VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

If not death, atleast there should be genuine option where Ian passout by Ivys boobs.

Logically it should happen if the player just waits for the timer to run out, without taking any action.

 

[BlandChili]

Let Ivy and Mike have each other. Lena could comfort Mike's gf, show her how to sex.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Mike has his merits, but he should learn to control those anger issues..
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is his greatest weakness.

Look at the main man Axel pushing that poser out of the way
Cindy future husband is the real deal.

 

[Marley300]

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!

I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.

 

[Lord Bradley]

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!

I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.

Oh no, Robert preview after the shitstorm about him we just had in this thread.... Grab your popcorn fellas!

There could be Lena x Robert x Holly threesome.

 

[SearingFive]

Oh hell naw... Robert! Time to stone him in the thread. Let the stoning commence!

 

[fatpussy123]

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.

Hope Eva recovers soon and doesn't overdo things.

On a more positive note. Lots of talk of unexpected scenes. To me that means new pairings. Maybe Lena x Wade, Lena x Billy? Or maybe the first MMF Lena threesome?

 

[Gicoo]

Hope Eva recovers soon and doesn't overdo things.

On a more positive note. Lots of talk of unexpected scenes. To me that means new pairings. Maybe Lena x Wade, Lena x Billy? Or maybe the first MMF Lena threesome?

Wade was being suggested in chapter 12, so neither he nor the promised threesome with him, Lena and Ian should be unexpected.

Billy is a possibility, I'm not sure how you lead Lena to a scene with him without making it rushed. I imagine he would make a move on her at the event for proper timing, not before that.

The most likely unexpected character would be a new one, rather a cameo. Hope this is not the case - flesh out the current cast, don't rely on GGGB for memberberries, Eva.

Second most unlikely would be a tertiary character like John or Eli.

If I had a saying in it, it would be Gillian once Lena visits Mike. Could be rushed as well, but if Gillian turns out to be submissive and sort of fine with Mike fucking other women like Ivy and Lena, he could ask for a threesome. I say sort of, because she was contacting Ian twice, so she may consider leaving Mike and is already looking for other options.

 

[Xupuzulla]

This woman is taking the piss at this point,she knows even her patreons dislike Robert

 

[fatpussy123]

If I had a saying in it, it would be Gillian once Lena visits Mike. Could be rushed as well, but if Gillian turns out to be submissive and sort of fine with Mike fucking other women like Ivy and Lena, he could ask for a threesome. I say sort of, because she was contacting Ian twice, so she may consider leaving Mike and is already looking for other options.

Mmmh a redhead submissive who's boyfriend is sleeping around, who has a threesome with Lena + said boyfriend, and is also a cheater. Gillian truly is the second coming of Louise.

 

[Geigi]

Mmmh a redhead submissive who's boyfriend is sleeping around, who has a threesome with Lena + said boyfriend, and is also a cheater. Gillian truly is the second coming of Louise.

Fulfilling cuckquean kink wish for those who wanted to see it.

 

[Xupuzulla]

A scene no one really expects at this point but wish to have is Lena with Ed
Also Lena doing something with Perry if you are in that path.

 

[Gicoo]

A scene no one really expects at this point but wish to have is Lena with Ed
Also Lena doing something with Perry if you are in that path.

If Ed gets content, Eva got desperate and inconsistent, since he was explicitly droped. If he had content, it would make much more sense to have it start at the beginning of the game. It doesn't make sense for him to make a move on Lena now, since the scenes building it up were removed and not developed.

Perry is a good candidate. If he didn't get together with Emma, he is very likely in a position which can lead to him and Lena discussing this. Lena could cheer him up or may have issues with her current boyfriends as well. Based Lena would take him and Emma. My dream Lena would cuck Emma and steal Perry from her just for the power trip, maybe to put her in her place if Lena has assimilated Seymours philosophy.

 

[JoJoPool]

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.

I think it's safe to say this is the update of the most hated characters, let's throw in PerryxIvy in there and enjoy the rage storm because why not at this point.
On a side note what's up with that Lena face, looks AI

 

[Nifferman]

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Hello everyone,

I've been offline for a while since I've been dealing with a bad case of pneumonia. The good thing about this situation is that I’ve been stuck at home with not much to do but work; the bad thing is that I’ve had a fever and pleuritis, so I haven’t been able to focus on writing. This week, I’ve focused on editing and finishing the illustrations I’ve received, as well as starting (and even completing) a few for the next update. I also drew a scene I’ve wanted to include for a while, which will appear in the Beta or Full version of this part of the chapter.

I’m feeling better now, and for the past couple of days, I’ve been able to write again, so I’ll keep pushing forward to finish the remaining 5 or 6 scenes as soon as possible.

What scenes or character pairings would you like or expect to see in this chapter? I think I already know which one is the least expected, but it still needed to be included!
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I have a couple surprises and a scene you might not be expecting, and I can't wait to share them with you.

Hey, at least the delay is not cuz of a funeral this time

 

[Chemish]

Robert jump scare lol

 

[varpep]

Please can someone tell me what Robert's purpose in the story is? Other than being a universal punching bag. Meanwhile Ed content was cut. Eva might lowkey have a crush on Robert cause I don't see why this man keeps getting scenes

 

[Fellas]

it's likely that gillian already knows about mike's infidelity and that's why she started looking for ian again. The only reason why gillian won't leave mike is because she doesn't want to face the fact that she cheated on ian and now someone else is doing to her what she did to ian.

Dare I say their breakup is inevitable? In one of Ian's dreams Gillian told him one of the reason she left him was because of how she wanted a career abroad and that Ian couldn't follow her. And now she's back in town and she could be mad about it.

 

[SearingFive]

Please can someone tell me what Robert's purpose in the story is? Other than being a universal punching bag. Meanwhile Ed content was cut. Eva might lowkey have a crush on Robert cause I don't see why this man keeps getting scenes

Ironically, Robert has more scenes than Mike and Axel. That says a lot about Eva's priorities.

Dare I say their breakup is inevitable? In one of Ian's dreams Gillian told him one of the reason she left him was because of how she wanted a career abroad and that Ian couldn't follow her. And now she's back in town and she could be mad about it.

That's a pretty shitty excuse on Gillian's behalf. If it were to be true later down the line then fuck that girl, she deserves that cheater 'Mike'.

I think it's safe to say this is the update of the most hated characters, let's throw in PerryxIvy in there and enjoy the rage storm because why not at this point.
On a side note what's up with that Lena face, looks AI

It does look like AI, also what happened to her blue eyes? Looks grey here.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Please can someone tell me what Robert's purpose in the story is? Other than being a universal punching bag. Meanwhile Ed content was cut. Eva might lowkey have a crush on Robert cause I don't see why this man keeps getting scenes

Same as Madame Rose in another popular game, I think. To make the audience wonder why the fuck those characters needed.