VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

1. Cindy gives me impression of a spoiled brat. Look at her behavior with Wade. She is constantly fixated on herself and her life. Okay, you can criticize Wade for his attitude and passive lifestyle. But a man has a hobby - cybersport, which he takes seriously: this is his hobby and it gives him inspiration. And also he has a girlfriend who DOES NOT RESPECT the interests of her boyfriend. She is constantly fixated on herself: "You do not pay attention to me and all the time you play your stupid games." Darling, if you feel this way about your man's hobby, why do you think that he should devote all his time and energy to you?

Cindy isn't demanding Wade to pay all his attention to her. She is frustrated that the hobby is the only thing Wade is interested in. Wade has no work and no interest in finding any (the whole professional gamer thing is idiot's pipe dream), no interest in spending any time with his girlfriend, and no interest even in taking care of himself. He's apparently also a pretty lousy lay, if Ian doing simple, basic things can fill Cindy with such wonder.

Put it this way -- the only person who really supports Wade's "lifestyle" is Perry, an alcoholic with zero real life experience, who's been lucky enough to be born in a rich family and can still mooch off his father. That should tell everything about the value of Wade's current activities, and why his girlfriend could be quite rightfully completely fed up with the situation.

 

[Socrambus]

1. Wade is a good guy who is experiencing a quarter-life crisis, he finds it difficult to decide where he is going and what to do next. This is experienced by many people and should be taken seriously. Wade deserves moral support, not pressure like Cindy does. This is Cindy, who doesn't see Wade's problems and is fixated on herself. Instead of them sitting down and calmly discussing all their desires and interests as adults, Cindy continues to bully Wade.
How are video games different from other hobbies? Playing videogames the same hobby, as snowbording for example, or surfing. Gamer shaming as always. Bad lazy gamers and bad video games. It's ironic that this is written on a site about video games for adults.
And why Wade is sitting at home can be explained in the game's plot. Thanks to someone, half of Baluart will soon be on welfare or begging.
> She likes when you are generous with her. Translation: She needs a male ATM to pay for all her whims.

Wade is a jobless guy who spends his time playing video games, smoking weed and drinking beer instead of looking for a job. And let's be real, he's too old to become a pro player. That lifestyle and dreaming to make money playing might be all right if you are 16, he's 27. He's also getting fat and doesn't want to do anything he doesn't like just to please his girlfriend. Meanwhile Cindy, who could be more supportive and respectful of his hobbies (that's true), is the one with a job and presumably paying rent and everything else (not sure how she can afford it looking at other characters living situations). And she's only asking to go out sometimes to different places and some passion, she's not asking for anything unreasonable or luxurious. IRL a relationship like that between a guy like Wade and a hot girl like Cindy, you know is destined to end quickly.

And the cheating is absolutely wrong, Cindy should just end the relationship if she's unsatisfied. But again, IRL (at least according to my experience) is fairly common that a girl doesn't end a relationship until she has her next prospect partner kind of secure. I don't mind to say that most girls are going to fuck the next guy while in a relationship but there's going to be flirting, getting to know him and so on. So pretty realistic portrayal IMO that makes Cindy flawed but not necessarily a whore who is gonna cheat on Ian or whoever is her next partner.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Cindy isn't demanding Wade to pay all his attention to her. She is frustrated that the hobby is the only thing Wade is interested in. Wade has no work and no interest in finding any (the whole professional gamer thing is idiot's pipe dream), no interest in spending any time with his girlfriend, and no interest even in taking care of himself.

Put this this way -- the only person who really supports Wade's "lifestyle" is Perry, an alcoholic with zero real life experience, who's been lucky enough to be born in a rich family and can still mooch off his father. That should tell everything about the value of Wade's current activities, and why his girlfriend could be quite rightfully completely fed up with the situation.

Wade became so became passive not without reason. As I said above it's like a quarter life crisis and Wade used to be different since he was able to catch a girl as hot and active as Cindy. After all, the current Wade and Cindy would never get together. There have been events in his life that have changed him and Wade needs serious help and a kick that will help him get back on his feet. Cindy doesn't help at all, she only shames and scolds Wade. This will not help, a person has a defensive reaction and he goes more and more into this comfort zone. Unfortunately, Eva is not a brilliant writer and did not reveal Wade's story in detail. Hell, even if Perry can change for the better and hook up with Cherry (the same Perry I used to hate, and now he's becoming a normal guy), why can't Wade change?
But if Cindy acts in such ways, then she will definitely not turn Wade to "her side".

 

[| Vee |]

I know these make Cindy a more realistic character, more leaning towards reality than other in terms of behavior.

