VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[| Vee |]

Not only Stan did well in the polls,hes starting his training arc with the boys.
Chad Stan is about to start his harem with Lena,Holly,Louise,etc.

and BOOM!! Stanny boy wakes up from dream and continues to live his life.

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

I like EK as a dev but damn she gotta slow down with the GGGB cameos.

Ngl though Lena's internal struggle when it comes to Axel and Ian is fun to read. That version of Lena doesn't really know what she wants .

 

[| Vee |]

...I think that's were our disagreement comes from, you see it from a morality pov and I see it from a loyalty pov.

And yet Jeremy goes into Lena. Says a lot about his loyalty.That's not how a loyal person behaves.

 

[axy2]

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Thats funny when you talk about things that dont make sense and you expect Ivy to just appear in Ian's bedroom and suck his dick.
Lena is a good-looking gal, outgoing(somewhat) and single, it makes perfect sense she is going to have a line of dudes after her for casual sex(or not so casual), more than Ian thats for sure. It could have been implemented better so far but its somewhat reasonable.

Ian is an awkward nerd who is more closed off and he is home most days writing his book.
We only get to have IanXLena right in the end of chapter 4, how would it make sense to throw Ivy in the mix? They ran into each other only a few times so far and barely spoke and it's not like Ian or any of his friends are going clubbing often in that club Ivy works at.

Yes, Ian is a strange nerd...

But since chapter 6, he has been showing a more dominant side (a "sigma" in development). The more dominant choices in sex scenes with Allison, Cindy and Lena in the last chapter shows that Chad Ian is very alive.

Also, the post-workout scene in chapter 11 showed that Ivy put Ian on the VIP list of her queue of men seeking attention... It's pretty SLOW progress compared to Lena who fucks any stranger in dirty alleys, but it's promising.

I confess that I would really like Ivy to make an appearance in Ian's MMA championship. If our golden boy wins the prize, Ivy play nice and gives him a hole to fuck. A fucking good trophy

 

[CyberL4d]

Its an honest to god shit joke is what it is.

Our boy Ian has been waiting for 3+ years now to hook up with Ivy/Jessica... But Lena? Oh she gets every character possible every update. Jack (Which makes zero fucking sense, let alone reusing Axel's scenes? How FUCKING ORIGINAL EK.), Marcel (Again, left field, out of fucking no where/appease the small black cock fetishist), Mall Girl (who is a probably next episode).

At this point, EK should truly come clean and just say 'Fuck it! I have NO FUCKING CLUE what I want to do with Ian-Ivy/Jessica! Sowwy guys and gals who have been wait for forever to see them together!' Just admit it and stop with the bullshit.

Damn, how can you be so right? Let's send Eva off with a kiss and put you in charge of this game.

 

[fatpussy123]

I don't recall anyone saying EK was milking But simply criticizing EK on bringing GGGB's character as cameo and to top it of giving them actual sex scenes. When time used on these can be used on actual character's who deserved to get content. Bcz this is not GGGB but ORS. Simple as that.

As long as they're just reskins I won't have to much to complain about since it's not really possible to tell how much time is taken away from other routes. Mike, Robert, and Ian have been sharing the same art since day one, only difference is Id rather see a Jack or Mark reskin scene over a Robert reskin scene.

 

[| Vee |]

As long as they're just reskins I won't have to much to complain about since it's not really possible to tell how much time is taken away from other routes. Mike, Robert, and Ian have been sharing the same art since day one, only difference is Id rather see a Jack or Mark reskin scene over a Robert reskin scene.

Time to think how to insert them into story without it being weird, dialogues, choices, branching. That's exactly like a proper character just minus art which is reskin in most cases.

 

[| Vee |]

her patreons never push it? strange, seems they have a lot to say about content in this game

Ivy was in top 3 for 3 fucking years constantly. Every character in top 5 got ton of content EXCEPT IVY. EK IS DELIBERATELY HOLDING ON IanxIvy. Period.

 

[Alphaeboy]

We might as well bring Arthur and Eva back for real. I hope we get to Eva sex scene at this point with Ian.

 

[FugginDamaged]

Made a quick meme about the new chapter lol

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[Geralt From Rivia]

Not only Stan did well in the polls,hes starting his training arc with the boys.
Chad Stan is about to start his harem with Axel, Perry, Jeremy, Mile, Robert.

I corrected your text a little because there were some flaws in this script.

 

[MF_DOOM]

I corrected your text a little because there were some flaws in this script.

No homo.

