VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

Geralt From Rivia · Mar 29, 2023

Marley300 said:
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This week I've been dividing work between several tasks:
Revising and polishing Ian's part of the script. I still haven't play-tested it thoroughly since some art still has to be finished, so I also focused on that. I'm trying to include more animations in lew scenes, and Ian's part has 13 of them.
I've been editing and finishing colored art, as well as drawing line-art and sketching and preparing the scenes for Lena's part of the script. I also commissioned 2 new scenarios, and will probably comission 2 more for this chapter.

I've been working on the final structure for Lena's part of the script, and also started writing some scenes. I've known what scenes I want to include, but sometimes it takes time to flesh out the general idea and concept I have on my mind until I develop a good structure for the scene and how and where to implement it in the script. At this point in the story I'm trying to avoid generic lewd scenes and make them somewhat original, so that they advance the plot and serve to develop character relationships (as well as being hot and sexy).

We've been also working on something related to Lena's song writing, and I'll share it with you in a couple of days. Other than that, I'll keep moving forward with the tasks I mentioned before during this week, and I'll keep you posted!

I have good feelings for June.
Don't ask me which year

lucadiadis · Mar 29, 2023

seaoflove said:
Domme Lena is going to be so fun torturing Louise. I hope something like this happen:

Walk her around on a leash in front of Stan... Then have him jerk off into a dog food bowl and have her eat it.

Take her over to Ivy's house... Have her lick Ivy's feet as she once refused to. Then have Ivy piss in her mouth.

Fuck Jeremy in front of her, and make her eat his cream pie out of Lena.

Well ur creative at least

lucadiadis · Mar 29, 2023

BlandChili said:
Yeah, Seymour is based on some Spanish politician if I recall correctly. No clue which one.

Mariano Rajoy I suppose. He looks like him and given Eva Kiss is a Catalunian from Barcelona with apparently progressive political views, she/he must not like him very much.

lucadiadis · Mar 29, 2023

ffive said:
There's no scene with Billy in the game. I'd guess the text in the gallery is either an oversight, a placeholder or leftover of early plans that were since changed.

Lena has the option of a friendly dance with him.

ffive · Mar 29, 2023

lucadiadis said:
Lena has the option of a friendly dance with him.

Which is automatically blocked by Ivy.

Python:

                    "{image=icon_friend.webp}Dance with Billy" if (billy_model and v10_lena_dance != "billy") or (billy_trust > 0 and v10_lena_dance != "billy"):
                        $ v10_lena_dance = "billy"
                        "I looked over to Billy, and our eyes met. He smiled and winked at me."
                        if v10_lena_drug:
                            "I liked the way he was looking at me... My mind was buzzing with happy excitement."
                        l "I'll stay here a bit longer."
                        i "Alright. I'll be right back."
                        l "Hey Billy..."
                        b "Hey beautiful! Damn, you have some sexy dance moves!"
                        l "You like them?"
                        b "Hell yeah. You're the prettiest girl I've ever seen..."
                        call friend_xp ('billy',2) from _call_friend_xp_893
                        v "Billy, come here! Let's dance!"
                        b "Sure, baby."
                        l "..."
                        jump v10choosedance2

SerHawkes · Mar 29, 2023

Given the fact that she wants to get into business with Billy, it makes some sense for her to be pushy.

goodguy80 · Mar 29, 2023

Petro28 said:
I know there was some talk of possible threesomes but what about foursomes?
#=how likely it is to happen 1-10, (#)= how hot you find the foursome 1-10.

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There are more possible but these above seem the most tangible. Can you guys come up with foursome involving Cindy?

No MMMF options? Booooriiiiiing

Petro28 · Mar 30, 2023

goodguy80 said:
No MMMF options? Booooriiiiiing

I don't think it would be tangible.
Axel/Cindy/Mike/Jeremy would be amazing.
What would you want to see?

Defenestrator.for.traitor · Mar 30, 2023

Petro28 said:
I don't think it would be tangible.
Axel/Cindy/Mike/Jeremy would be amazing.
What would you want to see?

