VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.13.3.6] [Eva Kiss]

[Ebonheart (FR)]

Yeah Alison not texting at all during the beach trip was weird if u were on her love path.

It’s kinda weird how little we actually see her with Ian’s friends in the end. She’s supposed to be part of the group, but if you don’t make that specific choice to go see her alone with Ian, she pretty much disappears from his social circle. Feels like she’s just not that close to the others.

Like someone pointed out earlier, her relationship with Ian doesn’t really change whether you go for a casual hook-up or try to date her more seriously. Both paths end up feeling pretty much the same.

It comes off like Allison’s mostly there to be either a casual hook-up for Chad Ian or just an easy partner option at the start. Hopefully their relationship can grow later on and turn into something a bit more interesting in terms of depth.

Last playthrough I did the Axel route for Lena and I think it has really good sex scenes but it's difficult for me to accept that she goes back to him, my head canon she is just not that enthralled by him, that's why I always go for the choices that show she has moved on. The thing is I like that his character is in the story and part of the reason I like Lena so much is because of his role and how he affects her character development.

It really pains me that I don't like most of the LI for Lena cause I know I'm missing on so much of the game... Like maybe Robert's route has some interesting twists but I have 0 interest in the guy.

funnily enough when playing Axel's route I also discovered that Bad Jessica has a cool story with Ian, again making me sad of how much good content is behind some uninteresting LIs for Lena.

You’re not the only one here who’s frustrated by the lack of interesting partners from Lena’s POV. Most of them are just there to represent easy sex options, kinks, or to fill the slut or corrupt route for Lena. None of them really stand for reliable or stable relationships for her, except Ian and/or Holly in that regard, which is still very limited.

 

[Ebonheart (FR)]

Sure, the Cindy path is ruthless and selfish, despite Wade/Cindy being inevitable doomed and the Ian/Cindy chemistry authentic. Most ignore it since they selfinsert as Ian.

With Perry there is a bit of unnecessary mean boasting, and its dickish if Ian also pretends to help Perry (much prefer Ian leaving Perry alone with his self-pity), but since Perry doesn't make a move on Emma and she is interested in Ian, she isn't entitled to Perry in any way, so its fair game.

Perry is not a cuckold. Emma was never his girlfriend to begin with. He just pined for her like a fucking loser for years and she's known about it the whole time.

I only agree with that part about Perry, where pretending to help him and then flirting with Emma and hooking up with her is kind of a jerk move. But if you choose not to step in or get involved in their story because your Ian is interested in Emma himself, I don't really see that as a big deal.

In the end, if Perry doesn’t take action, it’s pretty normal for Ian or any other guy to take the chance. Ian and Emma do seem to feel a bit sorry for him and try to spare his feelings, at least early on and in public. There’s always a level of competition or timing involved, and if you miss the moment, it’s usually too late.

Ultimately, Perry is the only one responsible if nothing happens for him or if another guy steps in and ends up with Emma. Plus, you even have the option, when playing as Ian, to set Perry up with Cherry if you want to make up for him losing Emma in some way.


As for Wade and Cindy, their relationship has seemed more or less doomed for a while in the game. The only real issue might be the timing, socially speaking, since Ian and Wade are friends. Still, pretty much any other guy wouldn’t hesitate to make a move on her, especially if her relationship is falling apart and going through a rough patch. It’s really up to the player to decide what to do in that situation.

 

[ffive]

With Jeremy I always reveal his cheating. To me the game he tries to play with Louise in the early chaoters permanently sours him as an option for Lena.
Like ffive said perhaps substances can help with that sour taste though.

"We were just doing lines off Jeremy's dick and i don't know, somehow i ended up sucking on it."

 

[BlandChili]

"We were just doing lines off Jeremy's dick and i don't know, somehow i ended up sucking on it."

"Right, but I was asking for directions to the bus stop miss. You sure you're sober yet?"

 

[Blurpee69]

"We were just doing lines off Jeremy's dick and i don't know, somehow i ended up sucking on it."

That seemed like something that GGGB would have done with either Jack or Tyrone. Alternatively Arthur going full Jack Nicholson from The Departed and just throwing a handful on his dick.

 

[Urist McHorny]

That seemed like something that GGGB would have done with either Jack or Tyrone. Alternatively Arthur going full Jack Nicholson from The Departed and just throwing a handful on his dick.

Ashley can do it with Jasmine

 

[Linus72]

I just finished this game, I played it twice because the first time I missed many scenes with Alison and all those with Minerva.
Playing it again I noticed that the “SKIP” (CTRL) in many cases does not work, not allowing you to skip the scenes already seen, I don't know if it happened to you too. This, in my opinion, limits the replayability a lot because in the end it becomes boring.

Some ideas for possible developments that I would like to see:

- I really like mature women, so I was particularly attracted by the relationship with Minerva, a real cocksucking slut never satisfied. I hope that in the continuation of the game it will be possible to corrupt her in lust and take her to have a threesome (MMF) or a foursome (FMMM), perhaps with Jeremy and Marcel, the bouncer of the disco.

