VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[bauman]

The small changes (visual, audio, writing) Eva Kiss made to the early chapters add up. I replayed the story from scratch a month ago and it's a noticeable improvement compared to the initial release. I was actually kinda surprised how much work she put into it.

 

[Mrsubtle]

Well i want Holly to get passed around like a sex doll by guys...

Thats been done in the previous game by Eva, I'd like to see a new approach. Or it just keeps hitting the same story beats.

 

[Benzombie]

Alison has a literal crush on Ian, its clearly with almost every interaction with her.
She openly gets annoyed if you ignore her for other girls of the group. If she's with Jeremy, she implies that she does not find Jeremy interesting and only hangs out with him for the sex (and implies that she would not be with Jeremy is Ian had been more attentive towards her). She is clearly annoyed how everyone seems to associate Ian with Lena. She is also open to change for Ian, you can already see that she changes her fashion sense.
Technically, Ian and Lena should be the least involved couple. The dev wants to make Lena's scenes hot and diverse, but at the same time also wants Lena to be realistic and grounded (which doesnt properly work imo).

TL;DR Alison is the true LI of Ian, and maker her thiccer puts her at a tier similar or above to Lena.

What I always find strange about Allison path is that it's supposed to be a more mature assertive Ian the one that ends up with her, but she blocks Lena,Holly,Cherry and Emma, while the more innocent romantic Ian ends up scoring a lot more girls by just not choosing her, and I think it should be the other way around, romantic Ian being with one girl while assertive Ian scores all the chicks

 

[Zedire]

That's the thing about Eva Kiss. She's a perfectionist. I've not seen any other dev retroactively change their game as often as Eva does, be it [...] or making them more likeable (Robert).

Robert becomes more likeable? I must have missed that bit.

 

[FugginDamaged]

Thats been done in the previous game by Eva, I'd like to see a new approach. Or it just keeps hitting the same story beats.

a lot of stuff has been done by Eva in her previous game but everybody has their kink. having the friend that "turns" lesbian because of you? done. Manipulating your friend so she hook-up with another guy? done. Is not about how is done but if is better than before.
I just want holly to fuck the bouncer tho

 

[doctor13]

I just want holly to fuck the bouncer tho

That's the dream.

 

[jduk]

It would funny if bouncer fucks the shit out of innocent Holly and beat Ian up...

 

[Deleted member 1058849]

It would funny if bouncer fucks the shit out of innocent Holly and beat Ian up...

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Robert becomes more likeable? I must have missed that bit.

I would say he became a little more subtle on how much of a blackmailer scumbag he used to be. Like going from a hippopotamus shiting to a bull in a china shop.

 

[jduk]

Robert is fine and blackmailing Lena is fine...

 

[Ninja of Death]

Blackmail ruins every adult game it's ever added to.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Ian probably can do whatever he wants to Holly... She is so naive and submissive... I bet he can make her swallow and take it in her little asshole soon.

I was wondering, jduk. I dunno, just a guess. But... do you write g-rated children's stories for a living?

 

[jduk]

Lol why?

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Blackmail ruins every adult game it's ever added to.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Lol why?

Because it would be hilarious.

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[dontcarewhateverno]

That's the thing about Eva Kiss. She's a perfectionist. I've not seen any other dev retroactively change their game as often as Eva does, be it changing a character's looks (Alison), race (the bouncer) or making them more likeable (Robert). It's almost as if she needs to change something in the older chapters for every new release. Imo none of those changes were really necessary.

She changed the bouncer? What did he originally look like?

He's got three lines and he's still my favorite male character.

 

[Wolfje61]

When is the next update?

 

[pallisade_walls]

So is the poly relationship not happening? Do we know what Eva's thoughts might be?

That's what I was rooting for and I was a little bummed that there was zero room given for that option. Holly deserves them both damn it

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

That's what I was rooting for and I was a little bummed that there was zero room given for that option. Holly deserves them both damn it

It's happening. Willing to bet it's been planned since chapter 1. The game was written in such a way to make players want that scenario and I have a hard time believing that wasn't done on purpose. No writer is going to give the protagonist and reader everything they want 1/3 of the way through the story and then have them spend the rest of the time relaxing and drinking mojitos, unless you write for Entourage on HBO. Same way you're not going to get the hyper-powered super-turbo platinum death suit on level 2 of a 20 stage platformer.

I'm surprised how a few turns in the last few chapters have tricked some into thinking it's not inevitable. Most of us have played GGGB.

 

[TamaMountain]

She changed the bouncer? What did he originally look like?

He's got three lines and he's still my favorite male character.

IIRC he was white. Then Eva changed his race to black. Not sure why she did it, she made no comment about it.

The best reason I can think of is that Eva wanted to include a nod to GGGB, since the bouncer there used the same model and was black. So perhaps she changed the skin tone to resemble the dude from GGGB, like a cameo of sorts?

The other reason is that maybe Eva wanted to include the bouncer in future sex scenes. Since the bouncer is clearly interested in Holly, Eva thought that making him black would be more fitting (bbc kink and all that)?

Of course it could be for the sake of representation. But then why him of all ppl ?