VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Saerwen]

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Just a quick status update:
My goal was (and still is) to have the chapter ready this week, but I’m going to need a few more days to finish the remaining scenes. Writing, testing, and working on the visuals has been my sole focus, and it's frustrating that progress still feels slower than I’d like, but the truth is, this stuff takes a hell of a lot of time.

The scenes in this chapter are not only layered, they’re also tightly interconnected, with some even overlapping. That makes them really tedious to flesh out and tricky to structure together within the narrative arc.

On top of that, I’ve insisted on adding new 3, 4, and even 5-frame animations and cosmetic tweaks, which makes generating the images a real drag (but hopefully worth it in the end).

Right now I’m working on the final two scenes, and also waiting on the last batch of art from my colorist so I can add the final polish. I’ll be testing things in parallel so I can put out something solid and playable ASAP.

The plan is to make the last two scenes combinable, but to pull that off, I need both the artwork and time to write. I’d rather not release the alpha without that last bit, but I’m also racing to get everything ready this week as promised (plus, it’s my birthday this weekend and I’d really like to celebrate a little!).

If I haven’t been very active on socials lately, it’s because I’ve been pouring all my time and energy into finishing this chapter, and now I’m getting back to it. I’ll share an update right before launch, which I’m hoping will be very soon (if not by the end of this week, then the next).

Oh, by the way: which color do you think better fits Ivy's bikini?

Meh, there's no difference between the middle one and the right one but i think the yellow bikini fits her the best. Red colour fits women with brown and black hair more.

 

[Saerwen]

Rowan like Ian, been cuck meanwhile Lena as Alexia being banged by Andras as Axel.

I think that every human male who's threatened by a demon from hell would drop on their knees fast to be cucks if they want to survive.

 

[Skylark21]

First 2 days of Lena's trip. There are total 3 days FYI.

Billy's trip is going to be a 3 day event as Eva said, so I doubt there's gonna be Ian's pov for chapter 14. Even it does, it'll be a short pov switch similar to one Lena got during beach trip event.

 

[Blurpee69]

Well, Lena doesn't have to be a slut to have sex.

Sure she is, only sluts have sex. It's why everyone on this planet is a slut except Mother Mary, because she can give birth without sex. Biological enigma though that may be.

I understand but the Cindy path is only just opening up and has the potential to be one of the most interesting romances in the game. I can't wait to see where it goes from here.
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I really like the direction the Cindy romance path has gone. There were definitely a few chapters there where I honestly really disliked Cindy, it felt her character and relationship with Wade weren't really going anywhere and was a shallow storyline. Then... Eva turned on their magic I guess, and now I think hers is the most interesting behind the throuple.

Meh, there's no difference between the middle one and the right one but i think the yellow bikini fits her the best. Red colour fits women with brown and black hair more.

Except the right one is lavender and the middle one is red and technically lavender is Ivy's associated color. Considering also that Red is associated with lust in this game and Ivy is also technically associated with lust, despite what SerHawkes might tell you, I'd argue that yellow is the least Ivy of the three colors presented.

 

[ffive]

Meh, there's no difference between the middle one and the right one

The one on the right is mauve, the one in the middle is red.



So quite different. I think the one on the right is interesting pick, since it's kind-of red but with some pink tinge and less in your face than Ivy normally is. The gold clashes a bit with silver hair.

Except the right one is lavender and the middle one is red and technically lavender is Ivy's associated color.

That's not really lavender, though -- lavender is more bluish than that:



(although there's apparently something called "twilight lavender" which is basically mauve, so we can come to partial agreement on this ;v

 

[BlandChili]

That's quite an interpretation of the definition of this word, isn't it.

That people don't have to be sluts to enjoy sex?

 

[Saerwen]

Sure she is, only sluts have sex. It's why everyone on this planet is a slut except Mother Mary, because she can give birth without sex. Biological enigma though that may be.

