Slutty Holly plays it as if she didn't just fuck Ian minutes after breaking up with Lena even if she and Lena are in "love".

 

[ffive]

Lena's relationship with Axel for the instagram post

I agree in general with rest of the post, but this does get a variant if Lena is present in the scene and able to comment:

            show v12_axelpg1 
//...
            if lena_axel_desire:
                $ flena = "drama"
            else:
                $ flena = "worried"
//...
                p "What an a--{w=0.5}asshole... What is he doing, posting this? It's like he's t--{w=0.5}trying to rub it on Wade's face."
                if seymour_desire == False and v12_ian_lena_breakup == False and lena_axel_desire:
                    $ flena = "mad"
                    l "In everyone's faces."
                    $ flena = "serious"
                elif seymour_desire == False and v12_ian_lena_breakup == False:
                    $ flena = "serious"
                    l "Axel's like that... He likes to boast, always trying to prove something to the world, always wanting to come out on top."
                    $ flena = "sad"

 

[MinkoSvk]

True but I expected a more comprehensive epilogue tbh

i think after the shopping Lena & Emma , everyone also expected some action between them.

 

[BlandChili]

i think after the shopping Lena & Emma , everyone also expected some action between them.

I grabbed that fat latina ass in vain!

 

[Nifferman]

Billy and Jeremy, i presume.

Nope the dick is a shade darker than Jeremy's. But is kinda similar too Marcel

 

[Nifferman]

Seems like Axel and some random black guy, if Axel got his claws deep in her, he's probably testing how deep.

Outta Alex's character, man . If u have read the story u will know that Alex is a possessive narcissistic and the only 3some he's gonna have is a ffm

 

[Xupuzulla]

True but I expected a more comprehensive epilogue tbh. I think it doesn't take into account as much variations as I thought when I read Eva saying it was giving her trouble. For example, it ignores:

• If you fucked Emma before Lena arrives and you end up with the Holly trinity.
• Lena's relationship with Axel for the instagram post as well as Lena's relationship with Cindy for her reaction.
• Lena's relationship with Perry and Wade.
• No reaction to Ian and Emma dating, Perry reacts the same if you just fucked her or if you started a relationship.
• Only a small comment from Emma about the Holly trinity happening.
• No ambivalence on Ian's answer to Gilian, he's either totally over her and blocks her or he's still after her.
• Slutty Holly plays it as if she didn't just fuck Ian minutes after breaking up with Lena even if she and Lena are in "love".

I guess the follow up to the Wade and Perry situations with Lena are going to come with chapter 13 wich is going to be mostly about her.
The whole Gillian thing is kinda weird to me,EK went all in this chapter about it.

 

[varpep]

Presumably they fuck if Ian doesn't bother to help out Wade but doesn't tap Cindy himself either.

On a lot of my playthroughs where Ian get's with Cindy, I never got this outcome. Maybe because even while sleeping with Cindy I still try to make them amicably break up. So I'm guessing it just has to do with the wade_cindy_rel variable.

 

[Ray_D]

Well that epilogue was ...... acceptable I guess, considering it's eva kiss.

 

[BlandChili]

On a lot of my playthroughs where Ian get's with Cindy, I never got this outcome. Maybe because even while sleeping with Cindy I still try to make them amicably break up. So I'm guessing it just has to do with the wade_cindy_rel variable.

Like the others said, what matters to prevent it when Cindy is with him you need the version of Cindy's relationship with Ian that says 2. I don't know if any other actions besides the wits one when talking to her gives you that version.

 

[LaVinotinto]

Can it ever happen if Ian is not currently dating Cindy?

I played IanxHolly love route, helping Wade with Cindy and she never sends those pics, I assume you must let Axel touch her butt in the photoshoot as one of those requirements.

 

[BlandChili]

I played IanxHolly love route, helping Wade with Cindy and she never sends those pics, I assume you must let Axel touch her butt in the photoshoot as one of those requirements.

Did Wade break up with Cindy in your epilogue playthrough?

 

[ffive]

I played IanxHolly love route, helping Wade with Cindy and she never sends those pics, I assume you must let Axel touch her butt in the photoshoot as one of those requirements.

For the pictures scene to trigger Cindy and Wade must be on poor terms. If you have Ian try his hardest to get them back together (and then it's Wade who decides he should let Cindy go) then you won't get it.

 

[BlandChili]

For the pictures scene to trigger Cindy and Wade must be on poor terms. If you have Ian try his hardest to get them back together (and then it's Wade who decides he should let Cindy go) then you won't get it.

I see the grand doors to Lena/Cindy opening. I see the light inside, it is so close!

 

[Ray_D]

Well this has nothing to do with the epilogue of episode 12, but as I don't read the guide I didn't know that you could fight again against robert. I have replayed this AVN several times and yesterday I only found out that you can do that.


I'm not going to lie to you guys, it was pretty worth it.

 

[Gicoo]

I didn't know that you could fight again against robert.

How could you miss that? All you had to do was let him date Lena and... oh.

 

[Ray_D]

How could you miss that? All you had to do was let him date Lena and... oh.

yes, i didn't know, as i always ignored robert using lena i never knew. Until I decided to read the guide and then I had a reason to do it and it was worth it.




Robert is not only bad in bed, he's also bad at fighting.

 

[Roderick2]

what a lame of epilogue... totally skippable. Shame on you, Eva.

 

[fatpussy123]

I see the grand doors to Lena/Cindy opening. I see the light inside, it is so close!

I think a threesome with Lena, Cindy, and Axel is definitely a possibility. Remains to be seen if there will ever be a solo Lena x Cindy route, I doubt it though.

 

[BlandChili]

I think a threesome with Lena, Cindy, and Axel is definitely a possibility. Remains to be seen if there will ever be a solo Lena x Cindy route, I doubt it though.

You stop this heresy this instant!