VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[BloodyMares]

The last 3 updates have all read the same, "I'm focusing on writing" which is a vague statement that doesn't really "update" people on anything. Most people just want to hear how close to the release the game is and this doesn't tell them that. The pictures are nice though. They show tangible progress. Can't wait to play the update in 2 months!

Well, going into concrete description of what has been written would spoil the scenes. If you mean the progress like "1/4 or 1/3 of the script", then it's kinda pointless because the size of the script is not something you can predict while you're writing the dialogue on the fly. Like, it's easy to measure my progress with the walkthrough because I have the reference to existing scripts and have approximate idea of how much work I'd have to do per each chapter.

Eva probably uses just a list of planned scenes / interactions (if the v0.9 Remastered changelog file is anything to go by), but just one scene in the list can result in around 3k lines of code and dialogue or just under 1k if the scene turns out to be small. The best that Eva can do, is point out how many lines of code have been written, but it'll just indicate what has been done, not the amount of work that still lies ahead.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Eva probably uses just a list of planned scenes / interactions

That's a good way to update people. Telling them how many scenes are done out of how many there are.

 

[bauman]

That's a good way to update people. Telling them how many scenes are done out of how many there are.

Three weeks ago, Eva said she had 2 out of 12 major sex scenes completed.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Not an optimistic report at all. I used to think that episode 10 will be already in July, but now there is no hope that it will be before the end of August

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Three weeks ago, Eva said she had 2 out of 12 major sex scenes completed.

Yeah, and we never got an update on that number.

 

[Ragnar]

Not an optimistic report at all. I used to think that episode 10 will be already in July, but now there is no hope that it will be before the end of August

It's hot Summer in Spain. She ain't gonna do porn vns at the beach or in the clubs.

 

[reyir]

The last 3 updates have all read the same, "I'm focusing on writing" which is a vague statement that doesn't really "update" people on anything. Most people just want to hear how close to the release the game is and this doesn't tell them that. The pictures are nice though. They show tangible progress. Can't wait to play the update in 2 months!

I think she intentionally slowing down the writing process because she not only wanna write the story for this updated, but she also wanna the story that she currently writing right now can open as many as possible routes for the next story, not closed many possible routes or limiting the routes that she can uses for the future update, with this kind of complexity, its rather easy to write story that will blocked many routes that she want to use in the future if shes not carefull, and i think this is the reason that makes Eva revised her game before, the routes that she wanna uses for this updated got blocked because of the story that already written in old 9 chapter of the game, so she needed to revised the old 9 chapter of the game so that she can use the routes that she want for chapter 10

If we got 1 month delay every updates because of this, so that the remakes thing doesnt happend anymore in the future, its a very big win for me whos not her patron

 

[dolfe67]

I didn't get the idea Emma was this buffed. I thought she was more chubby, like the RL model she's based on (Abella Danger).

 

[reyir]

I didn't get the idea Emma was this buffed. I thought she was more chubby, like the RL model she's based on (Abella Danger).

Abella danger is kinda buffed in real life, even though she gain weight, she still buffed, so Emma is really similiar to Abella Danger in real life, cuz the only chubby thing in Abella Danger body is her ass

 

[jadenyuki]

Here I am waiting for more Cindy.

 

[BloodyMares]

I didn't get the idea Emma was this buffed. I thought she was more chubby, like the RL model she's based on (Abella Danger).

Young Abella had softer features, but with experience in porn, she's really looking kinda ripped.

 

[dolfe67]

Young Abella had softer features, but with experience in porn, she's really looking kinda ripped.
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Quite fit on that one indeed.

I was thinking of her like in this one :

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[BorgiaBou]

It's hot Summer in Spain. She ain't gonna do porn vns at the beach or in the clubs.

Especially when the money keeps pouring in no matter what...

 

[Solomon Grundy]

You guys can have the Lena and Holly throuple, I want Emma and Alison.

SOLD! I will take that trade in a second.

 

[Tallyhoe]

Not an optimistic report at all. I used to think that episode 10 will be already in July, but now there is no hope that it will be before the end of August

Told you guys it's Sep-Oct

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

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Chapter 10 weekly status report (8)

Quick status update.

As always, I can't explain in too much detail what I've been working on without spoiling too much. I've been focusing on the writing maybe a bit too much, and pushing forward with that began to feel difficult, but I really wanted to make progress. I've found out it's better to switch to art related tasks when that happens, so that way I still get the feeling of pushing the workload forward and I get to clear my head for a bit. I'll do that during this coming week, focusing on writing but breaking it up to draw and edit some scenes.

Here you can see the final result of an image of Emma previously shown. What do you guys think?

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Also, if you are curious about anything in particular and want to ask questions or give me tips on what to talk about in these weekly status reports, feel free to let me know in the comments. I think that way I can come up with more interesting posts to keep you informed!

So this is obviously after the time skip and Emma’s been hitting the gym so that she can beat the shit out of Seymour and still have the strength and endurance to peg Perry all night… Right?

Anyway, it’s weird seeing her so muscular. There’s bound to be some irregularities from illustration to illustration, but in this picture it seems very intentional. Maybe Eva’s always thought of her as strong and buff, but it didn't really become visible in the drawings until now, as she's continually making the illustrations more detailed. I don't really mind—I like both the muscular and less muscular versions of Emma—but it's a bit weird for continuity reasons.

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

Especially when the money keeps pouring in no matter what...

I heard that Spanish people work 4-6 hours a day. Judging by the speed of development of the game, this is true

 

[BigJohn99]

So this is obviously after the time skip and Emma’s been hitting the gym so that she can beat the shit out of Seymour and still have the strength and endurance to peg Perry all night… Right?

Anyway, it’s weird seeing her so muscular. There’s bound to be some irregularities from illustration to illustration, but in this picture it seems very intentional. Maybe Eva’s always thought of her as strong and buff, but it didn't really become visible in the drawings until now, as she's continually making the illustrations more detailed. I don't really mind—I like both the muscular and less muscular versions of Emma—but it's a bit weird for continuity reasons.

wait what there is a time skip?

 

[Nifferman]

Don't get me wrong some games can have a good story, Evakiss first game has some good routes but ORS is just a soap opera.
If you want good narrative and stories, books > tv-movies > comics > games.

Clown
It's games>books>series/movie
Most games not erotic or porno have much better story and immersion than books or movies u should play some rpg instead of sticking to fornite and cod every time

 

[Deleted member 2128394]

Clown
It's games>books>series/movie
Most games not erotic or porno have much better story and immersion than books or movies u should play some rpg instead of sticking to fornite and cod every time

ur right mate dostoevsky aint got shit on bioware