VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

[Geralt From Rivia]

Yh like 3 of em

Stan fans are like modern audience, almost don't exist here.
But there is a whole army of them on Patreon

 

[Gicoo]

Seymour ended up disappointing, the Stan romance is going nowhere, either. Last time they kissed and Stan promised to get in shape. Seems like he isn't, so what are they gonna talk about? Another makeout session? Discussing Stans precious feelings? Lena magically falling in love for him because...why would she? 12 chapters in and there is no reason why Lena could be interested in him, Stan has no redeemable quality. No wits, no hobbies, no charme. You can have physically worthless characters if they compensate it with a lot of personality. Stan doesn't.

Best scene was him jacking off to her, its the only relationship thats both plausible and engaging in a porn game. But this seems to be a one trick pony until now.

 

[ffive]

Stan has no redeemable quality. No wits, no hobbies, no charme. You can have physically worthless characters if they compensate it with a lot of personality. Stan doesn't.

"Lena, i'm actually your missing brother Spike. When i failed to pay my debts the bad guys forced me to undergo sissification treatment, but they botched it and i ended up like this."
"No, that's not true! That's impossible!"
"Search your feelings Lena, you know it's true."

new tag: incest

 

[varpep]

Stan fans are like modern audience, almost don't exist here.
But there is a whole army of them on Patreon

Average Stan fan

 

[enzo ferrari]

lena drags this entire game down

 

[ffive]

lena drags this entire game down

Yes, straight into the gutter, just where we like it.

 

[Gicoo]

lena drags this entire game down

Her partners, absolutely. Ian and Holly are the only decent havens to ship her in. The rest is trash and even boring.

Seymour, Stan. Axel is next.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I can understand attacking that garden gnome Ian,but Lena,the woman that carries this game?
Thats crazy

 

[notstaged]

Stan at the center of it

He's got his own gravitational pull, so that's not a surprise.

 

[Nifferman]

Stan fans are like modern audience, almost don't exist here.
But there is a whole army of them on Patreon

U know the games gonna be super stale and safe when the word "modern audience" is be used. Had every bad experience with DAV.

 

[Nifferman]

I can understand attacking that garden gnome Ian,but Lena,the woman that carries this game?
Thats crazy

Who u calling garden gnome?? Ian around the same height as pretty much any other character in the game.

 

[Bushy]

Having studied that horrible teaser of Lena and Stan, I think we have the wrong end of the stick

Lena has a massive

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and cant wait to have Stan's

Spoiler: of course

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[Xupuzulla]

Who u calling garden gnome?? Ian around the same height as pretty much any other character in the game.

Even Robert is taller than him and hes the scuffed Ian that no one likes

 

[bovzue]

I am not a big fan of Stan but I can see reasons why some may like him. He might be just the kind of guy some of us were or even still are, playing adult games and wanking much too often thinking about those naughty girls. So some may identify with him . Think about it!

I don't like him but the game shows us a variety of different chars and that might be something we all like about Our Red String. I like Ian, a writer - artist of sorts - and a fighter. I wish him luck trying to tame that wild horse Lena or beeing her cuck.

Great game! Can't wait for the updates..

 

[AFSRS]

Stan just needs some anabolic steroids to go Hulk and beat up poor Ian

 

[noturiah]

Now now, there's 11 new scenes coming, I'm sure one involves LenaxStan in some desperate, sweaty hand-holding for the Discord stans, while the real fans over here at F95 get some LenaxEli action...

 

[Socrambus]

lena drags this entire game down

We had the Emma love path and the Holly Trinity, now we have to pay with Seymour and Stan.



Although, we also got to see Perry's ass. It should be balanced with some content of Lena and the shop assistant girl.

 

[Gicoo]

I am not a big fan of Stan but I can see reasons why some may like him. He might be just the kind of guy some of us were or even still are, playing adult games and wanking much too often thinking about those naughty girls. So some may identify with him . Think about it!

That's the intended appeal, for sure, but its badly implemented. Stan is on standstill for 11 chapters, then Lena suggests him to work out and encourages him by making with him out. Thats all the development and its as rushed as it is unconvincing.

If he started poorly in chapter 1, but got rejected by Lena right in say chapter 2, then spend the entire game picking himself up, step by step motivating and redeeming himself, it could work. Instead he is a nothing burger for 11 chapters until the incel confession he could've had at the beginning of the game. He has the same low self-esteem as Holly, but Holly makes far quicker and far more often moves on Ian and changes much more fluid and rapidly.

This was much better done with Eric in the first game, who also starts as a whimp, but progresses significantly better paced to the either cuck or chad path, despite not even having much screen presence.

In summary, Stan lacks both quantity and quality in writing. Just being a mirror for the average loser nerd isn't enough, you want that projection of yourself to either succeed (power fantasy) or fail (self-loathing confirmation). Stan isn't managing either of them greatly.

 

[Xupuzulla]

My conspiracy theory is that EK never expected Stan to become popular with the patreons,she actually expected Robert to somehow be a fan favourite.
Maybe im completey wrong about this but theres something about Robert path that makes me think EK had more plans for him and did a 180 later on when she realized no one actually likes him

 

[godoff95]

My conspiracy theory is that EK never expected Stan to become popular with the patreons,she actually expected Robert to somehow be a fan favourite.
Maybe im completey wrong about this but theres something about Robert path that makes me think EK had more plans for him and did a 180 later on when she realized no one actually likes him

Yup, Robert was a favourite of her's to write, and expected him to be like a Mini-Seymour, but fans never liked it. Stan the Man I guess is a relatable character.