VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[BlandChili]

Another option for the additional sex scenes could be Perry/Emma. Practically all other secondary sex scenes in the game has had voyeur options, so don't see a specific reason why Ian couldn't check in on his bestest pal.

I think one of the two new sex scenes may be

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Seems likely, yet a part of me actually wants it to stay as-is. Not because of my support for pure Lena/Holly, but because it's sort of nice that there exist a character that actually can refuse the mains without it being complete rejection. The lust options are usually automatic wins otherwise

 

[dundun]

what if Spike is dating Gillian !

OMG! What if Spike IS Gillian!

I wonder which characters they're?

Well,i'd say LenaxMike and Emma. No specific reason

 

[Skylark21]

OMG! What if Spike IS Gillian!

 

[BlandChili]

OMG! What if Spike IS Gillian!

You're getting the hang of this speculation thing dundun!

Now don't you go and get yourself emotionally attached to your idea, hear?

 

[dundun]

Now don't you go and get yourself emotionally attached to your idea, hear?

You know, I never really was a fan of the holy thruple aka IanxLenaxHolly.
But IanxGillian(formerly known as Spike)xLena, that I could get into!
I christen it the unholy thruple. That's a thing now. Hope you are happy.

 

[prodigy]

But you were not asking about Lena.

The details with Lena and Holly:

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She dose or riot! lol

 

[kino2]

whose hollybros here?

 

[BlandChili]

She dose or riot! lol

Go ahead, I'm quite content keeping Holly with Lena only!

 

[aykarin]

I wonder which characters they're?

I think it will be Ian scenes (he has fewer than Lena in v0.8), probably those involving his main romantic options, like Ian x Emma and Ian x Alison. Although I would prefer to see Lena x Mike or some additional NTR content (more of Perry x Emma, Cindy x Wade photos sent to Ian etc.).

 

[BlandChili]

I don't think she'll add entirely new scenes though, just additions that fit in with the chapter as-is.

Last chapter the "added sex scene" was just Alison/Jeremy pictures Ian could ask Jeremy for.

 

[manscout]

I think one of the two new sex scenes may be

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[cognu]

I think that IanxEmma if you hooked with her may be one, because except fro the acid trip, that "scene" was pretty weird, and imo, lacking in comparison to others.
I can see her expanding on EmmaxPerry if Ian choses to watch...

 

[Ilyasik]

When I first played this game on version 0.2 I found it much more uninteresting than GGGB. Now I gave the game a second chance and it started to play with new colors. If Ash's story was mainly about character corruption, then this game emphasis is on romantic relationships (seriously, I was turned on only by the routes of Minerva and Cindy). From my own wishes, I would like to see a more developed character customization system, and the ability to make Ian a kind of Jack analogue. I will wait for the continuation, I hope the opportunity to smash Axel's face will be delivered in the near future

 

[SavageCabbagio]

I've noted the criticism to a specific development of this chapter and will try to revise that scene and add some additional dialog to better convey the character's feelings and logic and hopefully make that part more enjoyable.

Sounds like the scene with Lena being mad at Ian WRT Holly, I hope she doesn't change Lena's behavior but just gives Ian more automony in the scene, but it looks like she might try to portray Lena in a more sympathetic or understanding light, because I don't dislike that Lena reacts the way she does, just that Ian can't speak up and defend himself in that situation.

For the added sex scenes, my speculation is that it might be Ian/Emma if he refuses the drug, I think Lena/Jeremy sexting again after he gets off the phone with Louise might be something if it's additional scenes. I can't really think of any other interactions this chapter that could lead to sexual scenarios though.

 

[Reasoon]

• I've noted the criticism to a specific development of this chapter and will try to revise that scene and add some additional dialog to better convey the character's feelings and logic and hopefully make that part more enjoyable.
• I've also decided to add two additional sex scenes to this chapter. I thought about them while writing the chapter and it was impossible to fit them in the regular release, but as soon as I published the Alpha I started working on them. I finished the drawings yesterday and I've sent them to my colorist, and I'll start writing the scenes this week. Leaving them out felt like a missed opportunity. Hopefully I will add them to the Final release of Chapter 8, or maybe in a revised edition, since I also want to retcon a small bit of the earlier chapters, and replace a couple illustrations I'm not happy with.

Not everyone would listen to the criticism (and I thought it was not even that bad) so I'm excited what will change but that's also another Point why Eva is doing a really good Job!

For the two additional sex scenes that also would fit directly in the Story of Chapter 8 I think

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and the other Scene could be

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But unlike others I don't think Eva would write "two additional sex scenes" if one of them is just some sexting?! Would in this case not something like "two additional sexy scenes" fit better?

 

[GriizoK]

Since Jeremy is getting some pussy, we need the old guy Ed and Stan too.

 

[Satiro]

I expected a sex scene between Axel and Cindy at the end of version 0.7 or the beginnning of 0.8 if Ian didn´t go outside with her when she left the club after the argument with Wade, but......

 

[BlandChili]

I expected a sex scene between Axel and Cindy at the end of version 0.7 or the beginnning of 0.8 if Ian didn´t go outside with her when she left the club after the argument with Wade, but......

Why would we see it if Axel had sex with Cindy? Ian or Lena would have to be present

 

[n0cn1l]

I expected a sex scene between Axel and Cindy at the end of version 0.7 or the beginnning of 0.8 if Ian didn´t go outside with her when she left the club after the argument with Wade, but......

Well, I understand you're sad but the game happens through Ians and Lena's POV. I don't see Cindy or Axel texting Ian pictures of the act

 

[Satiro]

Voyeur scene man, from Lena or Ian POV or someone Filming the affaire...Who Knows, use your imagination