VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.4] [Eva Kiss]

[Alphaeboy]

Honestly, this game is a breath of fresh air in terms of playing Male & Female MCs. I enjoy the fact that Eva Kiss is doing differently with branching choices that matter. I mean if it was another solo male or female MC game people would probably ignore it or complain about it being cliche. At least with this game, you have the best of both worlds.

But to add me nitpicks so far:

Lena's guy romances are pretty lame like the only guys I like with her or in terms of sex with Ian & Jerm but in terms of her female romances, I like her with Holly more than Ivy & Her roommate.

Ian, I like all the girls but feel he has more chemistry with Lena, Holly, Cindy & Alison.

 

[desmosome]

Back on the subject of Ian vs Lena, one thing that I am noticing while playing the chad Ian route is that Ian has a lot less cheating options. Alison route seems to be force closed. Holly route was already closed off long ago if you go for Lena. There is a possibility that Emma route can continue, but can't be sure yet. So there is only Cindy route (and Minerva I guess lol) if you want to go for the playboy Ian who cheats on Lena. Cheating with Ivy definitely seems like a possibility in the future though (flipping the script on Jeremy x Lena dynamic heh).

It's basically the consequences of the character personalities I suppose. Holly is obviously not gonna be on board with a secret relationship. Alison is the most yandere of them all and will flip her shit if she feels like she is a side chick. Cindy works because it is mutual cheating and she has the incentive to play ball. Emma is a chaotic good free spirit. She might be down for some fwb if you can convince her that you are not being overly cruel to Lena.

Meanwhile, all the dudes are obviously fuckbois who will be cool with some adultery lol.

I really loved Alison's content in chapter 9. Too bad I don't have a save for a dedicated Alison route.

 

[Reaurt]

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This is my book in one of my runs... All the characters are shitting on it lol. It has a pitiful book_points of 1 (with 8 being the perfect score).

I thought they were pretty sensible picks for a historical fiction loosely modeled after Braveheart lol.

Huh, I managed to get book points = 8, without realizing it, and in the same genre. I guess there's a particular logic Eva is following that isn't consistent with a Braveheart-type dramatic rendition of historical fiction. I leaned it more to grand themes and the human condition instead of drama.

 

[Lemix]

I personally never make Ian and Lena a couple, i dont do self inserts, but i also still control them both so it feels kinda weird, i just make them friends and have them date/cheat separately, i wish there was the possibility of some kind of bromance between them were they share conquests or somethin, like Ian with Jeremy, that would be hilarious.
Imagine that dialogue "Bro, i just sucked off your boi Jeremy, anyway, how was your day".

 

[desmosome]

Huh, I managed to get book points = 8, without realizing it, and in the same genre. I guess there's a particular logic Eva is following that isn't consistent with a Braveheart-type dramatic rendition of historical fiction.

It's bound to be rather complex and without an obvious right answer. We're only picking broad story beats so there is really no way to objectively say one thing is better than another as a finished product. No big deal. I find the whole book writing thing pretty interesting. If it makes or breaks the run later, like going broke if you mess up the book, I can easily edit the save.

 

[IkarusWestwood]

How do I get cherrys new scene? She wasn't even in the update outside of that short texting at the beginning.

This scene is not yet available in the gallery, but it is the scene where Ian talks to her on the phone and she sends a nude pic

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

Perfect book score of 8 for me was:

Genre: History
Call to arms: Vengence
Mentor: anti-hero
Enemy: relativistic (Holly gives you this clue)
Challenge: Fight (Holly gives you this clue)
Love Interest: Romantic
Ending: Sacrifice (Perry gives you this clue)

I'm not sure if there are different combos for different genres but for the history genre (genre is the one thing you cannot change later on) this is the only combo for perfect score (tested it using URM to change variables)

The other things like being on Holly or Cindy path don't matter. I chose to work on my book at every opportunity except when gym were an option (since gym points are hard to come by)

 

[mr.booooobiiis]

eva kiss you must add a path for lena and Ed also , it will be a very interesting.. i really liked your previews game good girl gone bad , like that game should have to of paths to as anyone wants.. good luck .

 

[MrAnarchy]

How do you find the book points?

 

[proudmoore91]

This game have a NTR route or something like that? Or just a couple of scenes? I'm really interested in the game, look's great.

 

[LoneVoyage]

Perfect book score of 8 for me was:

Genre: History
Call to arms: Vengence
Mentor: anti-hero
Enemy: relativistic (Holly gives you this clue)
Challenge: Fight (Holly gives you this clue)
Love Interest: Romantic
Ending: Sacrifice (Perry gives you this clue)

I'm not sure if there are different combos for different genres but for the history genre (genre is the one thing you cannot change later on) this is the only combo for perfect score (tested it using URM to change variables)

The other things like being on Holly or Cindy path don't matter. I chose to work on my book at every opportunity except when gym were an option (since gym points are hard to come by)

Scifi
Chosen One
Relativistic
Anti Hero
Doom
Metaphysical
Sacrifice
8 points total. i get that in the first try. Its not really hard to get 8 point. Game gives you clues everytime. You have to follow same troupe.

This is from script. You can find which gives a point to which.

Spoiler: Book Points Table

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[Ramen-]

Lena didn't delete Hollys pictures...

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

Oh thats awesome thanks!

Yeah I read a lot of historical fiction (Bernard Cornwall one of my fav authors) so I just followed his standard outline. Only one I had to change was treason to fight. Historical fiction - or at least the kind I read - is not really about the events themselves like Caesar being betrayed the way Holly gives an example. It's more just characters that are in a historical setting like Uthred from the saxon chronicles or the Sharpe series where betrayal happens often and works well as a plot device.

 

[Deleted member 2741684]

Lena didn't delete Hollys pictures...

Lucky Stan, he will be surprised))

 

[Deleted member 487846]

Anyone have a list of the songs on the game?

 

[Night Hacker]

So many locked scenes..

Do multiple play throughs! You want it all handed to you?? I have several saves myself for different paths. That makes it more interesting, especially trying to figure out how to arrive at a particular scene. Have some fun with it.

 

[dav121]

Guys will my save from the remaster of ch. 9 work?

mine doesn't so I guess it's hit or miss

 

[GifMeMore1987]

This should work to unlock the gallery for alpha 10.0

still missing like 12 scenes. But oh well they'll be out later.

Thanks for the unlocker, works perfectly! Interestingly most or all (haven't tried every path) scenese are already playable, like both Alison scenes. I'm surprised they're not in the gallery.

Scifi
Chosen One
Relativistic
Anti Hero
Doom
Metaphysical
Sacrifice
8 points total. i get that in the first try. Its not really hard to get 8 point. Game gives you clues everytime. You have to follow same troupe.

This is from script. You can find which gives a point to which.

Spoiler: Book Points Table

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Very interesting! Getting a decent score isn't that hard but for a perfect score you have to be right with the two-pointers.

 

[GifMeMore1987]

mine doesn't so I guess it's hit or miss

Modded saves don't work, regular ones do (at least in my case).

 

[JoJoPool]

Spoiler: for the stans out there

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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !!! fuck i couldn't play much of the update because of work but now i am SO LOOKING FORWARD TO IT !!!!