VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

[Deleted member 489436]

Well, the update was kinda mehhh. Using new ideas or developing old ones to create more intriguing story? No. Bringing old chars without a reason? Yesshhh. As I said once the author is having burnout. And all of the updates now is her tries to squeeze story and finish it. Because it's already burdensome. In fact, I believe Stan's rework from nowhere were clear indication of it.

So, I am sure we won't be seeing proper development of IvyxIan route or Stan's improvement even story may end in vain. It would be better to lower expectations .

 

[Deleted member 489436]

When the story started it was painted differently than what's happening now. Ed's plotline, Stan's development as char. And I could be wrong but Marcel being nice to Holly could be part of initial ideas and inspiration. Eghh

 

[varpep]

One good takeaway from this update was finding out Lena's perspective on her open relationship with Ian. This varies depending on which party asked for the relationship to be opened. With Lena being okay with Ian sleeping with other women if she was the one who asked for it (at least for the time being, dunno how okay she'll be when she finds out he is banging her entire social circle lol). I don't have a save where Ian is the one to ask for the relationship to be opened.

 

[fatpussy123]

Weird how Seymour was one of the possible conditions to get being dominated kink for Lena. Now with the update I didn't feel much domination coming from him. Lena even has the option to take control during the photoshoot, which has its own flag for that. Maybe there will be Lena femdom over Seymour? The only thing approaching maledom with this was Lena's internal monologue about giving in to Seymour when she has low disposition. I guess telling Lena to masturbate is being in control, but he's been doing that for the past 3 scenes he's had, I feel like his domination should be ratcheting up, not stagnating.

 

[JoJoPool]

The difference is that she loves Seymour wich is ironic,i guess you have to be a old rich simp to fit in the EK kink

I hope our girl Emma shoves a dildo so far up his ass he turns mute

 

[RobertKing]

I don't mind the cameos, I don't see them as cameos, I see them as additions to the world that EK has created.

I do mind the drip feeding of slow game play. I do mind Ian's entire story line. Game would have been much better if it was just based on Lena. EK would have gotten WAY more content out and had an ability to truly have different forks for the character, rather than a singular series of events with characters who behave a bit different in their individual personalities.

 

[imgoingtodieavirgin]

Still no heroes?

 

[fortuna95]

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[Bishop Robert]

Anyone with a Seymour save? Don't know what happened to mine.

 

[Xupuzulla]

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Already more popular than Seymour

 

[fortuna95]

Anyone with a Seymour save? Don't know what happened to mine.

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[Brazilian Engrish]

I don't mind the cameos, I don't see them as cameos, I see them as additions to the world that EK has created.

I do mind the drip feeding of slow game play. I do mind Ian's entire story line. Game would have been much better if it was just based on Lena. EK would have gotten WAY more content out and had an ability to truly have different forks for the character, rather than a singular series of events with characters who behave a bit different in their individual personalities.

So you're fine with cutting out the Cindy, Holly, Emma, Alisson, Cherry content. Potential Gillian and Bad Jess. Yes, of course. The game would have been sooooo much better focusing just on Lena. I'd rather say that Ian's part, NOW, is more interesting than Lena's.

 

[BlandChili]

So you're fine with cutting out the Cindy, Holly, Emma, Alisson, Cherry content. Potential Gillian and Bad Jess. Yes, of course. The game would have been sooooo much better focusing just on Lena.

Those could all be given to Lena, simple..

 

[RobertKing]

So you're fine with cutting out the Cindy, Holly, Emma, Alisson, Cherry content. Potential Gillian and Bad Jess. Yes, of course. The game would have been sooooo much better focusing just on Lena. I'd rather say that Ian's part, NOW, is more interesting than Lena's.

Honestly, yes.

Ian's life is a total other game. We are playing two different story lines that are making both drag, rather than each individually shine.

I've harped on this before that Ian's game play could be wildly more engaging, but the drip feeding of releases is made worse by the fact there are two story lines that have updates at a glacial pace.

Lena's game play is languishing bc it's one path, with some minority different personality traits. By this time in the game In GGGB, you were on wildly different paths that might intersect but maybe didn't intersect at all. With this game, it just feels like one path that everyone is stuck on.

 

[SearingFive]

Nice try Robert, Lena is not going to be yours. Maybe Ian should visit you often and remind you of the ass whooping.

 

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Why he is not in jail, not canon

 

[RobertKing]

Nice try Robert, Lena is not going to be yours. Maybe Ian should visit you often and remind you of the ass whooping.

Oh big scary Ian? A sci fi writer whose biggest decision in the game is, to cuck or not to cuck?

I don't hate Ian. I just find him boring. The structure of the game is languishing and you can see people feeling that in real time within this thread.

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

Did Arthur really told his new buddies that his wealth came from hard work? He is drunk in his own Kool-Aid.

I really don't care about GGGB cameos but if this is what EK wants then I kinda want to see bimbo Ashley in Seymour/Arthur's path. Really though, these cameos just take screen time from ORS characters.

 

[amber111]

Weird how Seymour was one of the possible conditions to get being dominated kink for Lena. Now with the update I didn't feel much domination coming from him. Lena even has the option to take control during the photoshoot, which has its own flag for that. Maybe there will be Lena femdom over Seymour? The only thing approaching maledom with this was Lena's internal monologue about giving in to Seymour when she has low disposition. I guess telling Lena to masturbate is being in control, but he's been doing that for the past 3 scenes he's had, I feel like his domination should be ratcheting up, not stagnating.

Yep, I was more disappointed in how Seymour was written in this update than in the update itself. The update had some nice-looking new art but the story and characterization were totally meh.

ps- just like the beach walk choice for Ian. it dont matter what you chose do when u have free time.

 

[dolfe67]

Disappointed that Seymour is all lovey-dovey with Lena... I was expecting prostitution. Maybe later, hope so. Presence of Arthur is hopeful for more kinky content