VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Lady Aspen]

Great Work She Definitely Look like her

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Glad you liked it,I'mma just change the color vibes and curved,Indeed Kentyrr works sensational.

 

[Chartog]

EK where is the news?

 

[MrAnarchy]

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Lena Photoshoot,Render by Kentyrr

Awesome pic! The only suggestion I would have is to upturn her nose tip a little bit and shorten it a tad.

 

[Andrea9999]

Oh yeah,i always reject the money to make Stan happy,i think you lose points with him if you take the money.

I believe I have gone both ways. As I see it, since Lena may be short on money and Stan is very productively employed, and it is offered by Stan (not asked for by Lena) it should not be too large a detractor from a positive relationship between them. Also, there is a point I recall when there was a choice of trying to cajole Danny or ask Stan and maybe getting paid enhances choosing "Ask Stan". I am not too sure about everything I have written here....chronology of events often gets muddled in my cluttered mind.
Perhaps I can get |Vee| to clean out the old files in my mind. He is pretty good at discerning the wheat from the chaff.

 

[Maviarab]

I believe I have gone both ways. As I see it, since Lena may be short on money and Stan is very productively employed, and it is offered by Stan (not asked for by Lena) it should not be too large a detractor from a positive relationship between them. Also, there is a point I recall when there was a choice of trying to cajole Danny or ask Stan and maybe getting paid enhances choosing "Ask Stan". I am not too sure about everything I have written here....chronology of events often gets muddled in my cluttered mind.
Perhaps I can get |Vee| to clean out the old files in my mind. He is pretty good at discerning the wheat from the chaff.

Can confirm taking the money does not affect the chances of working with him again (bar scene conversation) or starting his 'romance'.

 

[Xupuzulla]

I believe I have gone both ways. As I see it, since Lena may be short on money and Stan is very productively employed, and it is offered by Stan (not asked for by Lena) it should not be too large a detractor from a positive relationship between them. Also, there is a point I recall when there was a choice of trying to cajole Danny or ask Stan and maybe getting paid enhances choosing "Ask Stan". I am not too sure about everything I have written here....chronology of events often gets muddled in my cluttered mind.
Perhaps I can get |Vee| to clean out the old files in my mind. He is pretty good at discerning the wheat from the chaff.

Can confirm taking the money does not affect the chances of working with him again (bar scene conversation) or starting his 'romance'.

So you can make Lena more wealthy and still get the kiss,cool.
Is not like you need money if you are in the Seymour path through

 

[Leongen43]

So you can make Lena more wealthy and still get the kiss,cool.
Is not like you need money if you are in the Seymour path through

Exactly!!, if Lena is going to be a whore, let it be for a lot of money, but if things don't work out with Seymour, Stan could sell everything he has to maintain Lena's lifestyle and maybe take out life insurance to make her happy ?

 

[Xupuzulla]

Exactly!!, if Lena is going to be a whore, let it be for a lot of money, but if things don't work out with Seymour, Stan could sell everything he has to maintain Lena's lifestyle and maybe take out life insurance to make her happy ?

Sell what?the evangelion poster?
Now that i think about it,is wild you all hate Stan so much,hes a weeb like most of you

 

[Leongen43]

Sell what?the evangelion poster?
Now that i think about it,is wild you all hate Stan so much,hes a weeb like most of you

And does that also include you too or did they remove your tear ducts?

 

[Andrea9999]

So you can make Lena more wealthy and still get the kiss,cool.
Is not like you need money if you are in the Seymour path through

That is why I wrote Lena "may" be short of money. I also could not remember if the photoshoot with Stan occurred before or after the Seymour contract. It could then get iffy on how Stan can use Lena's pictures if they can neither go on Stalkfap nor other commercial sites due to the contract. I suppose they could be framed to decorate the apartment. Perhaps Louise can be included as well. Also, Stan can use them for his own purposes to umm....experiment with photo editing...contrast...etc.
BTW: Will EK by any chance be removing all of the doors from their apartment? Could spur interesting interactions between Louise and Stan. I would very much like to see them sexually linked even with Louise not changing her attitude towards Stan.

 

[SearingFive]

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Lena Photoshoot,Render by Kentyrr

NGL, the midriff looks so delicate and head-turning. Kentyrr thanks for the render.

 

[SearingFive]

Sell what?the evangelion poster?
Now that i think about it,is wild you all hate Stan so much,hes a weeb like most of you

Hmmm, liking some anime or manga doesn't make you a weeb though. Weeb is more of a psychological state where you are obsessed with Japanese culture and often reject your people, language, and culture. Just like we have Koreaboos - A non–South Korean person who is obsessed with South Korean culture.

Keyword - OBSESSION.

 

[seaoflove]

Sell what?the evangelion poster?
Now that i think about it,is wild you all hate Stan so much,hes a weeb like most of you

You are absolutely right!

When it comes to "Who is the primary consumer of adult games?"