- At the end of the game Agnes Addingworth appeared, a woman around 65, but I would define her as a GILF still very interesting, I would like to be able to start a relationship with her too, especially in a very depraved way, at that age I am sure she would be very happy.

- Having the possibility (by choice of course) to get your partner pregnant, for example, I would have liked to be able to get both Minerva pregnant (who will then have to explain it to her husband who is expecting a child from a boy who is half her age) and Alison (honestly she is the character I like the most and I prefer her even to Lena).

- I would like to be able to see developed (for those like me who are attracted to these things) the "cuckold" path both with Lena and with Alison, with the protagonist aware of their encounters both with him and without him. Being able to choose whether to develop these relationships from a DOM, SUB or SWITCH point of view. Since there are many branches in this game, those who do not like this development but want a more romantic one, can avoid it.

 

[Blurpee69]

I just finished this game, I played it twice because the first time I missed many scenes with Alison and all those with Minerva.
Playing it again I noticed that the “SKIP” (CTRL) in many cases does not work, not allowing you to skip the scenes already seen, I don't know if it happened to you too. This, in my opinion, limits the replayability a lot because in the end it becomes boring.

Some ideas for possible developments that I would like to see:

- I really like mature women, so I was particularly attracted by the relationship with Minerva, a real cocksucking slut never satisfied. I hope that in the continuation of the game it will be possible to corrupt her in lust and take her to have a threesome (MMF) or a foursome (FMMM), perhaps with Jeremy and Marcel, the bouncer of the disco.

- At the end of the game Agnes Addingworth appeared, a woman around 65, but I would define her as a GILF still very interesting, I would like to be able to start a relationship with her too, especially in a very depraved way, at that age I am sure she would be very happy.

- Having the possibility (by choice of course) to get your partner pregnant, for example, I would have liked to be able to get both Minerva pregnant (who will then have to explain it to her husband who is expecting a child from a boy who is half her age) and Alison (honestly she is the character I like the most and I prefer her even to Lena).

- I would like to be able to see developed (for those like me who are attracted to these things) the "cuckold" path both with Lena and with Alison, with the protagonist aware of their encounters both with him and without him. Being able to choose whether to develop these relationships from a DOM, SUB or SWITCH point of view. Since there are many branches in this game, those who do not like this development but want a more romantic one, can avoid it.

It's because dialogue changes depending on what happened in previous scenes and different choices made by the player. That is what makes this game replayable, not skipping through dialogue to see scenes. That's just unlocking the gallery. Perhaps don't suggests fixes for intended mechanics?

 

[prpa]

I just finished this game, I played it twice because the first time I missed many scenes with Alison and all those with Minerva.
Playing it again I noticed that the “SKIP” (CTRL) in many cases does not work, not allowing you to skip the scenes already seen, I don't know if it happened to you too. This, in my opinion, limits the replayability a lot because in the end it becomes boring.

Some ideas for possible developments that I would like to see:

- I really like mature women, so I was particularly attracted by the relationship with Minerva, a real cocksucking slut never satisfied. I hope that in the continuation of the game it will be possible to corrupt her in lust and take her to have a threesome (MMF) or a foursome (FMMM), perhaps with Jeremy and Marcel, the bouncer of the disco.

- At the end of the game Agnes Addingworth appeared, a woman around 65, but I would define her as a GILF still very interesting, I would like to be able to start a relationship with her too, especially in a very depraved way, at that age I am sure she would be very happy.

- Having the possibility (by choice of course) to get your partner pregnant, for example, I would have liked to be able to get both Minerva pregnant (who will then have to explain it to her husband who is expecting a child from a boy who is half her age) and Alison (honestly she is the character I like the most and I prefer her even to Lena).

- I would like to be able to see developed (for those like me who are attracted to these things) the "cuckold" path both with Lena and with Alison, with the protagonist aware of their encounters both with him and without him. Being able to choose whether to develop these relationships from a DOM, SUB or SWITCH point of view. Since there are many branches in this game, those who do not like this development but want a more romantic one, can avoid it.

Yes, all of that would be great, but it would mean we wouldn’t be around to see it completed - maybe our children would.

The game is already too complex, IMO. The wait between updates is long, and people already complain that there's no content for their preferred path whenever a new update arrives.

 

[Linus72]

It's because dialogue changes depending on what happened in previous scenes and different choices made by the player. That is what makes this game replayable, not skipping through dialogue to see scenes. That's just unlocking the gallery. Perhaps don't suggests fixes for intended mechanics?

Maybe some mechanics should be simplified, as I wrote I didn't understand how you get to certain scenes, so I find it too complicated to change many dialogues, they change just one choice or a few more, the paths in this way become infinite and difficult to follow all.

