VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

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dolfe67 said:
Does someone have an idea from wich people is Zarina based on? Her face looks kinda familiar :unsure:
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Ana de Armas but busty crossed my mind a few times. And yeah, I know she's annoyingly brought up constantly these days, but I do feel like it actually fits somewhat here. There could be a closer fit though.
 
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stuffygames said:
I liked the update, not as much content as I would like (we all want more content asap!), but it was pretty good minus the alpha bugs.

Ivy is showing her true origin, she is actually the result of an unfortunate encounter involving a giant Boa constrictor and Gene Simmons.
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It was a one time thing according to Gene, the constrictor never recovered. With this update her scales are starting to show. The stress of her failing life is causing the predatory instincts of her reptilian side to wear her human facade thin. Dragging down all the hot and innocent girls around her is the only path to survival. We may find in future updates that Louise and Ivy are unknowingly related, explaining why Louise is so clingy.
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Makes sense, given her weird predatory attitude. Considering Gene is also a notorious predator.

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Alison reveal? So far Alison always(!) chooses Ian, if he shows at least some interest. Others becoming irrelevant for her. And I also have good relations with Jeremy, nothing done on his side that could endanger their friendship.
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Given that she hooks up with Jeremy when her, Ian and Emma go to the club, if Ian doesn't end up looking for her right away... I'd say that she knew what she was doing to make him jealous.

I do still find it weird that she doesn't make Jeremy use a condom (other than the threesome) while demanding Ian use one every time.

WestSide23 said:
The Ian side is just better. Much better love interests options, the book writing/reviewing and MMA are more engaging self-development "quests" than music lyrics and modeling poses (for me anyway), actual core friend group to bounce off of (other side has Louise, Ivy and Stan fucking lmao), you get to feel like you "earn" your sex scenes whereas Lena gets them on command (which is logical, but still less engaging in the context of a game).

Though to be fair, the Ian side doesn't have to accomodate the demand for a corruption route the way Lena does. But I agree with you since I don't care too much for the dark tone of GGGB.
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I agree, other than Bad Jess, Ian's sex partners all seem like people worth getting to know. Lena? Other than Ian and Holly, not at all. In fact, she has some of the worst possible pairings, between Stan, Arthur, Mike, Robert, Ivy, Mark or that Patreon dude.
 
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mehGusta said:
sorry, no mud wrestling yet, if you were hoping for that. what i talk about is the passive aggressiveness between zarina and ivy.

have you ever looked in the code of the game? or rather have you ever tried writing your own? because i have and i can tell you it's a variable-nightmare.
i don't wanna state a position here, claiming that evakiss is milking her patrons or not, that's besides my point. i don't know how time consuming her art is and claim how much time she saves by rehashing scenes, or if doing entirely new ones would be that much of a workload. but i can tell you that that kind of code evakiss writes is mindnumbingly complex and hard to keep track of.
there is a variable in there that tracks lena's drug consumption and in a scene with anthony it might overrule a chance to have an option going forward or stopping. then it might get tailored to how lena and ian currently engage in their relationship, which alone has so many variables on how it got formed, how it's going and the degree on either part of their faithfulness. not to forget the possible addition of holly in this. and all that and more, for just scene variation for that specific anthony scene!
you have to keep track of the variables themselves, then inconsistencies (for example is a variable check for relationship type between ian and lena pointless if they are in the throuple with holly), and knowing when and how to use variables at what point in the story.
that's work work work.

and the prologue of v14? that came out in the middle of august. now internally that script file is renamed to chapter14a and got roughly 4 times bigger than before. but we also have chapter14b now as well, which is 2 times bigger than chapter14a as well!

no, frankly speaking i'm impressed she wrote all that in a month and a half (but maybe i'm just really slow with that myself, so the final verdict is on you guys). and how many bugs did we find so far? i'd be surprised we get over 10 . that is very well within reason!
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Don't get me wrong, I am happy that she put out an update. It does seem like she dug herself into a hole though with the extraordinary amount of choices and paths this will require now.

I guess we know what EK's sex fantasy scenario is though... a porno shoot pool party.

BlandChili said:
Alternatively maybe Alison likes collecting Ian's love juice. She empties the condoms she collects into a jar she keeps in her room. :eek:
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I used to stick my dick in a crazy girl, who insisted I cum inside her and then would whinge about the fact that I came inside her, but when I'd pull out, she'd be mad about me not giving her a creampie. I couldn't win. Alison does seem equally crazy. Apparently her pussy magic made Milo into a homeless fent addled psycho.
 
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LoneWaker59 said:
I have no idea if this scene has already happened because I don’t play Cindy’s route, but inside the game files there are these two variations of photos. File is called "cindy_phone1" and "cindy_phone2"
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Yeah I found those too a while back. During the beach chapter I think? It's been a while and I don't feel like looking up my post :ROFLMAO:
 
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I don't know if this has been addressed, but I found a story bug. In my run through, Jess's fiancee is the GGGB protagonist, not Dave (and Jess does say so when talking to Lena in an earlier chapter), but now it's suddenly Dave.
 
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Olivia_V said:
I don't know if this has been addressed, but I found a story bug. In my run through, Jess's fiancee is the GGGB protagonist, not Dave (and Jess does say so when talking to Lena in an earlier chapter), but now it's suddenly Dave.
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I forgot which is the variable but depending of who Lena have been with in the run, good Jess fiancee could be with Dave or Ash
 
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Imma sound like that grumpy old man who's never happy but... I don't like the update.

It's meh. Zarina is nice tho. She has nonchalant rich bitch attitude that I like. Plus the model is really nice. Good convos with Lena too. I really fucking like her.

Otherwise, the rest is... meh.

Ivy looked like a damn clown. She was oozing dumb bitch energy throughout the update, more so that her usual self.

Billy legit made me nauseous. That winking stuck out tongue expression he kept making legit had me want to recreate American History X's favorite scene with him. Bro looked like he waxes his ass. Such a damn fall from grace from what OG Billy woulda been.

Danny doesn't deserve so many dialogues.

Anthony I ain't talked to him cuz he wears speedos. Plus his head is shaped like a bent knee so he weirded me out. Maybe he's set as some 'eye candy' for female players idfk.

Sonia probably dozes off on bleach fumes.
 
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Ray_D said:
Eva has been doing it subtly for a long time. It seems she's so burned out on ORS that she doesn't give a damn about subtlety anymore.:KEK:
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That Qos tattoo even when you have high relationship points with her... is really bad. The problem i'm seeing is that this type of content and this stupidty of Billy in a chapter 14? which should have been late game already, and some serious progress in some paths like being a model or a singing path, but we have sketchy, and stupid low cost influencer? Bruh
 
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lorkdubo said:
That Qos tattoo even when you have high relationship points with her... is really bad. The problem i'm seeing is that this type of content and this stupidty of Billy in a chapter 14? which should have been late game already, and some serious progress in some paths like being a model or a singing path, but we have sketchy, and stupid low cost influencer? Bruh
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Well, Ivy has always been jealous of Lena and has always tried to drag Lena down into her misery. The difference is that before it was more subtle, and it seems that Eva decided to flanderize that characteristic of Ivy.
 
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PilotLara I noticed lena_ian_love gets set to 0 sometime this update if you're in an open relationship. It was at 2 at the beginning of the chapter. I noticed it when I couldn't pick the heart option for Ian. Is it by design or is it a bug?
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