VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[dengl]

I dont think Ian is boring per se but this epilogue proves Lena is the best MC by far and is not even close.

It's funny how I like the progression in this epilogue than the whole chapter 11. But the chapter has the most Holly content in a while but in my multiple play through Holly route was my least preferred so probably that's why I like this epilogue more than the chapter itself

 

[Socrambus]

A few things I didn't like about this latest update:

> It seems the game is going in the same direction as the end of GGGB, fetish after fetish (mainly BBC + Cuck);
> Marcel's scene is TOO FORCED, but I understand that EvaKiss needs to please the Patreons who put him at the top;

Is it really forced though?. I only played the epilogue with one of my saves, but I didn't encounter any BBC or cuck content. I had to watch the scenes in the gallery. It's not my cup of tea, specially the cuck part, but I don't see what's wrong with the content being there for those who might enjoy it. Specially when you have to make a conscious effort with your choices to be able to get that content at all.

 

[catgameryt011]

Will there be a pregnancy tag in your next update?

 

[pango173]

close this game. make GGGB 2 i would pay 100

 

[fatpussy123]

fatpussy123 this is responses of Lena in Chad Ian playthrough and IanxLena are not couple but dating and both are in love with eachother.

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Thanks for posting these

As I've said before the one clear way to resolve this conflict is through sex. Ian, Lena, and Cindy threesome coming next chapter, mark down your calendars

 

[Hungover00]

It seems we are heading into "Marcel is going to fuck all our waifus" section of the game.

Who's Marcel?

 

[Meowmadam]

"I've also added two new narrative scenes that weren't present in the Beta, nothing major, but it sheds light on a new plot point in the Seymour route as well as detail a bit more of Ian and Lena's relationship. "

No new erotic scene?

 

[Erectosaurus]

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Damn it looks like Ian and Cindy's relationship is doomed to implode no matter what.

 

[soprano31]

Who's Marcel?

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[fatpussy123]

I don't think this epilogue is terrible but there are several moments that don't make sense based on previous choices and actions.

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Those inconsistencies with previous choices and moments in the story are where the epilogue drops the ball. These are also the reasons why I don't think it is particularly good despite not being terrible either.

One other thing I realized though was how short Lena's part in chapter 11 was. According to Eva, this epilogue was of the same length or at least close to it yet it still seemed relatively short (as should be expected by an epilogue not however by the main chapter).

I think 1 and 3 are oversights that may be fixed in the beta and final releases if theyre reported. 2 Just is. Cindy is always jealous of Lena even absent of Axel's influence as seen at Lena's concert. Lena picks up on Cindy's cattyness and responds in kind. I'm guessing this is just a limitation of the story and there isnt room for a Lena and Cindy friendship when so much of Cindy's story revolves around Axel.

 

[Hungover00]

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I think you meant to say Jeremy.

/s not /s

 

[flanby]

I'm a big fan of IanxCindy but I like this, I like a little bit drama, misunderstandings between them... it makes everything more interesting.

 

[Hungover00]

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It says Bouncer in the picture, folk could occasionally throw in a Marcel/Bouncer, since how many times do we actually hear his name said? 2-3?

 

[TheMarquis]

Really Cindy? Really?? WTF

 

[Gicoo]

How do you get the scene with

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Still don't know how to get that scene. Anyone?

 

[Jenaah]

Still don't know how to get that scene. Anyone?

Be with high relations with Jeremy(With sex scenes). You should have Lena & Jeremy going outside before opening, pick a option with smiley face("Marcel has earpeaces" like quote, below "Flirt with Jeremy" option).

 

[Lorenz1]

She and Axel are going to have a baby, his name will be Ian Watts II

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Who will write an amazing fetish book, yees.

 

[Nifferman]

I dont think Ian is boring per se but this epilogue proves Lena is the best MC by far and is not even close.

Yes ,Lena might be the better mc but Ian is way better than Alex as an MC . Ian is more relaxed and flexible than Alex and an all rounder

 

[LoneWaker59]

Is it really forced though?. I only played the epilogue with one of my saves, but I didn't encounter any BBC or cuck content. I had to watch the scenes in the gallery. It's not my cup of tea, specially the cuck part, but I don't see what's wrong with the content being there for those who might enjoy it. Specially when you have to make a conscious effort with your choices to be able to get that content at all.

And who here is saying it's wrong? it's just very predictable and makes the episode much shorter for those who aren't interested in seeing these fetish scenes.
It's funny how you pretend that Marcel's scene isn't forced because of the Patreon votes, he was literally a non-existent character in the plot, not even in the other interactions did he show any interest in Lena, it doesn't matter if Lena is a slut or faithful, he'll say something like "A little bird told me you like big black tools" regardless.

 

[bauman]

It seems we are heading into "Marcel is going to fuck all our waifus" section of the game.

The GGGB fanbase:

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