VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Skylark21]

What do you think guys? Is this game finally nearing completion? I've been wanting to play this for a while now, but I'm a sucker for completed games.

I did read the post above me.

Game still has long way to go before it's compl

If I had to bet, I would say the story could be wrapped up in ~2-3 episodes easily. The Book Ian is working on is almost finished, tournament is most likely in next update or so.

The pieces for endings are already there and locking in place, since you can "Lock" relationships with different characters.

If you think about it, her earlier game was not that much longer and I doubt there will be not much room for new characters or major storylines.

You do realise this game isn't only about Ian right and he's not the only protagonist? Almost half of the routes on Lena side of story are yet to begin or are on Intial phase I.e Holly, Jeremy, Billy, Modeling,Singer, Ed etc and not to forget Stan.

If I had to say we're only halfway through at this point considering someone pointed out that Eva's planned at least 20+ Episodes for it.

 

[dav121]

I hope Lena and Louise make up again. And I hope Lena could try to reconcile Ivy and Louise. And Holly could help with that too

When did they fight? It looks like louise is upset with lena because she left to look after her sick mother - verypoor story telling.

 

[Reasoon]

well of course as a fellow alison fan we've to support each other lol

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She talks about how she's sorry for the situation Ian and Jeremy were in when they had to deal with her stalker earlier. All that while Jeremy is at her place and only seconds away from banging her. Then Ian gets the video of both dudes nailing her and that's it.
I think Alison should have feelings for Ian whether they are dating or not. Those feelings don't just vanish because she has sex with someone. Can they turn into disgust or even hate? Sure. Who in their twenties is mature enough to let go that easily though? It's a possibility that Alison knows what Jeremy does with the videos but no hints were given so far.

Thank you for the breakdown of this Scenario But yeah I really don't like that it still feels off, like Alison is two different People depending how you play the Game and her whole Character becomes just some Blacked-Voyeur Tool because well every Game needs one. I will continue to avoid this!

 

[bauman]

Has Eva given any indication as to how many chapters the game is going to be in total? Some parts of chapter 9 feel close to end game material, while other parts feel like they are just getting started. Also with development time steadily increasing it seems like this thing could keep going for years unless Eva plans to wrap it up soon.

No indication, but based on GGGB's development and Eva Kiss' goals with this title, I think we're roughly at the halfway mark.

 

[yggdral]

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[zorin0815]

Thanks for the great update.

I found some Bugs -- which is expected in an Alpha relase.

There are some missplaced overlay pictures when Stan picks up Lena and in the Axel scene withour Ian:

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I also get an exception error, when Lena starts the photoshot with Axel

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Hope that helps with debugging.

Thanks for a great game.

 

[balvenie1401]

I unfortunately find the artwork took a severe turn for the worse for this update, several of the Alison and Cindy illustrations are way worse then previous standard,some off the Aluson lingerie ones are just jacked :/ not the whole world obv but given the 5+ month cycle it stings a bit extra, some of those illustrations shouldn't have gotten past first draft tbh... story wise a decent update, would be a good size for a two month cycle though..

 

[pokiehl]

First impression of the update:

Great content for Cindy and Alisson route.

The lack of lesbian scenes was a negative point for me, but that's ok.

 

[Lovely Dani]

I'm a shitty friend ? I'm a shitty friend.
" Yes, let's cheat on Wade"...

 

[Rickster82]

First impression of the update:

Great content for Cindy and Alisson route.

The lack of lesbian scenes was a negative point for me, but that's ok.

No lesbian content? I'm OK with that. Personally I don't need it. I will play update 0.9 later when a better version is out.

 

[Dromedari]

My thoughts on this new update:

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[Lovely Dani]

Spoiler: Sorry Wade you are not my friend and you are an idiot with a belly but she is mine I always get happy when they two start arguing

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She's an angel on earth.

 

[Reasoon]

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[Infinite9]

I unfortunately find the artwork took a severe turn for the worse for this update, several of the Alison and Cindy illustrations are way worse then previous standard,some off the Aluson lingerie ones are just jacked :/ not the whole world obv but given the 5+ month cycle it stings a bit extra, some of those illustrations shouldn't have gotten past first draft tbh... story wise a decent update, would be a good size for a two month cycle though..

I think it shows eva really had hard time with this chapter. I can see her struggles

 

[jaylop09]

God damn... I have no words to describe this update. I´ll just post my favorite scene without doing spoilers

 

[HatefulDeus]

My thoughts on this new update:

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[jaylop09]

PS: God I fucking hate how ugly Axel is. It even drags me away from his scenes.

 

[Hryme]

I love this game. EvaKiss is an artist.

I can't stand Seymour though. Manipulating prick. I guess I am not the target audience for that. It is still expertly written.

 

[fortuna95]

Cherry's scene is the hardest to get this update since you can't fuck either Lena or Allison to get her. Also because it's so far into the story you kinda have to start from the beginning.

You mean this scene?

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[John Doe Jr.]

Can anyone tell me what the deal is with Stan and him not getting a card? And also what's the deal with Louise? Is her content being cut from the story or is this just some drama due to her being so incredibly insecure and childish that'll be resolved in a future update? Just felt very weird that no matter what I tried Lena and Louise had that argument.