 

[Kateterpeter]

Does anyone know how much longer the game will go on for? I wouldn't mind if we got 52+ weeks of this, but staying realistic that probably won't be the case. ;P

 

[Kateterpeter]

Maybe some mechanics should be simplified, as I wrote I didn't understand how you get to certain scenes, so I find it too complicated to change many dialogues, they change just one choice or a few more, the paths in this way become infinite and difficult to follow all.

I wish it was more clear cut which options would go down "corrupt" or "pure" paths, maybe through some colour scheme or such. A bit more like GGGB

 

[Linus72]

Yes, all of that would be great, but it would mean we wouldn’t be around to see it completed - maybe our children would.

The game is already too complex, IMO. The wait between updates is long, and people already complain that there's no content for their preferred path whenever a new update arrives.

You're right! It's definitely too complex this way and adding more paths would make it infinite. It probably would have been better to simplify the paths for each character by making them unique and simple (today each character also has multiple path differences).

 

[notstaged]

With Jeremy I always reveal his cheating. To me the game he tries to play with Louise in the early chapters permanently sours him as an option for Lena.

EK could've subverted the trope, making him decent and committed to Louise, but we would've ended up with a completely different character. Maybe this version of J is done being a player by the time he reconnects with Ian, and instead acts as an advisor to him with a cautionary tale to tell, and it's Ian (if the player molds him into a fuck everything direction) sends him photos of his conquests with J acting aghast upon receiving them etc. Jaw dropping level of story inversion, but it's EK we're talking, so it's a play on race and weird sexual humiliation connotations. Like imagine if crazy eyed Lena sabotages Louise relationship by first seducing her and then J-dawg, and somewhere along the line he discovers that Lena only used him as a prop in her self discovery journey in sampling porn categories that she finds titillating and being angry about it.

As for Wade and Cindy, their relationship has seemed more or less doomed for a while in the game. The only real issue might be the timing, socially speaking, since Ian and Wade are friends.

And what kind of friend Wade is making himself out to be if Ian refuses to babysit him, oh boy. The word entitled doesn't even cover it.

 

[ffive]

I wish it was more clear cut which options would go down "corrupt" or "pure" paths, maybe through some colour scheme or such. A bit more like GGGB

I'm glad it's not. Having people's characters reduced just to black and white "pure" or "corruption" bullshit, why, i can get that pretty much in every other game.

 

[Geigi]

I'm glad it's not. Having people's characters reduced just to black and white "pure" or "corruption" bullshit, why, i can get that pretty much in every other game.

I agree. I see corruption stats in other games and I don't know what's the purpose for it at all. A lot of that doesn't make any sense.

 

[chinesewarrior]

this famous yacht scenes for photoshoots with Lena will be in next update or later ?

And what about Allison ? I really liked to see her getting gangbanged or at least getting more in group sex scenes or possibly in porn or stalkfap.

Seriously, bimbo Alison with her tits pierced, look more sluttier than Lena, but she doesn't even have stalkfap.

 

[BlandChili]

this famous yacht scenes for photoshoots with Lena will be in next update or later ?

There will be no yacht at all presumably. Cindy went on a yacht, but that ship's already sailed

And what about Allison ? I really liked to see her getting gangbanged or at least getting more in group sex scenes or possibly in porn or stalkfap.

Well, it's a possibility she may appear in relation to such content in the next chapter, but nothing indicating that has been said either.

Seriously, bimbo Alison with her tits pierced, look more sluttier than Lena, but she doesn't even have stalkfap.

No one besides Lena and Ivy have StalkFap. Looking slutty is not the same was wanting social media lol.

 

[robs1234]

this famous yacht scenes for photoshoots with Lena will be in next update or later ?

And what about Allison ? I really liked to see her getting gangbanged or at least getting more in group sex scenes or possibly in porn or stalkfap.

Seriously, bimbo Alison with her tits pierced, look more sluttier than Lena, but she doesn't even have stalkfap.

Bimbo Alison doing stalkfap would be hot af, Just hope we get something new already with her besides just filming her or sharing her with one pump Jeremy.

 

[chinesewarrior]

There will be no yacht at all presumably. Cindy went on a yacht, but that ship's already sailed LOL

Well, it's a possibility she may appear in relation to such content in the next chapter, but nothing indicating that has been said either.

No one besides Lena and Ivy have StalkFap. Looking slutty is not the same was wanting social media lol.

Come on, with the route some characters are taking with our choice, of course its logical to think that they should have stalkfap or do other contents like strip club, porn etc. I mean this is how corruption works in adult games

I am not saying every character should have StalkFap, but if we are choosing slut routes for certain characters, its normal to expect these things. I expect Slut Alison and Slut Holly should have StalkFap, work in StripClubs shoot porn or similar etc.


When I said yacht, I was trying to talk about this blond fashion guy (i forgot his name he did 3some with Alison) He offered Lena to do photoshoot with other models or something in the birthday party, I thought that photoshoot will be on yacht. I wasn't talking about Cindy and Axel photoshoot