VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

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notstaged said:
Louise just can't catch a break, seems like EK really have it in for her, there's just no option of somewhat earnest and amicable relationship developing between her and Lena. I feel like that master-slave route is just bad, taking advantage of a person who clearly have severe attachment issues and fear of abandonment, which should be obvious to anyone with at least more than one firing neuron in their brain, but it's not acknowledged in any way by anybody. Changing Stan in his "learning how to talk to women" arc gets pretty fairly assessed by Lena about his insecurities, but for Louise it's just dismissal and branding her as a "bad" person that uses other people for her own gain (so going by that logic it's okay to use her in return).
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Welcome to Our Red String, when as you progress through the story you realize that half the characters annoy you.
 
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notstaged said:
Louise just can't catch a break, seems like EK really have it in for her, there's just no option of somewhat earnest and amicable relationship developing between her and Lena. I feel like that master-slave route is just bad, taking advantage of a person who clearly have severe attachment issues and fear of abandonment, which should be obvious to anyone with at least more than one firing neuron in their brain, but it's not acknowledged in any way by anybody. Changing Stan in his "learning how to talk to women" arc gets pretty fairly assessed by Lena about his insecurities, but for Louise it's just dismissal and branding her as a "bad" person that uses other people for her own gain (so going by that logic it's okay to use her in return).
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You are forgetting to mention that Louise sexts Ian after just one "I like your style" from him, even if Ian is her best friend's boyfriend. She also behaves like a cruel bitch with Stan and she's paranoidly clingy with Jeremy, Lena and Ian.
 
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lexlexx said:
hey I'm turning Louise into a sub, so that she can suck off he true love Stan.
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Andrea9999 said:
It could be erotic with Louise formerly branding him as a creep...so the hold on her to coerce her into this has to be more than an exhibitionist or natural sub tendency...it has to be vice-like...and made of steel. Any ideas?
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I hople Louise-Stan happens at one point,that bad girl bully needs to be punished for being so mean:devilish:
 
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Andrea9999 said:
It could be erotic with Louise formerly branding him as a creep...so the hold on her to coerce her into this has to be more than an exhibitionist or natural sub tendency...it has to be vice-like...and made of steel. Any ideas?
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it would be a long game for sure but i think it could be doable, fuck stan or i'm as your mistress will fuck Jeremy and you will watch. maybe something like that?
Geigi said:
Hate sex? :unsure:
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more like i'm the captain of this relationship now
Socrambus said:
You are forgetting to mention that Louise sexts Ian after just one "I like your style" from him, even if Ian is her best friend's boyfriend. She also behaves like a cruel bitch with Stan and she's paranoidly clingy with Jeremy, Lena and Ian.
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yeah bitch needs a lesson, sure Stan is a bit of an odd duck but her having a hate boner for him even more after she walked in on him wanking is on her, she knocked but did not wait for him to say "come in"
Xupuzulla said:
I hople Louise-Stan happens at one point,that bad girl bully needs to be punished for being so mean:devilish:
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yeah and then Louise can get pegged by Ivy at the sametime
 
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BlandChili said:
It happens if you seek out Axel as Lena again for a chance with his work, Ivy never shows up when she said she would. Reason why she stayed in contact with Axel was for that same gain.
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As of yet, we have no evidence that anything Ivy has done with Lena has been malicious. Apparently, Ivy is scatter-brained enough and has bad enough time management that Lena accepts that as an explanation. On the other hand, Ivy was pushing hard for Lena to contact Axel, and I wouldn't surprise me to find out that getting Lena to contact him and Ivy not showing up for Lena's shoot were conditions Axel set for his help. In that case, it would definitely be selfish and malicious.
Ray_D said:
She already did you don't remember the drugs she gave him. But now seriously ivy is going to get lena in pretty big trouble eventually. :HideThePain:
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In a lot of ways, she already has.

As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.
 
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bluewolfzer said:
After a couple of hours tinkering with choices, I've finally got the outcome where the Ian x Lena x Holly path occurs. My only question is if having Emma join in our fun could be a possible path in the future?

Also, I came across a website that catalogue's avns but.... why in the fuck did billy get race swapped?

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More believable Billy imo
 
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Augustus Commodus said:
In a lot of ways, she already has.

As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.
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Jesus Christ man now that I think about it lena's social group is bullshit. :KEK:
yuvce said:
No, most of them are dickweeds.
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Most of them don't bother me and the rivals are there for me to compete with and eventually kick their asses if eva decides to be venvolent and include those fights.:HideThePain:
 
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Geigi said:
Hate sex? :unsure:
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I find that to be too artificial and contrived to be erotic. Its early introduction in "Nothing is Forever" almost turned me off to that excellent game.
Xupuzulla said:
I hople Louise-Stan happens at one point,that bad girl bully needs to be punished for being so mean:devilish:
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I am mixed on this comment. Very mean/bullyish to Stan, but perhaps with an underlying helplessness as its cause.
lexlexx said:
it would be a long game for sure but i think it could be doable, fuck stan or i'm as your mistress will fuck Jeremy and you will watch. maybe something like that?
yeah bitch needs a lesson, sure Stan is a bit of an odd duck but her having a hate boner for him even more after she walked in on him wanking is on her, she knocked but did not wait for him to say "come in"
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I did like that that happened; I think the subsequent Lena/Stan/Stan's Penis threesome photoshoots are the second most erotic theme in the story. (Though I loved ffive 's picturesque criticism of me on this point!) Also, just the idea of Lena, as she is going to sleep, thinks of how Stan is gazing at the pictures of her that he took while stroking his erect penis.
Augustus Commodus said:
As for the Louise-Stan discussion, sadly they'd probably be a very happy couple. Stan is a white knight who wants to give 100% to whomever he's with. Louise is an emotional parasite that demands 100% from whomever she's with. It wouldn't surprise me if they even like the same terrible books. The hardest part would be hooking them up in the first place. It would require Louise to engage Stan in at least a civil manner, and it would require Stan to react with a non-zero amount of charm. That might be an unsurmountable obstacle. If it did somehow happen, they would be a very happy couple. Toxic and codependent, but happy.
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I think this is a very good point. The best set up that I can envision, is one in which Louise gets into some very grave trouble and Stan, disregarding their history helps her out of the trouble at a decent amount of personal sacrifice (physical castr...?)
Well, I do not know. That might be better left for a spin-off series.

So... happy,.. Maviarab? :)
 
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