Idk if you are sarcastic or not but thankfully it's 21st century and technology is advanced, meaning women can be "Mother Marry" i.e virgin mothers. They don't need to have sex to be mothers since artificial insemination exists. So, lesbians or hetero women who want to be single moms.

 

[Blurpee69]

Idk if you are sarcastic or not but thankfully it's 21st century and technology is advanced, meaning women can be "Mother Marry" i.e virgin mothers. They don't need to have sex to be mothers since artificial insemination exists. So, lesbians or hetero women who want to be single moms.

I was 1000% being sarcastic. Imagine. Slut shaming in a freaking porn thread.

The one on the right is mauve, the one in the middle is red.

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So quite different. I think the one on the right is interesting pick, since it's kind-of red but with some pink tinge and less in your face than Ivy normally is. The gold clashes a bit with silver hair.


That's not really lavender, though -- lavender is more bluish than that:

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(although there's apparently something called "twilight lavender" which is basically mauve, so we can come to partial agreement on this ;v

Dawg, I can only see in 16 bits. I don't know what a mauve is.

 

[Saerwen]

The one on the right is mauve, the one in the middle is red.

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So quite different. I think the one on the right is interesting pick, since it's kind-of red but with some pink tinge and less in your face than Ivy normally is. The gold clashes a bit with silver hair.


That's not really lavender, though -- lavender is more bluish than that:

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(although there's apparently something called "twilight lavender" which is basically mauve, so we can come to partial agreement on this ;v

That's it, thanks! I guess every shade have a name and it's different.

 

[ffive]

That people don't have to be sluts to enjoy sex?

You know that only sluts enjoy sex. A proper human being either lies on their back or does mechanical motions necessary for impregnation with no enjoyment and thinks of the Queen* while they perform the act.

*) Not like that, you perverts.

 

[Saerwen]

You know that only sluts enjoy sex. A proper human being either lies on their back or does mechanical motions necessary for impregnation with no enjoyment and thinks of the Queen* while they perform the act.

*) Not like that, you perverts.

There's even a quote: "All woman are whores, except my mother. But then again she is a woman.” I think Napoleon said that but I'm not sure.

 

[BlandChili]

You know that only sluts enjoy sex. A proper human being either lies on their back or does mechanical motions necessary for impregnation with no enjoyment and thinks of the Queen* while they perform the act.

*) Not like that, you perverts.

A real human being only does soaking before marriage.

 

[Saerwen]

A real human being only does soaking before marriage.

Properly baptised.

 

[Nifferman]

There's even a quote: "All woman are whores, except my mother. But then again she is a woman.” I think Napoleon said that but I'm not sure.

Mmm.....but what if that mother is a hooker, Geigi?

 

[Saerwen]

Mmm.....but what if that mother is a hooker, Geigi?

That you'd need to ask the person who said it since his words make no sense anyway.

 

[SerHawkes]

Ivy is also technically associated with lust, despite what @SerHawkes might tell you

Ivy is indeed associated with lust. Also playful mischief and encouragement, and family oriented (TBD).

As for the colors... I hate them. They aren't even original. Gold? How generic for most strippers. Red? Again, generic. Same with Lavander/Purple. Why not go a lightish blue that goes with her hair?

 

[ffive]

Why not go a lightish blue that goes with her hair?

Blue is also the color associated with Virgin Mary. So you know, perfect for Saint Ivy.

 

[SerHawkes]

Blue is also the color associated with Virgin Mary. So you know, perfect for Saint Ivy.

Dor e may...

 

[Erotica Biblion]

i'll say it again ,the cuck route is wasted with Lena idk how ppl like it, if there is a route for cuck shit it should me with Alison. it makes more sense in my opinion.

There shouldn't be a cuck route. The cuck route should be cucks not playing the game while the rest of us play.

 

[What'sNew]

I do wonder if Jessica's bikini changes depending on whether its good or bad Jess. Im assuming Jess takes part in the photoshoot either way.