VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[jollyjoker27]

I honestly can't with people not noticing its alpha and then judging the whole goddamn with long freaking paragraphs. I don't know if its actually that or people who love a specific genre of porn trying to find flaws just to shit on the game. Its part of a chapter and in that its an alpha. Some are mad that there is no specific content, others are mad that there is too much porn content. Choose one ffs.

Doesn´t matter if it´s alpha or final. It´s the pace and quality that´s now a far cry from what the standard was before, writing wise, which Eva herself set and was aspiring to achieve. It´s not like we demanded it, we just got used to it. It´s just increasingly noticeable now. Final would have to have at least twice the amount of dialogue lines as the alpha to reach that previous level, which is not going to happen....

 

[Puggy Aiden]

Why?
I think the update is very good,that Holly scene made my balls tingle.
I think some people here need to realize this game inst for them anymore.

Bluds smoking the copium

 

[albul]

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He is licking his mistress lick a good cuck

Fellas, is it cuck to eat out your girlfriend?

 

[Blurpee69]

It's Alpha version, it's supposed to be rough and messy, I dunno why some people here are so surprised about that.
First ask to leak an unfinished version which is solely meant for higher tier patrons, thn bitch and cry about why it looks so unfinished when they do get it. smh

So my problem with this update, is I see a lot of potential in it, but it feels a sloppier and more rushed than I would normally expect. Perhaps I'm taking to much time to adjust to Eva's new and faster work schedule. But previous alpha releases didn't feel this messy to me. A little more dialogue, or internal monologuing to help bridge some of the scenes together and honestly I don't think it's a terrible update; aside from slutty Holly being birthed completely away from Lena.

Fellas, is it cuck to eat out your girlfriend?

No, but this scene does come directly after a short monologue from Lena about how she has Ian wrapped around her finger, which only happens on the cuck route.

 

[desmosome]

I mean, the guy is literally named John.

Who the fuck is John again?

 

[ExtremeLips]

We can all agree the Holly scene was the highlight. I guess we'll need a lot more Holly moving forward

 

[JoeHiggins1949]

Even though I originally wanted the game to be soley female protagonist like GGGB, I have, as the game has developed, become interested in Ian. I have 30 playthroughs involving various paths for the two main characters. I was rather disappointed to see that there was no new content for Ian except the few scenes in which he was part of Lena's perspective. Hopefully the next update will focus on Ian's POV.

 

[Geigi]

Fellas, is it cuck to eat out your girlfriend?

There was this user who said that men weren't born to be submissives(to get on their knees), only women. Meaning, it's a woman's duty to pleasure a man, not vice versa. He said that men should bow down only to a God. Yes, you guessed it right, that user was banned.

 

[albul]

No, but this scene does come directly after a short monologue from Lena about how she has Ian wrapped around her finger, which only happens on the cuck route.

That is a repurposed scene that happens on non-cuck route, so I don't know what you are talking about.

 

[Sombramain22]

There was this user who said that men weren't born to be submissives(to get on their knees), only women. Meaning, it's a woman's duty to pleasure a man, not vice versa. He said that men should bow only to a God. Yes, you guessed it right, that user was banned.

lol wtf this is like when i was and high school and you hade mecho boys saying its gay for men to cry lol what a losser

 

[VeryShamelessLarry]

Does anyone know if there will be a storyline with Lena's mom? That is, will Ian ever have a sexy time with her?

 

[Tierra_Azul]

Holy fuck it's like holly got down syndrome in that pic

I was going to suggest Bella Ramsey, but Downs Syndrom works just aswell.

 

[Puggy Aiden]

I honestly can't with people not noticing its alpha and then judging the whole goddamn with long freaking paragraphs. I don't know if its actually that or people who love a specific genre of porn trying to find flaws just to shit on the game. Its part of a chapter and in that its an alpha. Some are mad that there is no specific content, others are mad that there is too much porn content. Choose one ffs.

The alpha version usually has the full content with some bugs and spelling error, which gets fixed in the beta. The full version get an extra scene or two and nothing much. And people have choose, it's to get content on LI that the game has already build up, not the world famous "John", not more content on Robert. Like I don't know a single human being who likes Robert. And except for Eva's Patreon, nobody really likes Stan either.

 

[SalineSolution]

I haven't looked back on this game in years. Does Lena ever get the chance to actually hook up with the older guy that runs the diner or whatever?

 

[Frankbob]

Fellas, is it cuck to eat out your girlfriend?

Only if shes been fucking other guys.......

 

[Wolbachia]

Finally Stan Content

 

[ExtremeLips]

Stupid slutty Ivy couldn't resist the dick and stopped filming

 

[Saman78]

Am I the only one who can't skip the texts already on when switching to this new update?

 

[GifMeMore1987]

I haven't looked back on this game in years. Does Lena ever get the chance to actually hook up with the older guy that runs the diner or whatever?

Nope (his name is Ed).

 

[Xupuzulla]

Stupid slutty Ivy couldn't resist the dick and stopped filming

BBC too strong,Ivy never had a chance