VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.2 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

There is no Lena check?

I don't think there needs to be, because the only way for that variable to remain set at that point is to have Ian decide to end things with Lena in favor of getting together with Cherry.

 

[fatpussy123]

So this update has some updates

Ian can now be dominant with Cherry, arguably more so then any other girl except Lena. Maybe once again showing how similiar they are?

Cindy seems to be developing a cumshot/bukkake fetish. She acts all prim and proper but deep down clearly enjoys being dirtied and cummed on. I think its no coincidence that previously when Ian eats her ass she says it dirty and now she asks for him to do it again, same with him cumming on her, says its gross but clearly enjoys it.

Alison scene is hard to get because of the Cindy glitch and it not being in the gallery. Seems like more of the same boobjob/filming/asking for creampie/asking for anal content. There is a dialogue option marked with the same sad face as the cuck route. Maybe a tease for Jeremy/Alison cuck content?

Minerva scene was pretty basic, especially compared to her last scene. It is an option now to have her help with the book contest. I wonder if you blew her off she will interfere with the results?

Jess got some content, though she doesnt seem thrilled with it. If you didnt sleep with her Ian can be quite friendly with her in the morning. Seems like there will be two minor routes with her, one where she is used by Ian as sextoy and one similiar to good Jess route in GGGB.

Ian can express his concerns over Axel and Cindy. If he is too aggressive or direct she will fly off tthe handle and he can tank his relantionship with her. I wonder what the better option here is: say you trust her (heart option) or saying she needs to figure her shit out (witts option). Obviously the former keeps Cindy happy, but the latter seems to make her actually reflect. Either option still lets Ian give her the necklet, but the latter it is a little awkward.

Ian can also hear about Lena's cheating. I'm not sure if it depends on who or how many people she cheated with, but on my "Lena cheats with everyone route", Ian monologues to himself saying he knows its true. So theres that drama right as Ian and Lena are going to the same beach.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I don't think you should expect a Lena/Ian scene in every single release now that Eva's decided to split them into four.

I wouldn't disagree about the price, but keep in mind that for a loyal patreon that pays the same amount every month, whether a tiny update comes out now with some of the content or in two more months with more is sort of the same.

There's a sex scene for Lena/Ian literally at the end of Chapter 11, i.e. just before this prologue. I think having a bit of a breather is fine in this case.

They're most likely going to get at least one scene in the later part of the update, after Lena joins the scooby gang on Sunday.

That's why splitting the game into smaller episodes wasn't such a good idea. Firstly, we lost the feeling that we were playing for two characters, and secondly, for many players the updates may be empty.

 

[GokutheG]

She actually does. She frequently mocks her for "lezzing it out" with Louise, and if Lena finally stops and tells Ivy she's "too clingy", she says something like "And you're just figuring that out now?"

Doesn't Ivy also say that to Lena if she sleeps with Holly? Just seems to me that Ivy is just surprised that Lena may be more open to being with women than she initially thought. I think Ivy is amused if you're Louise's mistress tho.

 

[BlandChili]

That's why splitting the game into smaller episodes wasn't such a good idea. Firstly, we lost the feeling that we were playing for two characters, and secondly, for many players the updates may be empty.

Nothing's stopping you from waiting to play until the next epilogue comes out.

 

[lorkdubo]

Doesn't Ivy also say that to Lena if she sleeps with Holly? Just seems to me that Ivy is just surprised that Lena may be more open to woman than she initially thought. I think Ivy is amused if you're Louise's mistress tho.

Ivy is mad jealous tho, even more so with Louise. She has a huge crush on her bestie since her teens. Lena was also her haven when Ivy was going through bad times as a teen. Quite cliche, but realistic nonetheless.
I also bet that Ivy doesn't sleep around at all and her dick count is really low. She seems more inclined to pussy. She is all about that strong female image. It could go both ways in that aspect tho.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Nothing's stopping you from waiting to play until the next epilogue comes out.

Most easiest thing to say, than really do this

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Super disappointed to find out it's only Ian's side but the couple of sex scene we got are pretty hot. Also, I was under the impression we are getting the vacation thingy in this update, no?

 

[Jimuel]

What's new in v12

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Jess got some content, though she doesnt seem thrilled with it. If you didnt sleep with her Ian can be quite friendly with her in the morning. Seems like there will be two minor routes with her, one where she is used by Ian as sextoy and one similiar to good Jess route in GGGB.

I only played Jess from the gallery, which doesn't have the non-sex option. It's good there's an option. It means the sex scene was handled very well from a narrative standpoint. This jaded version of Jess is used to sex as a commodity, where good will from men doesn't exist, trading pussy-crumbs cynically for each favor bestowed upon her since that's all they ever want in the end. The sex scene was hot of course, but it shows that all very well from a dramatic standpoint too. Pretty well done. I'm sure not sleeping with her could lead to future development with a less jaded "bad jess" who sees some good in the world. Where the other route just reconfirms her low self-esteem and bad life experience ...plus maybe a few strange new warts on Ian's dick.

 

[yuvce]

Doesn't Ivy also say that to Lena if she sleeps with Holly? Just seems to me that Ivy is just surprised that Lena may be more open to woman than she initially thought. I think Ivy is amused if you're Louise's mistress tho.

I wouldn't know since I haven't done a Lena/Holly playthrough. But it wouldn't surprise me since she's always insisting that Lena fuck as many guys as possible.

 

[Chartog]

Super disappointed to find out it's only Ian's side but the couple of sex scene we got are pretty hot. Also, I was under the impression we are getting the vacation thingy in this update, no?