I don't think the average consumer of adult games is an Ian, or Jeremy, or Axel, or even Seymour.

Jack of all trades, Big Black Cock, Chad Male Model, or Wealthy Philanthropist...

Much more likely it is a guy like Stan, or Perry, or Wade, or even Ed.

Nerdy Weeb, Someone living of Daddy's money, The guy ignoring his girlfriend, or the dirty old man with a wife.

The only difference is being a Stan would be even be a power fantasy for most players... Because your 2 room mates are not a couple of hot chicks like Lena and Louise. It's a couple of guys like you... Your rent is due buddy!

The reason the more realistic characters are less popular is that the "Power Fantasy" is a big selling point. It's fun to imagine you are the millionaire, or jack fo all trades can do it all, or got that big black cock, or you are the chad male model.

I see more of myself in Stan or Ed than I do Axel or Seymour, and I think if players were honest with them self they would admit they do too.

Problem is.... Eva is barely giving any booty at all to Stan, Perry, Wade, or Ed. I think between those 4 it's like one render of Perry groping Emma and one of him Dancing with Cherry. The Stan gets a little kiss, and takes a few pictures. Ed does a drawing, but compared to the other 4 no action at all.

 

[Xupuzulla]

BTW: Will EK by any chance be removing all of the doors from their apartment? Could spur interesting interactions between Louise and Stan. I would very much like to see them sexually linked even with Louise not changing her attitude towards Stan.

Feels to me like the game is going towards the MCs moving out rather than still living with their roommates.
Ian even says in the chapter 12 prologue he needs money to move out.

 

[Xupuzulla]

You are absolutely right!

When it comes to "Who is the primary consumer of adult games?"

I don't think the average consumer of adult games is an Ian, or Jeremy, or Axel, or even Seymour.

Jack of all trades, Big Black Cock, Chad Male Model, or Wealthy Philanthropist...

Much more likely it is a guy like Stan, or Perry, or Wade, or even Ed.

Nerdy Weeb, Someone living of Daddy's money, The guy ignoring his girlfriend, or the dirty old man with a wife.

The only difference is being a Stan would be even be a power fantasy for most players... Because your 2 room mates are not a couple of hot chicks like Lena and Louise. It's a couple of guys like you... Your rent is due buddy!

The reason the more realistic characters are less popular is that the "Power Fantasy" is a big selling point. It's fun to imagine you are the millionaire, or jack fo all trades can do it all, or got that big black cock, or you are the chad male model.

I see more of myself in Stan or Ed than I do Axel or Seymour, and I think if players were honest with them self they would admit they do too.

Problem is.... Eva is barely giving any booty at all to Stan, Perry, Wade, or Ed. I think between those 4 it's like one render of Perry groping Emma and one of him Dancing with Cherry. The Stan gets a little kiss, and takes a few pictures. Ed does a drawing, but compared to the other 4 no action at all.

Robert has tons of content,i guess EK wants us to self-insert as that piece of shit.
I wonder why she likes that character so much...

 

[Firaxius]

I finaly managed to get the scene where Lena and Jeremy have sex, but I was kinda disappointed, almost every sex scene with Robert, Mike and Ian was very hot, but the only hot scene with Jeremy was when she gave him a BJ, but when actualy go for penetrational sex, there was like not much to see, more text and only one and same picture, would been a lot more hotter if he fucked her in different positions. Eventualy I rolled back and skipped on sleeping with him, I rather want her stay with Ian and have fun with Mike, these scenes are more hot.

 

[seaoflove]

Robert has tons of content,i guess EK wants us to self-insert as that piece of shit.
I wonder why she likes that character so much...

What's bad about Robert? What does he do that could be considered "Evil" I mean. I think he used to be a fire fighter I think. I don't think he is a "Bad Person" so to say, but I can understand how he can come off as off putting / annoying.

 

[SearingFive]

I finaly managed to get the scene where Lena and Jeremy have sex, but I was kinda disappointed, almost every sex scene with Robert, Mike and Ian was very hot, but the only hot scene with Jeremy was when she gave him a BJ, but when actualy go for penetrational sex, there was like not much to see, more text and only one and same picture, would been a lot more hotter if he fucked her in different positions. Eventualy I rolled back and skipped on sleeping with him, I rather want her stay with Ian and have fun with Mike, these scenes are more hot.

Jeremy is sadly a one-pump chump. No stamina to last in bed.

What's bad about Robert? What does he do that could be considered "Evil" I mean. I think he used to be a fire fighter I think. I don't think he is a "Bad Person" so to say, but I can understand how he can come off as off putting / annoying.

Robert wanted to be a football player or a fireman; he thought they were cool, but never followed through. He wanted something practical. Something that could get him some money easily. He's considered bad because he was withholding information as leverage from Lena and trying to get into her pants. That is pretty shady.