Yea, but she is cheating on Wade... Does that REALLY count as cheating? The guy is a shithead, and a total loser. Just a dumbass stoner that only gives a fuck about himself and video games. He is too busy in his own little world to focus any of his attention on what matters the most. The woman that loves him... He won't put the controller down to give her a back rub. He won't take her out for a walk in the park because he gotta get that next level. He is going to lose her because he is a loser. Fuck Wade!

Wade offers her a desert to live in. With no moisture... Cindy needs to be moist... That's why she loves when Ian eats that pussy! She craves any little bit of love and attention because her boyfriend gives her none.

I said this before and I certainly don't like to repeat myself over the same thing which is so easy to understand over and over again but I'm gonna give you a benefit of doubt and say it again, CHEATING IS THE WORST OF THE THINGS YOU CAN DO TO A PERSON WHO CHOSES YOU AND WHOM YOU CHOSE TO BE CLOSEST TO YOU.
Now if the said person whether is Wade, Ian, Axel, Seymour, Jeremy or any other(even on girls side), Cheating is the most disgusting thing that you can do. If you cannot continue simply discuss things and end the drama all together.

Whether the said person is not now the person that was at the start of relationship but NOONE DESERVES TO GET CHEATED ON UNLESS THEY GOT A KINK OR SOMETHING. IT'S THE MOST OBNOXIOUS THING TO THINK IN THE FIRST PLACE THAT SOMEONE DESERVES IT. Why not end things and do whatever you gotta do.

 

[ffive]

Wade became so became passive not without reason. As I said above it's like a quarter life crisis and Wade used to be different since he was able to catch a girl as hot and active as Cindy. After all, the current Wade and Cindy would never get together. There have been events in his life that have changed him and Wade needs serious help and a kick that will help him get back on his feet. Cindy doesn't help at all, she only shames and scolds Wade. This will not help, a person has a defensive reaction and he goes more and more into this comfort zone.

I think what Cindy is attempting is provide this very kick you mention, in Wade's ass so he gets off his gamer's chair and starts actually getting back on his feet. She is not a professional shrink so her attempt to fix things may be wrong approach, but it's not like she actually understands this, and am not sure why she's being criticized for "not being helpful enough" when she's the one person trying to do something about the situation, while Wade is given a free pass when he's doing absolutely nothing about it.

Hell, even if Perry can change for the better and hook up with Cherry (the same Perry I used to hate, and now he's becoming a normal guy), why can't Wade change?

Because unlike Perry he isn't trying at all, and where Perry can potentially fold under Ian's insistence to get off his ass and do something (or he doesn't, and he stays the same loser he was) Wade completely disregards Cindy. He doesn't go out of his comfort zone the way Perry potentially does, and he has no reason to do it when all he gets is unconditional support from his drunkard friend to keep doing what he's doing, while his girlfriend's efforts only get sabotaged, and she gets bitched out for "not respecting his hobby" and not being supportive enough.

Criticizing Wade might not help, but simply indulging and pampering him is guaranteed to help even less. Why should Wade who can live perfectly satisfied without lifting a finger to do anything but enjoy his hobby, want to change anything about his life?

 

[Xupuzulla]

You see that defined Jawline that Ian has now. CHAD IAN MODE ACTIVATED OFFICIALLY!

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Im the only who thinks Lena face looks really weird here?

 

[0tt0von]

Cindy has her flaws but not being supportive enough about her long term boyfriend deciding in his late 20's that he wants to a professional candy taster aint one of them.

 

[bauman]

Wade became so became passive not without reason. As I said above it's like a quarter life crisis and Wade used to be different since he was able to catch a girl as hot and active as Cindy. After all, the current Wade and Cindy would never get together. There have been events in his life that have changed him and Wade needs serious help and a kick that will help him get back on his feet. Cindy doesn't help at all, she only shames and scolds Wade. This will not help, a person has a defensive reaction and he goes more and more into this comfort zone. Unfortunately, Eva is not a brilliant writer and did not reveal Wade's story in detail. Hell, even if Perry can change for the better and hook up with Cherry (the same Perry I used to hate, and now he's becoming a normal guy), why can't Wade change?
But if Cindy acts in such ways, then she will definitely not turn Wade to "her side".

Ian notes that Wade has always been a lazy bum, becoming even more complacent after he landed a hot girlfriend that could support him financially. His quarter-life crisis started in high school. He's somehow worse than Perry because Perry is at least self-aware. By the time ORS events start, Wade is merely an acquaintance to Ian; cucking him should be mandatory to put him on a path of self-reflection.

 

[hunterashton21]

Im the only who thinks Lena face looks really weird here?

Yeah you aren’t the only one. Something definitely looks off

 

[| Vee |]

Im the only who thinks Lena face looks really weird here?

A bit but in previous ones she is looking somewhat same not much difference. It's the consistency in character drawing where even some simple angles can be tough to draw and capture the character as the "exact same". But it's not that much different than previous ones (Check Lena's closeups in overall game and you understand that they all are easy to understand who the character is and pretty much align with eachother).

