VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

Where and when does Arthur show up? I didn't run into him.

If Lena has signed up Seymour's contract she joins him on a trip to Rome after Perry's beach house event. Arthur shows up there as one of Seymour's apparent friends and Lena can choose to flirt with him or not.

 

[Elisagee]

If Lena has signed up Seymour's contract she joins him on a trip to Rome after Perry's beach house event. Arthur shows up there as one of Seymour's apparent friends and Lena can choose to flirt with him or not.

Oh damn! Yeah I skipped Seymour to have a more Stalkfap focused "career". Thanks.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

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You would... End up in a relationship with simp Stan?

 

[Elisagee]

You would... End up in a relationship with simp Stan?

Sure, why not? He's one of my branches.

In any case, you can ask "you would . . . end up in a relationship with_____?" with any number of dudes/gals in the game and get a cocked eyebrow. It's the nature of the game. It was scripted in. So debates are largely pointless as you're not gonna change my kinks any more than I'm gonna change yours. So lets not waste each others time and enjoy the goon.

 

[DaLuke2]

Sure, why not? He's one of my branches.

In any case, you can ask "you would . . . end up in a relationship with_____?" with any number of dudes/gals in the game and get a cocked eyebrow. It's the nature of the game. It was scripted in. So debates are largely pointless as you're not gonna change my kinks any more than I'm gonna change yours. So lets not waste each others time and enjoy the goon.

I am open to any branches, as long as it is developed with quality. And that's precisely the problem with EK's development choices since chapter 9:

- Robert: pretty gross love option, though I admit there were two kinky moments: 1/ when Lena calls him to fuck her right after her date with Ian 2/ Her last scene with him, if she is cheating on Ian. But overall yawning.

- Mike: the first ONS was really exciting. Then it became boring, until Ian gives Lena reasons to cheat on him and the first cheating scenes are exciting. Then boring again.

- Jeremy: the first Lena scene with him is probably one of my favorite moments in the game, just as the last sex scene, probably the hottest moment in the game in terms of lewed scenes (my real hottest moment in the game is not a lewed scene, will come back to this in a moment). However these are the kind of scenes I will enjoy straight from the gallery, NOT in my playthroughs, as they make no sense within my Wits Lena faithful to Ian but open to swinging. In my main playthrough, Jeremy's role would be Chad stag Ian offering a BBC to Lena in return to Lena offering him FMFs. However this has not happened yet after five years, and quite frankly EK is starting to get on my nerves at this point.

- Axel: I do have a playthrough where Lena only sleeps with him. It would be my canon playthrough if they were more scenes and group sex involved, i.e. 3sum with Cindy or Cherry, Stag Axel sharing Lena to BBC or whatever, swinging.....But nothing like it happened, only the same sex scene over and over again. Lena in a relationship with Ian cheating with Axel is a quite well-written playthrough, but it is starting to be pretty boring too.

- Mark: the only kinky moment is if Lena cheats on Ian when sucking Mark's cock in the club's bathroom minutes after meeting him. Everything else since then has absolutely no interest whatsoever.

- Marcel: the BJ scene was particularly poorly written, one of EK"s lowest moments in terms of writing and also in terms of illustration (Lena's smile while wanking him is just NOT Lena). Besides, what's that fucking thing about pressing his cock without fucking him ??? You either fuck him, or take a facial, but that was screwed as hell. Besides, I don't find Marcel attractive (am straight though so maybe girls see sth I don't). So, a big No.

- Jack: the bathroom scene was exciting, especially if you have a wits Lena who has not cheated on Ian yet and gets fucked in the bathroom by this stranger minutes after meeting him, and squirts on him while your Ian never managed that after months of relationship. However, everything else is wrong. The dialog is rubbish (that "gimme ur alpha cock", oh my...), the copy of Axel's position if their first scene, none of this is up to EK's standards. Just like Jeremy, Jack could have been a good option for a Chad stag Ian/Lena MFM. But of course, EK did not deliver, as usual.