It's only the epilogue for the chapter. EK plans to do smaller quicker updates. Just skip until the full chapter drops

 

[Sethmsf]

So this update has some updates

Ian can now be dominant with Cherry, arguably more so then any other girl except Lena. Maybe once again showing how similiar they are?

Cindy seems to be developing a cumshot/bukkake fetish. She acts all prim and proper but deep down clearly enjoys being dirtied and cummed on. I think its no coincidence that previously when Ian eats her ass she says it dirty and now she asks for him to do it again, same with him cumming on her, says its gross but clearly enjoys it.

Alison scene is hard to get because of the Cindy glitch and it not being in the gallery. Seems like more of the same boobjob/filming/asking for creampie/asking for anal content. There is a dialogue option marked with the same sad face as the cuck route. Maybe a tease for Jeremy/Alison cuck content?

Minerva scene was pretty basic, especially compared to her last scene. It is an option now to have her help with the book contest. I wonder if you blew her off she will interfere with the results?

Jess got some content, though she doesnt seem thrilled with it. If you didnt sleep with her Ian can be quite friendly with her in the morning. Seems like there will be two minor routes with her, one where she is used by Ian as sextoy and one similiar to good Jess route in GGGB.

Ian can express his concerns over Axel and Cindy. If he is too aggressive or direct she will fly off tthe handle and he can tank his relantionship with her. I wonder what the better option here is: say you trust her (heart option) or saying she needs to figure her shit out (witts option). Obviously the former keeps Cindy happy, but the latter seems to make her actually reflect. Either option still lets Ian give her the necklet, but the latter it is a little awkward.

Ian can also hear about Lena's cheating. I'm not sure if it depends on who or how many people she cheated with, but on my "Lena cheats with everyone route", Ian monologues to himself saying he knows its true. So theres that drama right as Ian and Lena are going to the same beach.

In my loyal route, Ian wonders in his internal monologue and I quote: was the story repeating itself?, was I being cheated on once more...?

Coming out of nowhere and without Jeremy saying anything other than that it's a good catch and Lena hasn't cheated on anyone, the line seems a little out of place.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I wouldn't know since I haven't done a Lena/Holly playthrough. But it wouldn't surprise me since she's always insisting that Lena fuck as many guys as possible.

Ivy wants Lena to be a turbo slut,im 100% sure shes the one who tells Marcel about Lena BBC fetish.

 

[nevt2050ptr]

Sadly, i fear Perry would be all like, "Joke is on you buddy, i'm into this shit."

Have you heard a tale of Pissmaster Perry and KinkDom of the Golden Shower ?

 

[fatpussy123]

In my loyal route, Ian wonders in his internal monologue and I quote: was the story repeating itself?, was I being cheated on once more...?

Coming out of nowhere and without Jeremy saying anything other than that it's a good catch and Lena hasn't cheated on anyone, the line seems a little out of place.

Saw it on my playthrough as well, I think this is probably unintentional dialogue

 

[Andrea9999]

How it was toned down?
I watched it and the only thing i noticed is that Lena now squirts on the mirror

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If you have read my posts, you know this is the only story arc that really interests me in the game, so I know I may be unrealistically demanding. In my current (and only second) playing, I am keeping everything with Lena pretty tame (except for an affectionate affair with Holly) so as to accentuate the contrast between her relationship with Seymour and the rest of her everyday life.
BTW: I liked your previous avatar, but I LOVE this one! From where did you get it?

 

[mommysboiii]

I only played Jess from the gallery, which doesn't have the non-sex option. It's good there's an option. It means the sex scene was handled very well from a narrative standpoint. This jaded version of Jess is used to sex as a commodity, where good will from men doesn't exist, trading pussy-crumbs cynically for each favor bestowed upon her since that's all they ever want in the end. The sex scene was hot of course, but it shows that all very well from a dramatic standpoint too. Pretty well done. I'm sure not sleeping with her could lead to future development with a less jaded "bad jess" who sees some good in the world. Where the other route just reconfirms her low self-esteem and bad life experience ...plus maybe a few strange new warts on Ian's dick.

100% good take from a narrative standpoint the scene is amazing and I kinda feel bad sleeping with her but yeah if you want a relationship with jess its prob better to just let her sleep in your room and build on that in the future

if you fuck her she will prob fuck you up in the future or never speaks to you again or maybe some mean/asshole ian future content where ian turns into seymore in the future

 

[mommysboiii]

Ivy wants Lena to be a turbo slut,im 100% sure shes the one who tells Marcel about Lena BBC fetish.

ivy is a dealer/pimp confrimedcindy is prob next on her list after she turns lena into her pet

 

[Sethmsf]

I can't speak for anyone that went Striker, but if you went Grapple here is how you win ezpz.

First Round:
Guard > Provoke > Grapple on the counterattack > Trip or Throw > Secure the Position > Go for a Choke > Squeeze > Tie Him Up. This results in taking one minor hit in the last 30 secs before the round ends.

Second Round:
You get clobbered in the opening no matter what you pick, I usually pick block because it looks like you take the least damage. Attack > Grapple > Trip Him > Pin Him Down > Pin Him Down (again) > Go For a Choke > Keep Squeezing > Keep Squeezing! (again)

And that's how you win taking minimal hits as a Jiu-Jitsu specialist. You can do it all with only Athletics

You dominate round 1 without taking damage and without getting tired, in round 2 you finish it in the first 30s:

Round 1: Attack - grapple - Attack and shoot - Throw him - Secure the position - Tie him up -> Provoke - Grapple - Throw him - Submit him.

Round 2: Dodge -> Guard up - Block - Take him down - Pin him down - Submit him - Go to submission