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I think what Cindy is attempting is provide this very kick you mention, in Wade's ass so he gets off his gamer's chair and starts actually getting back on his feet. She is not a professional shrink so her attempt to fix things may be wrong approach, but it's not like she actually understands this, and am not sure why she's being criticized for "not being helpful enough" when she's the one person trying to do something about the situation, while Wade is given a free pass when he's doing absolutely nothing about it.


Because unlike Perry he isn't trying at all, and where Perry can potentially fold under Ian's insistence to get off his ass and do something (or he doesn't, and he stays the same loser he was) Wade completely disregards Cindy. He doesn't go out of his comfort zone the way Perry potentially does, and he has no reason to do it when all he gets is unconditional support from his drunkard friend to keep doing what he's doing, while his girlfriend only gets bitched out for "not respecting his hobby" and not being supportive enough.

Exactly, this is a very wrong, toxic approach. "Either me or your video games." Something like that. Imagine that you have some kind of exciting activity, and your girlfriend or other person close to you will ridicule / treat it condescendingly / not take it seriously. Will you be pleased? No. The current Wade and Cindy really do not fit together and, being who they are, will not be able to find common ground. As we have seen, things got worse and worse. I think it's best for them to separate. We're a little over halfway through the game so far and hopefully we'll get a chance to see Wade defeat his demons. He doesn't have to give up his hobbies, but finding a job would be nice. And another girl who will respect his interests more, not as demanding as Cindy. It would be nice to know why Wade gave up and doesn't want to do anything. Maybe this is the responsibility of Mr. Ward - we know that it's hard to find a job in Baluart because of him and other monopolist mobs.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Ian notes that Wade has always been a lazy bum, becoming even more complacent after he landed a hot girlfriend that could support him financially. His quarter-life crisis started in high school. He's somehow worse than Perry because Perry is at least self-aware. By the time ORS events start, Wade is merely an acquaintance to Ian; cucking him should be mandatory to put him on a path of self-reflection.

Okay. Cucking discussions are back. But it all started with Cindy

 

[ffive]

Exactly, this is a very wrong, toxic approach. "Either me or your video games." Something like that.

But again, it's not "either me or your video games". It's "do something other than your video games for a change, ffs". Am pretty sure if Wade got a job, spent some time every couple weeks going out with Cindy, and learned how to find the clit, Cindy wouldn't give two shits if he played his stupid computer games for hour or two a day.

But if all Wade ever does is play on his computer and get drunk with Perry while complaining together how much of a bitch his girlfriend is, then the only "another, not as demanding" girl who will stand him for more than a week, after Cindy gets fed up and dumps his lazy ass, is Stan getting in touch with his feminine side.

 

[Socrambus]

Wade became so became passive not without reason. As I said above it's like a quarter life crisis and Wade used to be different since he was able to catch a girl as hot and active as Cindy. After all, the current Wade and Cindy would never get together. There have been events in his life that have changed him and Wade needs serious help and a kick that will help him get back on his feet. Cindy doesn't help at all, she only shames and scolds Wade. This will not help, a person has a defensive reaction and he goes more and more into this comfort zone. Unfortunately, Eva is not a brilliant writer and did not reveal Wade's story in detail. Hell, even if Perry can change for the better and hook up with Cherry (the same Perry I used to hate, and now he's becoming a normal guy), why can't Wade change?
But if Cindy acts in such ways, then she will definitely not turn Wade to "her side".

Wade's bio:

Wade has been friends with Ian and Perry since high school and played in a band together with them. He has never had any trouble with the ladies since his good looks always made him stand out, especially compared to his friends. He always had a few girls to hook up with until he began dating Cindy. Since he never had to really make an effort and he has an incredibly beautiful girlfriend already, he's gotten even more complacent these last few years. Seems all he's interested in is playing video games, drinking beer, and enjoying a simple life. Maybe that's why he and Perry get along really well.

Acording to his bio it seems nothing really happened. Maybe it's just that what works for you when you are a teen or a young adult isn't always going to work as well when you are an adult. Wade was an attractive, easy going, cool guy. As a teen you don't really need more than that, as an adult in a serious relationship living with your girlfriend, you do need more than that. Being an adult comes with responsabilities and it certainly doesn't help if being attractive was one of your good points and you get fat.

 

[Xupuzulla]

In real life a girl like Cindy would break up with Wade right away,especially in this social media era where getting dates is super easy,especially for pretty people.
I guess for the sake of drama in the game her relation with Wade has to stay the same even if hes a fat loser gamer now,he doenst deserve her through.

 

[bauman]

Okay. Cucking discussions are back. But it all started with Cindy

Wade started it.