- Seymour: I will be very short: I have no interest in this path whatsoever. And given their eventual sex scene, I am pretty sure that anyone who had interest in that path were devastated and lost interest too. Those who fantasized BDSM in Dubai ended up with a soft sugar daddy. Miserable.

- The NTR path: conversely to what everyone says here, there is no NTR scene in this game as of now. NONE. after five years. The NTR path can be summarized in a second: Lena wanking Ian while asking him "would you let me fuck someone else ? Mmmmh ?". That's it for the NTR path after five fucking years. EK is being insulting here. Besides, I find this path quite depressing. Not a path I enjoy playing.

- Holly Trinity: probably the best written path, and what would probably be the only cannon path if this was a visual novel. The game seems to have been made to lead to this. It all makes sense. However, it excludes Lena's MFM fantasy, so I do not use it for my main playthrough (EK's stupid choice limitations, again and again and again. And again).

- John: I have only one question: "Eva Kiss, what the fuck ???"

- So finally Stan: actually, this is one of the least badly-written path, especially without stalkfap. However....Good luck with giving me a hard one.

- Eventually, none of the paths fully satisfy me.
In my main playthrough, the one I find the least frustrating, Wits Lena on the romance path has only slept with Ian (very late), Emma and Ivy, and has shown interest in group sex both ways, has shown attraction to Mike, Jeremy, Mark, Marcel and Jack without sleeping with any of them, and has suggested Jeremy for the MFM (the reason why I did not give my Ian the threesome with Louise, again EK's super annoying constraints).
Chad Ian has fucked anyone he could as often has he could but became faithful when they got serious. He wants an FMF and finds the idea of a MFM equally hot.
I said this path is the least frustrating to me, though absolutely not ideal. Basically I did not have any lewed scene for the last six updates, and Lena/Ian exclusive sex scenes are starting to be quite boring to me.
Actually, to me the hottest moment in the whole game is when Lena suggests Chad Ian a threesome with both a girl and a guy, and that Ian finds it hot. The very fact that, up to now, the hottest moment of the game is a dialog, not a sex scene, is very revealing about my degree of frustration.

I reread myself right now, and I realize that what I really think is that EK has lost her shit.

 

[Deleted member 9531151]

I am open to any branches, as long as it is developed with quality. And that's precisely the problem with EK's development choices since chapter 9:

- Robert: pretty gross love option, though I admit there were two kinky moments: 1/ when Lena calls him to fuck her right after her date with Ian 2/ Her last scene with him, if she is cheating on Ian. But overall yawning.

- Mike: the first ONS was really exciting. Then it became boring, until Ian gives Lena reasons to cheat on him and the first cheating scenes are exciting. Then boring again.

- Jeremy: the first Lena scene with him is probably one of my favorite moments in the game, just as the last sex scene, probably the hottest moment in the game in terms of lewed scenes (my real hottest moment in the game is not a lewed scene, will come back to this in a moment). However these are the kind of scenes I will enjoy straight from the gallery, NOT in my playthroughs, as they make no sense within my Wits Lena faithful to Ian but open to swinging. In my main playthrough, Jeremy's role would be Chad stag Ian offering a BBC to Lena in return to Lena offering him FMFs. However this has not happened yet after five years, and quite frankly EK is starting to get on my nerves at this point.

- Axel: I do have a playthrough where Lena only sleeps with him. It would be my canon playthrough if they were more scenes and group sex involved, i.e. 3sum with Cindy or Cherry, Stag Axel sharing Lena to BBC or whatever, swinging.....But nothing like it happened, only the same sex scene over and over again. Lena in a relationship with Ian cheating with Axel is a quite well-written playthrough, but it is starting to be pretty boring too.

- Mark: the only kinky moment is if Lena cheats on Ian when sucking Mark's cock in the club's bathroom minutes after meeting him. Everything else since then has absolutely no interest whatsoever.

- Marcel: the BJ scene was particularly poorly written, one of EK"s lowest moments in terms of writing and also in terms of illustration (Lena's smile while wanking him is just NOT Lena). Besides, what's that fucking thing about pressing his cock without fucking him ??? You either fuck him, or take a facial, but that was screwed as hell. Besides, I don't find Marcel attractive (am straight though so maybe girls see sth I don't). So, a big No.

