VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

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SerHawkes

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So we have reached rock fucking bottom with EK here haven't we? Just a quick only slut up chapter with no story progression what so ever. Yet another random hookup options for a -COUGH COUGH- BLOATED AS FUCK CAST for Lena, AGAIN. Stan the fat bastard incel gets two scenes with Lena while I'm still 5 years deep in blueballdom waiting for Ian and Ivy to pair up. But given how and utter shit this was??? Yeah, its going to go down hill faster than one night in fucking Bangkok hyped up on ever illict drug possible. There is ZERO chance in salvaging this at this point. Just rename it Good Girl Gone Bad 2: With More Kinks! and call it quits.

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suzuki1980 said:
Really interested to see Ian's POV scenes... but sad there wasn't much lead up to the Jeremy scene or inner monologue before he came over. :unsure:

If Ian doesn't finally put it in Ivy, I'm going to be really mad. :HideThePain:
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At this point? EK is going to fuck it over in its entirety with the most braindead bullshit shitshow of stuff imaginable. Then again... She already has, so its par for the course.
 
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DDDIsReal said:
Honestly this game aged pretty bad. 5 minutes updates with no story at all only just fuckfest, weird faces, sex scenes all the same with weirdos Robert, Stan or irrelevant characters John?? Mark?? who tf they are.
Where are you old ORS? Seems you died.
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ORS' development is comparable to GGGB's. GGGB's later updates were mostly a porn gallery after Eva Kiss burned out on the story and featured repetitive scene variants and recycled art.


BlandChili said:
At least the Seymour update was funny to observe but this one was just so dull.
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bauman said:
ORS' development is comparable to GGGB's. GGGB's later updates were mostly a porn gallery after Eva Kiss burned out on the story and featured repetitive scene variants and recycled art.
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Pretty much. So for the whole '20' chapter potential, I don't see it now. Not if this is what we will be getting for the foreseeable future. EK completely lost herself when she decided, on a fucking ass whim by the way, to rework shit that was already well and fine. And this was around Chapter 6 or so. Since then well... Despite her constant attempts to go damage control on her poor decision makings, everything has suffered. The characters, the story that had some measure of potential, everything really. This is pretty much the big old writing on the wall.
 
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Yeah this was really weird update that felt more like a sex scene showcase. Hope the people who wanted more Lena POV are happy. The best part was slutty Holly adventures, but even that felt a little rushed and not living up to the buildup potential.

This game was built on connecting lives of our protagonists Ian and Lena, but last few updates make it seem they are falling further and further apart. Whatever POV is currently happening, life from other POV seems to not exist anymore or sit at standstill apart from few chosen moments. It used to be that every progress on either POV felt connected and in the same story and world that is alive constantly creeping in with even as little presence as a single text. Now there are a lot of holes, Lena's POV missing from the beach is best example of that.

I hope EK gets back to her former self and finds a way to connect this tangled mess into story that feels whole and with flow.
 
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The scene with Stan looks strained, as if EK herself didn't want to draw it, nothing special.

And please explain to me who John is? :WaitWhat:
 
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I think all of my saves even the ones not on the corruption path got the gloryhole scene. Works fine if I start a new game though. IDK, might be just me.

New update kinda sucks. Those fade to black transitions are too jarring and some of the art are iffy. They already reused some art why not maintain the quality on the new ones. With how things are going, imho Ivy and Ian interaction is still dead in the water. Throuple/lesbo route getting some movement is kinda nice though.

EK needs to find a balance between sex and plot. :HideThePain:
 
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