 

[SerHawkes]

What it all boils down to is both are at fault in some manner. Not sorry Cinders Simps but it's the truth.

Wades certainly at fault for not nuturing the relationship that he's somewhat taken for granted, thats true. And sure, his gaming passion has taken hold of him with him as of his rewrite (when prior he did have a job) and chapter he might just be getting his chance to possibly signing with a team. Same time though, he's begrudingly put in efforts here and there for Cinders at times, though if we are that true friend and are trying to help them out we do see him trying to put in more effort, even though Cinders passion is coming into conflict with it.

Cinders is also at fault for a number of things. Willing to keep her passion a secret, even though she outs herself by posting her modeling pics if we keep quiet about it or don't talk Wade into putting in the effort. Doesn't take no or rejection well and acts out in a bratty behavior if you make a retort or don't support her choices. Condecending to Lena singing when Lena potentially talked to her about the modeling business. In short: A bratty, need to be pampered 24/7 girl who expects undying support for her choices or passions or else she acts out.

Sure, there is nothing wrong with her wanting to be pampered a bit, and yes Wade is a fault for not doing such more than he should, BUT she expects things to go her way all the time. Like Geralt mentioned, don't go to Wade's Party in favor of Holly, she's pissed and upset because she didn't get her way. Well BITCH, your not gonna get everything you want. Grow up!

Honestly though, as much friction as they have with each other, with both having their passions starting to pay off (Cinders getting the modelling gig/Wade potentially signing with a team), my BIGGEST hope is that they do eventually work it out, considering I'm trying to help them both out. It would be a damn shame if I've put in all the effort, went through all the loops and holes just to find out Cinders and Axel are banging even though I've tried to help them out. Knowing Eva... probably 60/40 on that.

I do fully think they could work it out, but they both really need to compromise with each other big time, and talk more. Wade needs to hit the gym, and if he does get signed, take Cinders on a date: nice dinner and movie, maybe a bit of the club scene, then treat her right. Cinders for sure needs to understand that she can't have everything go her own way. She needs be willing to compromise things without acting like a brat. She also needs to be more upfront with her feelings and passions rather than keep quiet and keep it a secret.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

But again, it's not "either me or your video games". It's "do something other than your video games for a change, ffs". Am pretty sure if Wade got a job, spent some time every couple weeks going out with Cindy, and learned how to find the clit, Cindy wouldn't give two shits if he played his stupid computer games for hour or two a day.

But if all Wade ever does is play on his computer and get drunk with Perry while complaining together how much of a bitch his girlfriend is, then the only "another, not as demanding" girl who will stand him for more than a week, after Cindy gets fed up and dumps his lazy ass, is Stan getting in touch with his feminine side.

Given what I wrote about the Cindy-Ian relationship, when you don’t follow her line, egocentrism is really her trait and it’s not a fact that under the scenario you described, everything would be so good for Wade-Cindy.

I want to point out that I don't hate Cindy. She is a hot, active girl who wants more from life, but her personality has flaws.

Wade's bio:



Acording to his bio it seems nothing really happened. Maybe it's just that what works for you when you are a teen or a young adult isn't always going to work as well when you are an adult. Wade was an attractive, easy going, cool guy. As a teen you don't really need more than that, as an adult in a serious relationship living with your girlfriend, you do need more than that. Being an adult comes with responsabilities and it certainly doesn't help if being attractive was one of your good points and you get fat.

It really sounds like a quarter-life crisis that Wade can't find himself in. He needs help.

 

[yuvce]

Honestly though, as much friction as they have with each other, with both having their passions starting to pay off (Cinders getting the modelling gig/Wade potentially signing with a team), my BIGGEST hope is that they do eventually work it out, considering I'm trying to help them both out. It would be a damn shame if I've put in all the effort, went through all the loops and holes just to find out Cinders and Axel are banging even though I've tried to help them out. Knowing Eva... probably 60/40 on that.

If I had to guess, the whole Cindy and Axel thing will have 4 different outcomes:

1. Ian helped Wade and Cindy with their relationship, Cindy rejects Axel.
2. Wade and Cindy's relationship is low or broken, Cindy isn't fucking Ian, Cindy and Axel fuck.
3. Ian is on a love route with Cindy, Cindy doesn't fuck Axel.
4. Ian is fucking Cindy but not in love with her, Cindy and Axel fuck.

But like you said, Eva might make our efforts to fix their relationship meaningless.

 

[ffive]

I want to point out that I don't hate Cindy. She is a hot, active girl who wants more from life, but her personality has flaws.

Oh, there's no argument from me on this, Cindy is definitely flawed (and that's what makes her such entertaining character for me) I was mostly reacting to what seemed like complaint how the mean Cindy just won't let Wade be. I guess my view is more in line with what SerHawkes said, that they both have their fair share in this mess. (but am out of reactions, so ;/