"it´s passable" ... gotta say this chapter was decent enough. Great art as always, but maybe slightly underwhelming in terms of story progression (which was supposedly the main focus?) for the 2 MCs, it felt more like a drawn out summary, a bunch of repetition (playing pool, playing a concert or going shopping for the 3rd to 5th time) plus just 1 or 2 extra scenes each. Maybe that´s just me having higher expectations because it´s been so long. I like that a couple more doors seem to open for Holly, also a bunch of new characters is a plus for me.
Kudos to the guy figuring out the scenes came from blacked. Now we just need Eva´s adaptation of the Lily Rader ones, if you know what I mean.
Besides that, a couple more or less minor things I noticed in my playthroughs if anyone wants to relay them to the dev.
-there seems to be no way to praise Axel for the pictures he took, only the other 2 options are available, no matter what you do.
-there´s an error with the sprites during the Allison+Ian+Jeremy scene. In the living room Allison´s and Jeremy´s sprites appear twice. One of the Jeremy sprites is his MMA one, inlcuding headgear

-when Lena is in her room remeniscing about the past few weeks she thinks/talks about having done/being ashamed of the photo shoot with Axel, even if you havent taken part in any photo shoot other than Stan´s.
-renpy error shows up at the last concert when Ian talks to Stan, no matter the choice you make
-another renpy error when when Ian meets Jess for coffee, also regardless of choice made.