VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

[Leongen43]

OK, so Xapican was right, my demons and I are fine, if that guy that I didn't know and would be able to do that to him, imagine what he would do to Axel's toxic, I'm going to have my chance and when I do it, it's going to be so horrible revenge that his penis is going to die and he is going to undergo a gender change, it depends on what he looks like as a woman, could he become Seymour's new girl and what would her name be?

 

[lorkdubo]

OK, so Xapican was right, my demons and I are fine, if that guy that I didn't know and would be able to do that to him, imagine what he would do to Axel's poison, I'm going to have my chance and when I do it, it's going to be so horrible revenge that his penis is going to die and he is going to undergo a gender change, it depends on what he looks like as a woman, could he become Seymour's new girl and what would her name be?

I think you will like the game My Employee's Family.

 

[gedads]

too bad lena can kick the dog but not fuck it...

 

[soprano31]

too bad lena can kick the dog but not fuck it...

 

[Leongen43]

too bad lena can kick the dog but not fuck it...

Too bad you can't fuck the dog and the homeless man being recorded by Emma

 

[gedads]

well all hope isn't lost, in a gameplay lena was interested in saudi arabia, with some luck she will become one of those amazing free rich girls in control and eat some shit, that could be nice too, she deserves a princess ending.

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but maybe japan could be better to drink gallons of dog cum ... i have high hopes for her

 

[Leongen43]

well all hope isn't lost, in a gameplay lena was interested in saudi arabia, with some luck she will become one of those amazing free rich girls in control and eat some shit, that could be nice too, she deserves a princess ending.

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but maybe japan could be better to drink gallons of dog cum ... i have high hopes for her

Maybe Lara can get a special vintage to toast with Seymour who can have her own winery, could she become a professional taster?

 

[I-No]

I honestly prefer to think about Seymour as a disciple of art and seduction. Lena may be a little slutty, but she doesn't deserve an ending as a damn toilet...

 

[Sethmsf]

What I would give to make Seymour a work of art like the Dragon does in Hannibal, a beautiful statue with his corpse that is an ode to the beauty of the decay of power, i would call it The fall of the false emperor.

 

[yuvce]

well all hope isn't lost, in a gameplay lena was interested in saudi arabia, with some luck she will become one of those amazing free rich girls in control and eat some shit, that could be nice too, she deserves a princess ending.

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but maybe japan could be better to drink gallons of dog cum ... i have high hopes for her

 

[Leongen43]

What I would give to make Seymour a work of art like the Dragon does in Hannibal, a beautiful statue with his corpse that is an ode to the beauty of the decay of power, i would call it The fall of the false emperor.

It would be nice, as long as I can urinate on Seymour face every morning when I go for a run, exercising and releasing a little is good for to health, right?

 

[pavlogrk]

Too bad you can't fuck the dog and the homeless man being recorded by Emma

Damn some of you are on the wrong thread lol ... shite like that didn't even happen on GGGB lol!!

 

[Andrea9999]

well all hope isn't lost, in a gameplay lena was interested in saudi arabia, with some luck she will become one of those amazing free rich girls in control and eat some shit, that could be nice too, she deserves a princess ending.

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but maybe japan could be better to drink gallons of dog cum ... i have high hopes for her

Deepest and most tearful and abject apologies....but Dubai is the place for the intense fantasies of debauchery....after Seymour shares Lena with Agnes (usually dominant elderly ladies are into fisting) ...and then takes her to Dubai...well....Gedads....Dubai is a center for sexual slavery. The Emirs love the "no limits" scenarios....I suppose they will fete her elegance...buy her the most beautiful expensive and lavish clothes and adornments...then sit with her...watching movies of steadily increasing depravity while magnifying Seymour's ehibitionist Lovense Egg games...escalating to the metal egg of fearful painful electric shocks....the anal vibrator....and finally bringing in the BDSM elements......first to others for Lena to witness....until finally Lena herself succumbs to the intensity of the Emir's filth..St. Andrew's Cross, of course....you know....the one that turns a girl into..well.. an "X"......Seymour, of course, so tame by comparison, will have vanished by then...and Lena will live in a never ending state of excitement....pain...and panic....never knowing what new ferocious tortures might present themselves at any moment. *sigh* she should have chosen Italy.