- Jack: the bathroom scene was exciting, especially if you have a wits Lena who has not cheated on Ian yet and gets fucked in the bathroom by this stranger minutes after meeting him, and squirts on him while your Ian never managed that after months of relationship. However, everything else is wrong. The dialog is rubbish (that "gimme ur alpha cock", oh my...), the copy of Axel's position if their first scene, none of this is up to EK's standards. Just like Jeremy, Jack could have been a good option for a Chad stag Ian/Lena MFM. But of course, EK did not deliver, as usual.

- Seymour: I will be very short: I have no interest in this path whatsoever. And given their eventual sex scene, I am pretty sure that anyone who had interest in that path were devastated and lost interest too. Those who fantasized BDSM in Dubai ended up with a soft sugar daddy. Miserable.

- The NTR path: conversely to what everyone says here, there is no NTR scene in this game as of now. NONE. after five years. The NTR path can be summarized in a second: Lena wanking Ian while asking him "would you let me fuck someone else ? Mmmmh ?". That's it for the NTR path after five fucking years. EK is being insulting here. Besides, I find this path quite depressing. Not a path I enjoy playing.

- Holly Trinity: probably the best written path, and what would probably be the only cannon path if this was a visual novel. The game seems to have been made to lead to this. It all makes sense. However, it excludes Lena's MFM fantasy, so I do not use it for my main playthrough (EK's stupid choice limitations, again and again and again. And again).

- John: I have only one question: "Eva Kiss, what the fuck ???"

- So finally Stan: actually, this is one of the least badly-written path, especially without stalkfap. However....Good luck with giving me a hard one.

- Eventually, none of the paths fully satisfy me.
In my main playthrough, the one I find the least frustrating, Wits Lena on the romance path has only slept with Ian (very late), Emma and Ivy, and has shown interest in group sex both ways, has shown attraction to Mike, Jeremy, Mark, Marcel and Jack without sleeping with any of them, and has suggested Jeremy for the MFM (the reason why I did not give my Ian the threesome with Louise, again EK's super annoying constraints).
Chad Ian has fucked anyone he could as often has he could but became faithful when they got serious. He wants an FMF and finds the idea of a MFM equally hot.
I said this path is the least frustrating to me, though absolutely not ideal. Basically I did not have any lewed scene for the last six updates, and Lena/Ian exclusive sex scenes are starting to be quite boring to me.
Actually, to me the hottest moment in the whole game is when Lena suggests Chad Ian a threesome with both a girl and a guy, and that Ian finds it hot. The very fact that, up to now, the hottest moment of the game is a dialog, not a sex scene, is very revealing about my degree of frustration.

I reread myself right now, and I realize that what I really think is that EK has lost her shit.

Jeremy's more of a fling for Lena, she herself admits it's a fetish. Id have loved if he was a love interest like Cindy is to Ian.

 

[Saerwen]

Some behaviour of characters in the game is a unusual to me. I don't get what being on your knees and taking a selfie of holding a big dick should mean? Is that a thing among OF girls, porn actresses or what?

 

[Deleted member 9531151]

Some behaviour of the characters in the game is a unusual to me. I don't get what being on your knees and taking a selfie of holding a big dick should mean? Is that a thing among OF girls, porn actresses or what?

same way guys take a picture after hunting a moose or something . Besides you guys wouldn't hesitate to take pictures of yourself Buried between a woman's bossoms... What's so different?

 

[Saerwen]

same way guys take a picture after hunting a moose or something . Besides you guys wouldn't hesitate to take pictures of yourself Buried between a woman's bossoms... What's so different?

I can't speak on behalf of men, but as a woman, this is new to me so that's why I asked.

 

[Elisagee]

Some behaviour of characters in the game is a unusual to me. I don't get what being on your knees and taking a selfie of holding a big dick should mean? Is that a thing among OF girls, porn actresses or what?