I have one, Axel fucking Ian/Perry/Dave/Jeremy together while their girls; Lena(Holly), Emma(Cherry), Cindy, Ivy(Louise) watching. Not so much F involved though.

ultimacopycat7 · Mar 30, 2023

Defenestrator.for.traitor said:
I have one, Axel fucking Ian/Perry/Dave/Jeremy together while their girls; Lena(Holly), Emma(Cherry), Cindy, Ivy(Louise) watching. Not so much F involved though.

Might as well add Robert and Mike.

goodguy80 · Mar 30, 2023

Petro28 said:
I don't think it would be tangible.
Axel/Cindy/Mike/Jeremy would be amazing.
What would you want to see?

Lena + Ian (bf)/Jeremy/Axel - one of the most hottest scenes that I think really can happen
Holly + Jeremy/Black Bouncer/any other man - final part of her "become more open"
Cindy + Axel/Ian/Wade - scene with crazy potential
Emma + Ian/Jeremy/Perry/as much men as she can handle more - that ass need to be gangbanged and she has vibes to give it a try
Minerva + Ian/Jeremy/Her husband - as a part of her "reunion" with husband

Eye-switcher · Mar 30, 2023

Do we have any idea when this Chapter 11 will be released?

jaylop09 · Mar 30, 2023

lucadiadis said:
Mariano Rajoy I suppose. He looks like him and given Eva Kiss is a Catalunian from Barcelona with apparently progressive political views, she/he must not like him very much.

Lol, no Seymour is in fact based on a Spanish politician. But not the former president. He's based on Santiago Abascal, leader from VOX.

everythingsok · Mar 30, 2023

Eye-switcher said:
Do we have any idea when this Chapter 11 will be released?

probably next month

Moryaka26 · Mar 30, 2023

everythingsok said:
probably next month

You serious?

mommysboiii · Mar 30, 2023

goodguy80 said:
No MMMF options? Booooriiiiiing

daymee true viking style what a REAL MAN

I would go with Ian(bf) in disco with his gf gillian ordering drinks and waiting for gillian meanwhile she getting gang banged by mark and his friends on a cheap disco toilet.

or cindy and ian (bf) is calling her how the wildcats photoshot is going while she is on the phone axel and wildcat guys taking turns on her

maybe ian (bf) and his true love alison she finds out that ian book sucks but sees in his eyes that it would make him sad so she goes to this rich old grandpa and talks to him next day ian gives rich old grandpa and his high tier investors a presentation of his book meanwhile alison is under the desk giving blowjobs

(ian has no idea) after he is leaving they bang her brain out on the table

I dont have a good feeling behind this whole wildcats thing anyway who is behind that billy? I have the feeling it will be like casting couch amateur porn covered behind modeling/nude modeling with naive models that want fame like cindy

Doppelgang · Mar 30, 2023

Eye-switcher said:
Do we have any idea when this Chapter 11 will be released?

In the

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on 28th of February, Eva wrote that she "began writing the script the same day the [Prologue] Alpha was published", which was February 11th. From

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it sounds to me like she's just over halfway done. If we simplify and make a guess that yesterday's report was the halfway mark, that would imply a Chapter 11 Alpha release on May 14th. Obviously a creative process can't be quantified like that, but at this point it's the closest we'll come to a very roughly estimated release date.

Eye-switcher · Mar 30, 2023

Doppelgang said:
In the
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on 28th of February, Eva wrote that she "began writing the script the same day the [Prologue] Alpha was published", which was February 11th. From
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it sounds to me like she's just over halfway done. If we simplify and make a guess that yesterday's report was the halfway mark, that would imply a Chapter 11 Alpha release on May 14th. Obviously a creative process can't be quantified like that, but at this point it's the closest we'll come to a very roughly estimated release date.

Thanks, so before summer then anyway

Chalker · Mar 30, 2023

So from skimming the thread, playing as Ian and fucking around gets you punished and you get locked out of paths, Lena breaks up with you if she finds out.

Playing as Lena and fucking around gets you more content, doesnt lock you out of anything and you are rewarded with a cuck path?

...aight.

aykarin · Mar 30, 2023

mommysboiii said:
I dont have a good feeling behind this whole wildcats thing anyway who is behind that billy? I have the feeling it will be like casting couch amateur porn covered behind modeling/nude modeling with naive models that want fame like cindy

Wildcats and Billy are two separate things. Wildcats is a professional model agency whereas Billy's enterprise will probably be closer to the amateur porn you described.

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