VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[BlandChili]

I wonder if Seymour is based on someone in Eva's family, her daddio perhaps

His appearance is based on a Spanish politician.

 

[Xupuzulla]

She even made Seymour fit,this update is something else

 

[JoJoPool]

Almost. Right now looking for a nice cliff to jump off of.

come on man, it was nice having you back after such a long time, stick around a bit longer, no homo

 

[varpep]

Unpopular opinion here. I think Eva is a bit heavy handed with the cameos and member berries. It is also contributing to slowing down development of the game. The cameos are actively eating up development time for other paths. It would have been okay if the just made an appearance and maybe a quick fuck before they fucked off. But it does not seem Eva is going with that approach. When it was just Jess and Mark, it could be overlooked but now many more characters are being re-introduced. And frankly their paths feel tacked on and a bit under-cooked compared to the other paths. Eva needs to be more conservative with the cameos and their screen time and roles in the story in favor of developing the main paths. But that's just my opinion.

 

[MADMESS]

Fisrt day he talked about Nietzsche, second day he talked about the art, then the third day, he wanted to see my pussy.

 

[PickerLewd]

Evakiss went for the most boring option ever,him being a pimp was more interesting than this pretty much love path with toys...

Any of these perversions, Andrea999999's ideas, or Housewife's ideas are immediately banned from Patreon, so they won't happen .

 

[Flowing Thought]

Even as a fan of the Seymour stuff, this update didn't really do it. Way too short. I agree with the cameos becoming too big a thing as well. I got to the end and could only think that was it?

 

[Ray_D]

Evakiss loves Seymour way too much.
Im also curious about the patreons reactions,they are ass kissers most of the time so i doubt shes getting shit from them.

Maybe Seymour reminds her of that sugar daddy she had in her younger years..

 

[Skylark21]

For a 'Prologue' to have a meager 10-15 mins for 3 months of work, on a route that likely 1-2% will play... This doesn't bode well for the future of this game.

3 months of work? More like 1-2 month, Eva only started working on chapter 13 prologue(Seymour trip) like at the end of the August while simultaneously working on Chapter 12 Epilogue. While work on Seymour trip was almost done by October start, it only got delayed because of the colorist. Not to forget she's also working on follow up update alongside it.
Although update is short, saying it took 3 months for 10-15 min of content is wild exaggeration.

 

[fatpussy123]

Finally played the update and all I have to say...
Seymour if sex toys didnt exist:

 

[_Zebra_]

Spoiler: Some toughs on the latest update

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[desmosome]

Spoiler: Some toughs on the latest update

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Wat. Is this real? Seymour says to turn him into a simp? Lol.

 

[SerHawkes]

Unpopular opinion here. I think Eva is a bit heavy handed with the cameos and member berries. It is also contributing to slowing down development of the game. The cameos are actively eating up development time for other paths. It would have been okay if the just made an appearance and maybe a quick fuck before they fucked off. But it does not seem Eva is going with that approach. When it was just Jess and Mark, it could be overlooked but now many more characters are being re-introduced. And frankly their paths feel tacked on and a bit under-cooked compared to the other paths. Eva needs to be more conservative with the cameos and their screen time and roles in the story in favor of developing the main paths. But that's just my opinion.

The cameos of late have gone way over the top. Like Jess is entirely fine and works fine for the story. But to add Jack out of left field and make him a possible romance for Lena? Arthur, who should be in a grave by now? Landwhale for whatever fuck? And the biggest kicker is that with Nat, our lovely sharing be caring gal from GGGB? Oh yeah, Ian will have no chance to possibly hook up with her. But Lena? Oh yeah, she can fuck everyone more or less.

 

[_Zebra_]

Unpopular opinion here. I think Eva is a bit heavy handed with the cameos and member berries. It is also contributing to slowing down development of the game. The cameos are actively eating up development time for other paths. It would have been okay if the just made an appearance and maybe a quick fuck before they fucked off. But it does not seem Eva is going with that approach. When it was just Jess and Mark, it could be overlooked but now many more characters are being re-introduced. And frankly their paths feel tacked on and a bit under-cooked compared to the other paths. Eva needs to be more conservative with the cameos and their screen time and roles in the story in favor of developing the main paths. But that's just my opinion.

I don't think it's an unpopular opinion. Its like watching a new Star Wars or Marvel show/movie. Let's throw Yoda in there for 30 seconds. The fans will go

Wait a minute, I know that guy (or gal). It makes no sense why Lena would flirt with Arthur after the photo-shoot (even when she is in a relationship) or even fall for Jack so fast.

 

[BlandChili]

Jack is a hunk, fucking him makes sense enough if you don't put any more thought into it than pleasure alone.

 

[_Zebra_]

Wat. Is this real? Seymour says to turn him into a simp? Lol.

I haven't played the update because i know it's gonna suck ass but did he seriously say turn me into a simp ??!!
so he's just a rich stan.... that's hilarious

Saymour doesn't actually say that he wants to be a simp, that was just me being creative. I've added the actual lines in the original comment. Maybe I went to far, but that is how I read it after he started to say that he wants to give her this and that + Lena wanting to

"He was the remedy to all my ailments and worries. He would shield me and elevate me to any height I desired, showering me in gold."
"In return, I would give him whatever he desired of me."
"I would conquer his body and heart... just as he had done with mine.""

 

[Ray_D]

Finally played the update and all I have to say...
Seymour if sex toys didnt exist:
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Make baluart great again.

 

[JoJoPool]

Saymour doesn't actually say that he wants to be a simp, that was just me being creative. I've added the actual lines in the original comment. Maybe I went to far, but that is how I read it after he started to say that he wants to give her this and that + Lena wanting to

"He was the remedy to all my ailments and worries. He would shield me and elevate me to any height I desired, showering me in gold."
"In return, I would give him whatever he desired of me."
"I would conquer his body and heart... just as he had done with mine.""

lol yeah i realized that, maybe it's just me but everything seymour says is pure cringe
like i said imo he's like a rich version of stan

 

[Geigi]

For a 'Prologue' to have a meager 10-15 mins for 3 months of work, on a route that likely 1-2% will play... This doesn't bode well for the future of this game.

Yes, but I'm sure that the other versions of the chapter will be longer/have more content. Prologue as introduction is usually short.

 

[yuvce]

I can't decide which image describes this update better...