VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.5] [Eva Kiss]

[Xupuzulla]

Can you guys read?
Is not a Stan update,your guys have worse english comprehension than me

 

[fatpussy123]

Can you guys read?
Is not a Stan update,your guys have worse english comprehension than me

I think a lot of people don't bother reading status updates in general. Just see the big Stan picture and assume it's like the Seymour update or that the Stan scene is the main big scene for this update.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Im waiting for the future perry wade Lena sandwich where perry's the meat.

 

[bonerland]

I think a lot of people don't bother reading status updates in general. Just see the big Stan picture and assume it's like the Seymour update or that the Stan scene is the main big scene for this update.

I just hope we get some Alison and Minevra content in the chapter.

 

[fatpussy123]

I just hope we get some Alison and Minevra content in the chapter.

Not likely for this coming update. It's Lenas part after all. But after December's update the focus will be back on Ian.

 

[bonerland]

Not likely for this coming update. It's Lenas part after all. But after December's update the focus will be back on Ian.

That was the last update. This is Chapter 14. 11 scenes on just one character would be a little excessive.

 

[Xupuzulla]

That was the last update. This is Chapter 14. 11 scenes on just one character would be a little excessive.

How many updates Ian got in a row?
3?
Is time Lena gets some scenes with people like Mike for example,maybe Marcel too?

 

[fatpussy123]

That was the last update. This is Chapter 14. 11 scenes on just one character would be a little excessive.

We're still on Chapter 13. We had the prologue with Seymour. Now there will be two more installments for Chapter 13, the first focused on Lena's POV and the second for Ian's POV. Though the status report from November 15 did mention a small Ian POV scene for next update.

 

[Gicoo]

Trying to be positive for once, what I expect:

- If Lena isn't on the trip, she could have a visit at the Blazer crew instead. Good opportunity for Ivy, Jeremy, Mike, Marcel, Mark. Though considering that the chapter starts with Seymours trip, it means Lena didn't do anything on the first two days if she wasn't on the trip?
- Follow-up on Lena seducing Wade and suggesting a threesome. It was weird to have this development off-screen. With Wade seemingly being on board on it and always having broken up with Cindy, there shouldn't be an obstacle. Neither interested nor suspecting a full Wade route, this guy had no build-up.
- Don't get what the new Stan scene could provide beyond just encouraging him. Hopefully the simp route gets taken on, instead. Once again, Stan could photograph/film, masturbate to her and not being allowed to touch her, and spending his money on her to solidify the simp/findom route.
- Louise returns and possibly there is new drama around if she wants to leave for good, want to fuck Lena again or asks for Ian, either to have him herself or to get another threesome.
- Jeremy and Ivy could've fucked if Ian and Lena recommended him to her, so that could be discussed and maybe develop in a threesome.
- Mike could have issues with Gillian if we assume they are a thing and Gillian asking Ian for date and befriending him on social net suggests she is seeing new options due to Mike cheating on her (which he always does with Ivy, regardless if Lena is a factor or not), so this can be adressed if Mike and Lena have the upcoming music session and possibly encounter Gillian. Could lead to a break-up, a Mike threesome if Gillian is a sub, Gillian either wanting to go back to Ian out of love or just to get a cuck for her and Mike. So, yeah, really hoping Mike/Gillian is a thing and not some smartass troll move to invert expectations, because the possibilities in how it affects Ian and Lena there are endless and gooooood.


Much more interested in Ian confronting Cindy after the breakup, a first date with Louise (regardless how questionable this can be if he is with Lena), maybe development with Alison, follow up the one night stand with slut Holly, visiting Ivy. Book contest and tournament still going.

 

[Lord Bradley]

Personally I always prefer Ian POV because it feels more interesting/varied. With Lena I mostly only like 2 things - she can influence/witness Holly corruption and she can cheat on Ian (and most content here could be told from Ian POV as well so it's barely a point).