 

[Leongen43]

Deepest and most tearful and abject apologies....but Dubai is the place for the intense fantasies of debauchery....after Seymour shares Lena with Agnes (usually dominant elderly ladies are into fisting) ...and then takes her to Dubai...well....Gedads....Dubai is a center for sexual slavery. The Emirs love the "no limits" scenarios....I suppose they will fete her elegance...buy her the most beautiful expensive and lavish clothes and adornments...then sit with her...watching movies of steadily increasing depravity while magnifying Seymour's ehibitionist Lovense Egg games...escalating to the metal egg of fearful painful electric shocks....the anal vibrator....and finally bringing in the BDSM elements...first to others for Lena to witness....until finally Lena herself succumbs to the intensity of the Emir's filth...Seymour, of course, so tame by comparison, will have vanished by then...and Lena will live in a never ending state of excitement....pain...and panic....never knowing what new ferocious tortures might present themselves at any moment. *sigh* she should have chosen Italy.

Simply beautiful, I would love to see a fan art with what you wrote, I would like others to enjoy it as I enjoy it, thanks for sharing it

 

[Andrea9999]

Simply beautiful, I would love to see a fan art with what you wrote, I would like others to enjoy it as I enjoy it, thanks for sharing it

Well perhaps Eva will write a spin-off....one off the Patreon restrictions...but you know as time goes on....and Lena's elegance has melted away....sadly....the Emirs will wind up selling her....*sigh* to the freak Mädchenfleisch market across the Arabian Sea and the Gulf of Aden.

 

[Deleted member 3511893]

Damn you guys are wild lmao, I just want a happy Ian/Lena ending

 

[lorkdubo]

Deepest and most tearful and abject apologies....but Dubai is the place for the intense fantasies of debauchery....after Seymour shares Lena with Agnes (usually dominant elderly ladies are into fisting) ...and then takes her to Dubai...well....Gedads....Dubai is a center for sexual slavery. The Emirs love the "no limits" scenarios....I suppose they will fete her elegance...buy her the most beautiful expensive and lavish clothes and adornments...then sit with her...watching movies of steadily increasing depravity while magnifying Seymour's ehibitionist Lovense Egg games...escalating to the metal egg of fearful painful electric shocks....the anal vibrator....and finally bringing in the BDSM elements......first to others for Lena to witness....until finally Lena herself succumbs to the intensity of the Emir's filth..St. Andrew's Cross, of course....you know....the one that turns a girl into..well.. an "X"......Seymour, of course, so tame by comparison, will have vanished by then...and Lena will live in a never ending state of excitement....pain...and panic....never knowing what new ferocious tortures might present themselves at any moment. *sigh* she should have chosen Italy.

That sounds as bland and boring as the 50 Shades of Gray movies. Come on... Seymour's plot is so bland. Give me a twist where Lena doesn't give a fuck anymore and she comes with a knife and stabs the creepy old fuck Seymour to death for being a creepy fucker. That's something new and fresh. All these blackmail plots tend to be so retarded. When a rat is cornered, it's going to bite the fuck out of you.

 

[Marley300]

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Ian is ready for the tournament!

I wanted to finish writing on the 15th, but I'm still working on the tournament scene itself. After hyping it up for so long, I felt I needed to devote some time and effort to make it as interesting, memorable and fun to play as I could. I'm probably over-complicating things more than I should (as is always the case, it seems) and I've been figuring out the narrative-driven fighting minigame as I go, but almost all pieces have fallen together already.

Aside from that, all the art is done on my part and in the hands of my colorist, so now's only a matter of finishing the tournament, playtest, polish and finish off the illustrations once the colorist sends back the images with the base colors. I hope I can release it in time, but either way, this update it's close to being done! I hope you'll have fun with it.

 

[bleachedturtle]

hmm I wonder what's so complicated about the tournament? Are there any actual stakes, narratively speaking?

 

[Xupuzulla]

I was expecting for a release date but is ok,seems like is not going to be delayed.
I wonder if you can make Ian fail and get his ass kicked hard,bruises in his face and all that.