Chapter 2 Robert/Lena date at Shine.

                r "Yeah, I've been working there for three years now, being head waiter for one..."
                r "It's not a small achievement, especially in such a prestigious restaurant as Yunalesca, but it can get kinda dull, to be honest!"
                l "It's not the most exciting job, yeah."
                r "Not as exciting as being a model, that's for sure, ha ha! But not everybody can do that..."
                r "I would've loved to be a football player, or maybe a fireman... I don't know which one is cooler."
                l "I'd say the fireman, ha ha."
                l "So, how come you ended up as a professional waiter?"
                r "Nah, I don't know. I guess school bored me too much to stick with higher education, and I went for something practical. Something that could get me some money easily, you know?"
                r "I didn't like depending on my parents for money. I wanted to live my own life, have my own money and be able to do what I wanted."
                l "I'd say we're pretty similar in that regard."
                r "It seems that way!"

 

[SearingFive]

If we say that If we Remember correctly Robert cum's even much Quicker than Jeremy, Robert is like Put the Dick inside Few In and Out Done I am finished , Robert's issue is he has big dreams but is an Opportunist and he should Learn from Jeremy he has Big Body and Big Snickers Dick giving him the advantage in attention
Here look at Ivy's face drooling for the Snickers Bite , Enough of Robert Robert Robert Content

At least Jeremy is a shower but a poor performer; on the other hand, Robert is not a shower but equally trash in the bed department, we call them selfish lovers. They care about their own thing and go to sleep. If they keep going like this, they will be playing with their own hands soon. While their LIs are taken by better lovers.

 

[seaoflove]

Robert wanted to be a football player or a fireman; he thought they were cool, but never followed through. He wanted something practical. Something that could get him some money easily. He's considered bad because he was withholding information as leverage from Lena and trying to get into her pants. That is pretty shady.

I'm gonna list some of the stuff that would make him an shady / bad guy to some, and why it's not the case. Just from what we have seen so far. He could be written as a serial killer later, but I'm just talking up to what we know about him now.

A lot of people had a dream of a certain job, but they wind up in a different career than they wanted, and it just didn't work out. That's life. That don't' make him bad, in fact it makes him good. Because, he is doing what he has gotta do to take care of business even if it is not his dream job. He doesn't want to be a mooch, and is showing some work ethic there.

As for not telling Lena... He didn't want to tell her at the restaurant. It could cost him his job or problems if he is saying stuff that shouldn't be said yet especially if she has a reaction right then and says something. That is unprofessional. So, he wanted to let her know outside of work.

Bringing up the fact that he saw her insta & stalkfap stuff to Lena... Uh... I guess that could be considered "Creepy", that is one of Lena's optional reactions, but it really depends on how she takes it if it is creepy or not. It's not like he was caught sniffing her underwear like Stan... Her social media things are public. Even Ed mentions commenting on her social media stuff too. I'm pretty sure every guy in the game is looking at her social medias. In fact Perry, and Wade & Ian were all commenting on it as a group together...

I would also argue he is more so a "Good Guy" especially when it comes to the Axel fight... Axel beating his ass. He was sticking up for Lena who was being stalked by a psycho ex.

The Perry / 1st Ian fight right after that... Perry was drunk, and spilled his drink on Robert. Robert was having a bad day and lost his temper and already got beat up by Axel.

The 2nd Ian Fight... He isn't really the "Bad Guy" either... They are both fucking the same woman.

As for him being apprehensive when facing Ian a 3rd time but without a fight when he is on a date with Minerva... They have fought twice already. If you got in a fist fight with a guy 2 times and he shows up at your place of work how are you gonna react?

You could argue, "What about when he gets a blowjob / has sex with Lena at work!" That's very unprofessional, and I'm sure he would get fired, and probably Lena too. However, it's an adult game. I'm sure many guys would bang their hot model coworker if they could at work... Sounds like the dream! You also need to remember it's an adult game and the risk of being caught spices it up.

Lena's cat dislikes him... but it's a cat. Maybe he is just not good with cats? In writing there is a trope of people being a sign of a bad person if animals dislike them. That could be a clue in subtext.

If Lena and Robert hook up then we get Bad Jessica... That's hard to refute as him being a bad person. That also makes Mike bad as he is bad for cheating on his girlfriend, and later on Lena. Mike is obviously a bad guy.

He has flaws, he is not a perfect person by any means, but in terms of how bad of a guy he is. He is far from the worst guy in the game:

Seymour is by far the worst... He is just a ruthless monster. I don't need to make a case against him. Everyone else already has. He is so bad that Emma of all people hates him... She has like 0 hate in her soul. Jeremy is a lying snake that can't be trusted. Axel is a psychotic stalker ex with a short fuse. Stan does creepy stuff like steal underwear to snoof. Ed is married and older than her dad and still hitting on Lena all the fucking time dropping pervy messages on social media and drawing her naked. Wade totally neglects the shit out of Cindy for video games, and does not appreciate her at all. Perry lives off daddy and is a bum, and is just weird in general. Mike cheats on his girlfriend.

Of the guys in the game how is Robert one of the bad ones?