If Lena would get closer to Allison, Cindy, Emma that would improve her POV for me, but as it is right now I dread having multiple long Lena POV's in a row.

 

[varpep]

Ian's choice of main characters is interesting...

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[InkAndSaliva]

Lena's the better MC, Ian has the better supporting cast/LIs. While the reactivity to the two protagonists is impressive and ambitious, I personally hope Eva goes back to a solo MC for her next title.

 

[MixQQ]

Seymour ended up disappointing, the Stan romance is going nowhere, either. Last time they kissed and Stan promised to get in shape. Seems like he isn't, so what are they gonna talk about? Another makeout session? Discussing Stans precious feelings? Lena magically falling in love for him because...why would she? 12 chapters in and there is no reason why Lena could be interested in him, Stan has no redeemable quality. No wits, no hobbies, no charme. You can have physically worthless characters if they compensate it with a lot of personality. Stan doesn't.

Best scene was him jacking off to her, its the only relationship thats both plausible and engaging in a porn game. But this seems to be a one trick pony until now.

exactly. Stan is perfect example of realistic loser who instead of change something in his life, he just wake up every morning and crying/complaining how difficult, unfair and bad life is and do nothing about it. I hate this guy, really. No sane woman will touch something like this, maybe desperate ones will, but hey - it's porn logic/fantasy

 

[Nifferman]

Ian's choice of main characters is interesting...

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Damn it!! Now Xupuzulla will come out and say that Ian self-inserted himself as the protagonist of his novel.

 

[bovzue]

In summary, Stan lacks both quantity and quality in writing. Just being a mirror for the average loser nerd isn't enough, you want that projection of yourself to either succeed (power fantasy) or fail (self-loathing confirmation). Stan isn't managing either of them greatly.

So true, really.

As I said, I do not like him as a char at all. The only reason why some might follow this road is if Lena needed some more guys to put her on a platform and worship her... might even be a loser like Stan. But I don't think that any kind of loving relationship could ever convince me either.

 

[Gorehyyyyyyyyy]

On the throuple route but the option is greyed out what did I do wrong

 

[dolfe67]

exactly. Stan is perfect example of realistic loser who instead of change something in his life, he just wake up every morning and crying/complaining how difficult, unfair and bad life is and do nothing about it. I hate this guy, really. No sane woman will touch something like this, maybe desperate ones will, but hey - it's porn logic/fantasy

There is porn logic (a MC attracts all female just by existing) and there is no logic (Lena being attracted to Stan)

 

[varpep]

On the throuple route but the option is greyed out what did I do wrong

Here's what I found

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So in summary, have Ian get over Gillian, respond positively when Holly tells Ian about her kissing Lena and have Ian be attracted to Holly and you should be good.

 

[BigAlzBub]

There is porn logic (a MC attracts all female just by existing) and there is no logic (Lena being attracted to Stan)

While I largely agree that the scenario of Lena liking Stan is fairly unlikely, there are a couple of possibilities...
Lena interacts with Stan and finds that they share a mutual love of photography (albeit at opposite ends of the lens), option one she gets to know Stan and feels sorry for him (Lena can be very open hearted because she has been badly treated in her past) or while shooting, she gets a thrill from commanding and dominating him. Are either of these scenarios strong foundations for a stable relationship? HELL NO! although I could certainly see Stan making a decent sub if Lena goes all dominatrix on him, and heck it could be satisfying/gratifying for both parties.
Having Stan be a pity relationship is potentially extremely destructive, but with guidance (and a whole lot of work) he could be good for Lena, rather than constantly cheated on by muscle packed pretty boys who do nothing but abuse her.

 

[Geigi]

Having Stan be a pity relationship is potentially extremely destructive, but with guidance (and a whole lot of work) he could be good for Lena, rather than constantly cheated on by muscle packed pretty boys who do nothing but abuse her.

That would be like Beauty and the Loser vs Beauty and the Beast(s).