I wasn't sure about this one either, but damn it looks good in the right light! Plus maybe it's 'cause I'm Gen X, but so much video evidence of cheating is bound to bite any ORS character in the ass. Didn't Ashley get into trouble because of all the video evidence in GGGB? It's been a long time since I played it.

 

[dolfe67]

Jeremy's more of a fling for Lena, she herself admits it's a fetish. Id have loved if he was a love interest like Cindy is to Ian.

There is a love option with him quite late so I think he's a LI for Lena.

And I'm not into taking self-porn pics either, I found it a bit jarring when Lena took one with Jeremy's dick

 

[Xill]

Some behaviour of characters in the game is a unusual to me. I don't get what being on your knees and taking a selfie of holding a big dick should mean? Is that a thing among OF girls, porn actresses or what?

Basically, his cock is like a trophy. That's it.

Speaking of which, I keep seeing people say GGGB was all about BBC and raceplay.

Meanwhile me:


I wish that game had a walkthrough like JMOD.

Also Ivy being a cancer is interesting, not sure if fitting though, but maybe with a few loopholes. Cancers are supposed to be the emotional type (I'm the first week of July too, I'd know (not that I believe much in that stuff tho)), but afaik she isn't even interested in having a proper relationship with anyone. But maybe distributing some sexual healing to others is considered emotional.

 

[Deleted member 9531151]

There is a love option with him quite late so I think he's a LI for Lena.

And I'm not into taking self-porn pics either, I found it a bit jarring when Lena took one with Jeremy's dick

Damn i must be doing something wrong. I have played through this about 5 times now, with different completely different narratives and yet

 

[chestofideas]

I think Jeremy is very well written, and truly, for people to be amazed that we would take pictures with a thing like that.... well....

 

[ffive]

Some behaviour of characters in the game is a unusual to me. I don't get what being on your knees and taking a selfie of holding a big dick should mean? Is that a thing among OF girls, porn actresses or what?

I mean, it's basically taking some pics for your spank bank for later? Same why people film themselves having sex. You won't tell me this is something new that women don't participate in.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Sure, why not? He's one of my branches.

In any case, you can ask "you would . . . end up in a relationship with_____?" with any number of dudes/gals in the game and get a cocked eyebrow. It's the nature of the game. It was scripted in. So debates are largely pointless as you're not gonna change my kinks any more than I'm gonna change yours. So lets not waste each others time and enjoy the goon.

Do you understand what the would reaction is used for?

same way guys take a picture after hunting a moose or something . Besides you guys wouldn't hesitate to take pictures of yourself Buried between a woman's bossoms... What's so different?

So now hunting game and sucking dick in the back of a night club is the same thing

The male 'equivalent' of what you're talking about is dudes taking vids while giving backshots

 

[Saerwen]

I mean, it's basically taking some pics for your spank bank for later? Same why people film themselves having sex. You won't tell me this is something new that women don't participate in.

Dunno, I know you can send nudes and sexting/phone sex but there's much more of guys sending randomly dick pics. It's one of the reason I stopped going on Omegle, impossible to chat with normal people.

 

[ymy42]

A sane Lena should never look at Jeremy when Ian is around...
If you're playing a slutty Lena who sleeps with every man she meets, that's a different story...

Ian is the only man in the play who is written with any depth. This has nothing to do with him being the male protagonist.
The many female supporting characters in the play are also quite deeply developed.
The one thing all the male supporting characters have in common is that they have dicks...
(Google translate sorry)

 

[Deleted member 9531151]

Do you understand what the would reaction is used for?


So now hunting game and sucking dick in the back of a night club is the same thing

The male 'equivalent' of what you're talking about is dudes taking vids while giving backshots

I also mentioned taking pictures of your head in someone's breast... It's personal isn't it Ian fan boy ? Ian's still ugly !!!!!!!

 

[Deleted member 9232069]

I also mentioned taking pictures of your head in someone's breast... It's personal isn't it Ian fan boy ? Ian's still ugly !!!!!!!

Ians supposed to look as average as possible so that every male audience could relate. He is purposefully made to look average or maybe below average to some. Some would say his face is above average even.