VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

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SerHawkes

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SearingFive said:
Ian is not going to fight Jeremy in the tournament, they are in a different weight division bracket. It will probably be Mike or some rando like we got in the first round.
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Maybe. Though many are wanting the fight to happen so it's possible. Much like Jeremy waking up naked in a field, with Ian there sitting on a rock, recounting to Jeremy how Jasmin made Jeremy her bitch for the night. Still a chance.
 
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I thought the update was solid. Cindy's different paths were nuanced and well-written, and Minerva's scene was great because it finally pushed her story forward, making her feel like a 'proper' love interest for Ian. But I liked the most how the dev wrote Louise's scene. It was the highlight of the update for me since it elevated an annoying character, and the buildup to it over the last couple of chapters was very well done as well.
 
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SearingFive

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SerHawkes said:
Maybe. Though many are wanting the fight to happen so it's possible. Much like Jeremy waking up naked in a field, with Ian there sitting on a rock, recounting to Jeremy how Jasmin made Jeremy her bitch for the night. Still a chance.
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Well sadly we are not going to get a tournament fight with Jeremy, once the bracket and weigh ins are done, it's locked. Street fight? Sure.
 
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MagicMan753 said:
I wish the louise Ian path started sooner.
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A lot of things could have happened sooner. Trouble is Ek has major skill issues in handling her own work, more so giving her patrons what they want over her own true desire to write her own story. And because of that, this "story" is so muddled and mired with completely bullshit it's starks in contrast to EKs own claims that she didn't want to turn this game into another GGGB. Yet she has done so.
 
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bauman said:
But I liked the most how the dev wrote Louise's scene. It was the highlight of the update for me since it elevated an annoying character, and the buildup to it over the last couple of chapters was very well done as well.
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What did you liked about it? It was fairly generic. They meet, they fuck. No explanation why they are interested in each other. Louise is still the most rushed love interest on Ians side.
 
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fatpussy123 said:
Might be the other way around now. Jeremy is going on the Billy trip with Ivy and Lena. Ian is going to have to wait till after the trip to see Ivy again.
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JEREMY IS GOING TO TAP IVY ASS BEFORE IAN LIKE I PREDICTED HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHHAHA this is hilarious,i never saw a dev shit on a popular female character like this before:KEK:
 
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Why would it be an outrage if Jeremy fucked Ivy before Ian? He was into her first and earlier. He also fucked Louise earlier and Axel fucked Lena and Cherry first, while Wade fucked Cindy first. Ian is not the only dick in town with a monopol on every girl.

The main issue is that Ivy content dragged on too long with too little substance. I don't mind a slow burn and Ivy not falling for Ian in like chapter 3. Other girls like Holly or Cindy also took their time and it was well done. I would rewrite Ivys birthday in chapter 10 so that Ian can also be controlled and choose which girl he can end the night. Including Ivy as a birthday present. Also, Lena only being able to end up with Ivy there and dismissing every other guy sucks as well.
 
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The issue with Louise is not the character itself, but how both MCs disregard her and hardly see her more than just a fuckdoll. Lena always pushes her away because Louise got too clingy, and Ian is pretty smug about her from the get-go. Louise has a bit of the Robert treatment in how she isn't taking seriously, is usually presented in a bad light and ends up in unlucky situations.
 
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Nifferman said:
Different weight class buddy. Ian is a FW or a WW whereas Jeremy is a MW or a LHW. And Jeremy is always cool with Ian fucking around, he even gives him a high-five if Ian had a 3some with Louise and Lena.
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Ah that's true. But Jeremy being cool with Ian fucking around with other girls might not apply to the girl he wants to get, people are not always consistent .

But like others have said the upcoming shoot is a good opportunity for Ivy/Jeremy.
 
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Asmodean2 said:
Ah that's true. But Jeremy being cool with Ian fucking around with other girls might not apply to the girl he wants to get, people are not always consistent .
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Jeremy is. You can "steal" Alison from him and he takes in very good sports and sees it as a friendly competition. If Ian fucks Ivy before him, he won't be mad at him, and just congratulates him for doing gods work. If he sees Ian succeed, he considers it an inspiration to emulate him, he isn't salty and doubting Ians success and questioning if he cheated or something. Jeremy is just too simpleminded to held a grudge.
 
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Most women are just thin-skinned about even the slightest bit of commentary that many guys would just consider pretty milque-toast kidding around with each other.

If a woman enters a male dominated space, she can either:
A.) Be a <female anatomy c-word> and demand they adjust to her expectations, thus ruining the space, because guys can't just relax and be themselves,
B.) Adjust to the expectations and just learn to exchange witty comments as well.

The most harassment women get, is from other women, so the worst platforms are places like pinterest and such. It's crazy, if you think about it.
 
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