 

[Socrambus]

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Thats funny when you talk about things that dont make sense and you expect Ivy to just appear in Ian's bedroom and suck his dick.
Lena is a good-looking gal, outgoing(somewhat) and single, it makes perfect sense she is going to have a line of dudes after her for casual sex(or not so casual), more than Ian thats for sure. It could have been implemented better so far but its somewhat reasonable.

Ian is an awkward nerd who is more closed off and he is home most days writing his book.
We only get to have IanXLena right in the end of chapter 4, how would it make sense to throw Ivy in the mix? They ran into each other only a few times so far and barely spoke and it's not like Ian or any of his friends are going clubbing often in that club Ivy works at.

Even if you get one average guy and one average girl, both of them are going out to a club with the intention of having sex. The girl will have sex for sure, if she really wants it. I'm not saying she would be able to choose any guy she wants, but she would have plenty of opportunities. The guy might have sex, it won't be impossible but it will be far from a sure thing. If you want realistic, that's how things are in the real word outside of harem games. And two identical guys but one is poor and the other is rich, the rich one gets way more opportunities and an easier life. Is it fair?, I don't know, but that's how it's.

And yet Jeremy goes into Lena. Says a lot about his loyalty.That's not how a loyal person behaves.

True, and that's why I was only defending him in that specific situation. Overall he's a shitty friend.

Ivy was in top 3 for 3 fucking years constantly. Every character in top 5 got ton of content EXCEPT IVY. EK IS DELIBERATELY HOLDING ON IanxIvy. Period.

She's in the top 3 but are you sure it's for the same reason you (and me) want more scenes for her?. Because I wouldn't be surprised if those voters would like Ivy getting fucked by Jeremy, Marcel (and possibly any other possible BBC, the more the merrier), Axel and now Jack, instead of Ian. Be careful what you wish for .

 

[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

She's in the top 3 but are you sure it's for the same reason you (and me) want more scenes for her?. Because I wouldn't be surprised if those voters would like Ivy getting fucked by Jeremy, Marcel (and possibly any other possible BBC, the more the merrier), Axel and now Jack, instead of Ian. Be careful what you wish for .

Please don't give them ideas.

Also since all of them are NPCs we are not gonna see it anyway, unless it's 3way with Lena or something. I am pretty sure Ivy fucked lots of guy 'n gals since the beginning of the game but neither Lena nor Ian saw it, so as we.

 

[fatpussy123]

Ian during the scene where Lena visits him after seeing Axel in the club bathroom:

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[Defenestrator.for.traitor]

Ian during the scene where Lena visits him after seeing Axel in the club bathroom:

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Ummm.... the other guy?

 

[Gicoo]

How the actual fuck lena better mc than Ian
She is repeatable female protagonist any corruption game introduce

The poll was worthless in the first case since you can't compare two protagonists without including their respective routes. Naturally Lena got more votes since she is a hot woman, while Ian is a generic dude that 99% of the audience doesn't envision themselves sleeping with. If he poll was about the routes, it would include Ians cast like Cindy, Alison, Holly, etc., and on Lenas side you had to consider how good Axel, Mike and Jeremy truly are.
But who knows what the patreons and discord user are thinking. I see a bunch of stupid shit on patreon, but even that could only be a vocal minority.

 

[fatpussy123]

The poll was worthless in the first case since you can't compare two protagonists without including their respective routes. Naturally Lena got more votes since she is a hot woman, while Ian is a generic dude that 99% of the audience doesn't envision themselves sleeping with. If he poll was about the routes, it would include Ians cast like Cindy, Alison, Holly, etc., and on Lenas side you had to consider how good Axel, Mike and Jeremy truly are.
But who knows what the patreons and discord user are thinking. I see a bunch of stupid shit on patreon, but even that could only be a vocal minority.

I agree, compare the worst routes from Ian to the worst from Lena.

Lenas worst are Robert and Stan

Ian on the other hand, has Minerva and Cherry. These are arguably his worst and even they are pretty solid.

 

[okfairenough]

Any new scenes with Stan?

 

[rj677]

Not only Stan did well in the polls,hes starting his training arc with the boys.
Chad Stan is about to start his harem with Lena,Holly,Louise,etc.

Exercising one time and thinking hes gonna turn into a Chad is definitely something I can see Stan thinking

The only harem Stan is capable of starting is an AI one with ChatGPT as the main bitch and then adding ones like Microsoft Bing, Perplexity AI or Google Bard AI

Who am I kidding, even AIs are gonna get bored with Stan