VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Éama]

I think the ship has sailed with dom Minerva. EK had the perfect chance to build off the scene where she makes Ian go down on her and he can agree or dom her by making her blow him. It didn't escalate from there and with femdom being middling on the polls I don't see EK adding it for Minerva. Besides Lena, the only character I can still see domming Ian is Ivy, she can already make Ian submit in the ring, tease him with feet, and her whole thing till now has been stringing Jeremy along (kinda like Lena does to Ian in the no sex route). So I could see her having it so that Ian can dom her if he's chad and wins wrestling and if not Ivy domming loser Ian.

Might be an unpopular opinion but I was specifically impressed with the way the Minerva romance has been handled so far. Eva more often than not tends to become excessive when she develops kinky relationships and I fully expected that Minerva would become either a broken husk or a cliche domina.
When their relationship turned out to be more nuanced and showed signs that Minerva was longing for a love long lost, I felt that was deeply relatable and made her a much more complex character. And I would love to see a sensual dominant route for her, because I think she is way too responsible and adult to leave her like this.

 

[Dessolos]

Lena is the MC so I don't count her

okay true then yeah Holly is the best girl

 

[bonerland]

Yup, Yuri straight up tells Jeremy that he's gonna get lit up by an experienced grappler and lo behold Wen shows us by slamming Jeremy to the ground. . Calling grappling gay is a stereotype, people should know this by now.

It's more like it's to get under the skin of some people who are meatheads, for lack of a better term. It works too. They should just do what wrestling fans have done and lean into it. Any wrestling fan will tell you it was invented in 600 BC when Thaddus and and Biggoumous couldn't agree on who was going to be the bottom that night.

 

[bonerland]

What I would like to happen: Ian and Ivy hit it off, have a genuine connection, and things escalate from there, Ivy dealing with the turmoil of having feeling for someone in a long time, and Ian exploring her wild side with her, but with romance.

What is probably going to happen: Ivy fucks Ian for self-interested reasons, like proving to Lena he's no good or something, or some dumb cuck stuff where Ian will watch/hear about how she fucks other guys.

The most likely course is going to be she will be one of a Chad Ian's freaks if his Chad levels are high enough, a possible romantic option for an Ian who is highly self-assured but not a total manwhore, and if their is any cucking involved, it will be a case where Ian cheats on Lena and Ivy finds out about it, so she tricks him into coming over only to trap him and fuck someone else (probably Jeremy) instead. The fatalist approach to everything is pointless.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Everyone is Holly fan, she's best girl.

Oh i already knew this is the Holly fanclub thread,dont worry

 

[SerHawkes]

Ivy is clearly the best girl. Sad thing is EK has zero idea how to properly use her or is too retarded to bother actually using her accordingly.
Holly, naturally, second best girl. Wholesome gal.
Emma a solid third.
Allison, Cherry, Cinders, Louise, Minerva are a distant 100.

 

[yuvce]

Oh i already knew this is the Holly fanclub thread,dont worry

And yet you're lingering about here, speaking to "the Holly fanclub". Desperately trying to cope with the fact that your bitch Alison has like what? 2? 3 fans? Stay humble, eh?

 

[Zara Scarlet]

How does a successful writing career make cocks cum?
Holly feels like a boy sometimes. Tried her route once, but I guess I'm not gay enough.

It makes Ian cum. I'm sure that's the only thing that matters to Holly or Ian himself. The Ian that falls for Holly, is a different guy from the Ian that falls for Lena, Cindy or Alison. Different choices make different people.

 

[Erectosaurus]

I don’t know, something about Alison always felt off to me. Can’t place exactly what though.

 

[SerHawkes]

I don’t know, something about Alison always felt off to me. Can’t place exactly what though.

She will pull a AL, clearly.

 

[Zara Scarlet]

You ask what Holly brings to the table and they tell you her job
Fuck even Minerva is ahead of her in terms of choices,at least the MILF knows how to suck a dick

Ian's passion is writing, just like Holly. So why wouldn't that be a key factor? The same thing applies with Lena, where her love of music, plays a big role in making Ian fall for her. Not everything is about sex. Eva has built characters who are larger than just their sex lives. So to ignore those other factors, and just make everything about sexual attraction, is a bit silly.

 

[varpep]

And yet you're lingering about here, speaking to "the Holly fanclub". Desperately trying to cope with the fact that your bitch Alison has like what? 2? 3 fans? Stay humble, eh?

Dude don't jinx Holly the same way Haaland jinxed City lol. Imagine after saying that Holly devolves into a crack whore, selling ass for crack on the Baluart streets

 

[yuvce]

Dude don't jinx Holly the same way Haaland jinxed City lol. Imagine after saying that Holly devolves into a crack whore, selling ass for crack on the Baluart streets

Holly is immune to such jinxes.

 

[Blurpee69]

And yet you're lingering about here, speaking to "the Holly fanclub". Desperately trying to cope with the fact that your bitch Alison has like what? 2? 3 fans? Stay humble, eh?

Hi, it's me, one of those other three Allison fans. I love Holly too, Xupuzulla is just bitter, jaded, and probably in need of a hug.

 

[Poromies]

This. Stan's fans are self inserting. What you can't experience in life, you live through books, movies and games, which is a bitter and sad reality for some.

Could be worse, if you're middle-aged family man, your self-insert could be Ashley's dad instead. Better hang on to that day job at least.

 

[Poromies]

Holly, Emma, and Allison are all supposed to have those "plumper" body types. They're just very Hollywood plump; which is to say, not very. Now, bring back muscle mommy Emma!

Holly is/was plump only on not-anorectic scale. Sure, she had no muscles to speak of, but I must have missed the part with her big butt taking half of the screen.. Only overweight (female) character we've got is the obligatory fridge with legs.

Sure she's a gray mousy type character but since this is pr0n, we can deflower her into a slut easily enough, easily overcoming a lifetime of repression by a bible-thumping family.

 

[ffive]

Holly is/was plump only on not-anorectic scale. Sure, she had no muscles to speak of, but I must have missed the part with her big butt taking half of the screen..

There's mentions in the early part of the game from few characters who mention that Holly has some extra body fat. It's main reason Ivy recommends her to join them in her pole dancing classes, and why Holly cuts down on cakes in Molly&Ed's cafe.

Of course, since it's porn game then it doesn't actually show Holly being overweight. It's the same thing like with "Hollywood homely" girls in the movies looking better than 90% of women you meet in rl.

 

[SerHawkes]

There's mentions in the early part of the game from few characters who mention that Holly has some extra body fat. It's main reason Ivy recommends her to join them in her pole dancing classes, and why Holly cuts down on cakes in Molly&Ed's cafe.

Of course, since it's porn game then it doesn't actually show Holly being overweight. It's the same thing like with "Hollywood homely" girls in the movies looking better than 90% of women you meet in rl.

The extra body fat wasn't that noticable to begin with. However, having Holly stick with the pole dancing not only does wonders for her figure but also her confidence as well.

 

[NewSeal]

When ORS ends, do we think the next game will take place in St. Boy?
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We'll have to wait until 2032 to find out.

 

[varpep]

We'll have to wait until 2032 to find out.

You're quite optimistic. I like it!