VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Hungover00]

Am I missing something? I thought the only ones moving to the new office were Ian and Clark?

You are correct. Holly would have to visit for there to be scenes, and then Ian would have to spy on Holly and Clark, or we could get pics/video after the fact through Ivy.

Or maybe Ian and Clark would double team Holly, if it's slutty Holly but you hooked up with her at the beach house.

 

[Geigi]

Which is odd. Feels like it may have started as a translation issue, and just stuck around.

Probably, erotic writing is prominent in otome games, hence lewd is used a lot. Explicit dirty talk is mostly used in western games. I rarely saw well written sex scenes in Japanese games, but well written sex scenes are more prominent in some smut books and fanfiction. I prefer erotic detailed writing, but explicit dirty talk can be cringe if it's badly written.

 

[Hungover00]

Probably, but erotic writing is prominent in otome games, hence lewd is used a lot. Explicit dirty talk is mostly used in western games. I rarely saw well written sex scenes in Japanese games, but well written sex scenes are more prominent in some smut books and fanfiction. I prefer erotic detailed writing, but explicit dirty talk can be cringe if it's badly written.

Lewd is a bit archaic in normal conversational English, which is why I figured it was a translation issue, and Japan makes sense as the source.

Pervert seems to be a bit over used, but that could be explained by a lot of things. I would have expected more 'creep' name calling to break up the oft-repeated perv call outs.

 

[BlandChili]

It would be odd for Holly to leave her work place just to go over to Ian's and Clark's workplace just to bang them. With Minerva, it was different because both she and Ian worked in the same place. And it was easier to sneak in romps between work hours. With Holly, it's gonna be a bit different. It would be easier for Holly to go to their just places after work hours.

Not for slut Holly I wouldn't say, if we go by the presumption discussed between me and fp123. She'd be going there to converse with her boyfriend on the other routes!

 

[Hungover00]

I hope the slut Holly path doesn't eclipse all the other Hollys. Clark is probably neck and neck with Robert as a fuck interest. It's just (mildly?) gross.

But that's what happens when you leave your toys around for Ivy to pick up.

 

[ffive]

Which is odd. Feels like it may have started as a translation issue, and just stuck around.

I think it's used simply because it's a funny/light way to point out someone is being a pervert in public space, or allude to such content, without negative and/or heavy connotations attached to other terms.

 

[Geigi]

I think it's used simply because it's a funny/light way to point out someone is being a pervert in public space, or allude to such content, without negative and/or heavy connotations attached to other terms.

Yeah, like: "He talked to me lewdly", or "Why are you looking at me like that?", and he asks: "How"? then she answers: "Well, like in a lewd way".

 

[BlandChili]

Yeah, like: "He talked to me lewdly", or "Why are you looking at me like that?", and he asks: "How"? then she answers: "Well, like in a lewd way".

"My tits are down here you perv, stop locking eyes with me in that lewd way! "

 

[Eleanorduval]

Chapter 13.3 status report (7)
New
Just now
Finishing up the assembly of the chapter is taking a bit longer than expected. Fatigue and complexity have slowed me down a little, but I’m almost there! This week, I’ll be wrapping up the final text edits and polishing a few fragments, but all the main scenes are already done. The script has already surpassed the length of Chapter 13.2, and there are a total of six lewd scenes, plus a seventh that I’ll be adding after the Alpha version is released.
I’m also finalizing the chapter’s artwork, and I should be receiving the last illustrations from the colorist this week. With that, I’m hoping to have everything ready for playtesting by the end of the week.

seem bad new for team axel lol

 

[Nifferman]

I've been thinking of what Eva is gonna do with slutty Holly on the throuple path. Will she close her off entirely from the throuple? Or she's just going to patch the gloryhole scene and make slutty Holly not go? I kinda thought of a third option that would fit one of my current playthroughs.

I have a playthrough aptly named, "The slutty throuple". In this playthrough, slooty Lena and slooty Ian are FWB and are both fucking everyone available. They then decide to form a throuple with a Lena dominant slutty Holly. Despite this, Lena can still fuck Stan in the next chapter with no consequences or reflection. Ian and Lena still talk about the MMF threesome without Holly. Holly still goes to the glory hole. This is most likely a bug but it got me thinking, what if Eva were to lean into this. Like all three culprits where in an open relationship and all slutting around. That'd be something.

Alas what I think will happen is Eva would probably close off slutty Holly from the throuple or just patch the Stan and Glory Holly scene.

Slutty holly throuple path is a bug.

 

[Erectosaurus]

Wonder how many people are going to have to rollback to a previous save on their Cindy runs because they picked the wrong dialogue choice during Ian and Cindy’s argument and ended up getting cucked by Axel

 

[varpep]

Wonder how many people are going to have to rollback to a previous save on their Cindy runs because they picked the wrong dialogue choice during Ian and Cindy’s argument and ended up getting cucked by Axel

I reckon a lot of them lol. Some people though are going to relish the cucking. Not naming names

 

[Stilbruch]

seem bad news for team axel lol

Just you wait, he will smash through the window and deepthroat them both.

 

[LaVinotinto]

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Strange decission to use a recycled image as promotion.

You know what would be better than recycled images? Videos with recycled images.

 

[dolfe67]

Wonder how many people are going to have to rollback to a previous save on their Cindy runs because they picked the wrong dialogue choice during Ian and Cindy’s argument and ended up getting cucked by Axel

That choice had the heart option though, not the sad face (cuck) emote

 

[MagicMan753]

Wonder how many people are going to have to rollback to a previous save on their Cindy runs because they picked the wrong dialogue choice during Ian and Cindy’s argument and ended up getting cucked by Axel

I really doubt that one choice will lead to cucking, people are blowing that choice out of proportion.

 

[Eleanorduval]

I really doubt that one choice will lead to cucking, people are blowing that choice out of proportion.

totaly agree with u

 

[2016er]

To each their own. I personally find test footage / images / scripts fascinating because we rarely get glimpses into the creative processes of film or game making. In this case it's an insight into what EK was thinking about and raises questions. Whose dicks are those? Is EK seriously considering a BBC route for Cindy? Who's phone are we looking at: Ian's? Wade's? Cindy's? What event was this meant for? Etc.




I can't speak for Eva, but I giggle thinking about all the fans that unironically would have gotten upset at the idea of Cindy cheating on Ian. Knowing full well Ian deserves it because Wade is a good dude, just in a bad place mentally, and doesn't deserve it.

But what led to "Cindy with BBC" discussion at the first place?

 

[Nifferman]

But what led to "Cindy with BBC" discussion at the first place?

There was an unused bbc x Cindy photo in game

 

[BlandChili]

But what led to "Cindy with BBC" discussion at the first place?

This did.