VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Gato21]

I think Seymour would be sharing her and then somehow be forced into abandoning her for his own safety, or she would be sold by Agnes...at least that is how I would probably write it.


Do not forget that the story has many branches. The branch I proposed need not compromise others.

Spoiler: Case in point

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Yet why does your tone always make it sound like you are not laughing? And why did you originally describe my proposal as "Entirely possible"?

My dude, do you see slave tag in genre? Also, possible does not equal probable.

and way more appropriate for a porn game. There are also scams luring people into sex trades from places (Eastern Europe) where unemployment is a big problem. Perhaps I am misreadng the "tone" of some of the messages here...but people seem to be genuinely upset over a discussion between anonymous people over a porn game! Curious.

Every major city has that shit going on. You don't need to go to Dubai for that. Also, people are probably just sick of your fan fiction approaching My Immortal levels of cringe.

 

[Andrea9999]

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Just keep manning the bridge.

 

[SerHawkes]

Also, possible does not equal probable.

Some really don't understand words good it seems. Then again I'm close to setting a block party for sanity purposes.

 

[Andrea9999]

My dude, do you see slave tag in genre? Also, possible does not equal probable.

Every major city has that shit going on. You don't need to go to Dubai for that. Also, people are probably just sick of your fan fiction approaching My Immortal levels of cringe.

Who checks tags?? Besides, there was nothing in the tags about restaurants. Some of the action included restaurants. Right? Right?? And you cringe too easily....especially for an immortal. (I hope there was nothing in the tags about restaurants)

 

[Gato21]

Who checks tags?? And you cringe too easily....especially for an immortal.

Come on. You can do better than that.

 

[Andrea9999]

Come on. You can do better than that.

Apologies....I will try again tomorrow. btw: Love your avatar!

 

[| Vee |]

I think Seymour would be sharing her and then somehow be forced into abandoning her for his own safety, or she would be sold by Agnes...at least that is how I would probably write it.


Do not forget that the story has many branches. The branch I proposed need not compromise others.

Spoiler: Case in point

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Yet why does your tone always make it sound like you are not laughing? And why did you originally describe my proposal as "Entirely possible"?

A bit of advice if you may, mods delete posts with multi colors(first hand experience) that's why I'm using one color in my posts lately. They don't tolerate this shit (sighs).

 

[MF_DOOM]

I'm getting very confused about all the Dubai discussion. Unless I missed something, the travel talk was literally only a way to further emphasize Lena's posh / spoiled level. I never read further into that conversation than that.

And yet I've seen multiple people saying Lena is going to get sold to an oil barren, or more, because of this one decision. Honestly curious where you all are getting that? It seems incredibly far fetched, bordering on lunacy to read that far into, to me, a throwaway decision.

That's one of the reasons I follow this thread, to read crazy bullshit theories about the game and laugh out loud.

 

[Xupuzulla]

Dubai?
I always picked Japan,maybe im a weeb

 

[SearingFive]

Dubai has 0 % income tax, that's what luring people in who're able to work from anywhere in the world. But I guess perverted Arabs sounds more exciting...

Maybe I should've phrased it better, I meant 'elites' as in 'elites from all over the world'. I was not outing a specific group. If it came out wrong, then I am sorry for that.

 

[phantomz]

Though I think (in MNSHO) Our Red String has the potential to be way more erotic depending on how the Seymour-Dubai arc is developed. I believe SerHawkes is co-authoring that part with EK; he may be able to shed more light.

what is MNSHO ?

 

[SerHawkes]

what is MNSHO ?

Not mentioning I ain't co-authoring shit with EK and her own bullshit... Your guess is as good as mine.

 

[Gicoo]

If SerHawkes co-authored this, Ian and Ivy would've already build their harem and the other men would've been cucked and dead.

 

[BlandChili]

what is MNSHO ?

"My not so humble opinion," I think.

If SerHawkes co-authored this, Ian and Ivy would've already build their harem and the other men would've been cucked and dead.

Ian and Ivy - Sitting in a tree - F U C K I N G

 

[SerHawkes]

If SerHawkes co-authored this, Ian and Ivy would've already build their harem and the other men would've been cucked and dead.

Hardly. Harem would naturally be Lena and Holly in a open 4 way with an occational Emma fun time. Jeremy would be Jasmin's little bitch, Perry and Cherry would be a thing. Axel would be sleeping with the fishes, while Geymour would be in jail.

Ian and Ivy - Sitting in a tree - Making sweet sweet passionate love.

Fixed it you degenerate.

 

[Gicoo]

Perry and Cherry would be a thing.

I was giving him that until he complained that Ian only paid for half of the food. Ungrateful whiny brat.

 

[SerHawkes]

I was giving him that until he complained that Ian only paid for half of the food. Ungrateful whiny brat.

Fair. Perry the cockblocker is ungrateful as hell... Might have to rework a death scene then.

 

[Leongen43]

Fair. Perry the cockblocker is ungrateful as hell... Might have to rework a death scene then.

I would love to get rid of the rat Perry, we could modify some photos so that he believes that he and Lena have a hot and loving relationship, then we send the images to Axel so that he can go crazy and enter the apartment totally out of control and beat Perry to death, It will be a 2×1, right?
Perry dead and Axel in prison, could it be BBC jail where he could be very popular and can he find a new love that is as toxic as him?

 

[yuvce]

I'm getting very confused about all the Dubai discussion. Unless I missed something, the travel talk was literally only a way to further emphasize Lena's posh / spoiled level. I never read further into that conversation than that.

And yet I've seen multiple people saying Lena is going to get sold to an oil barren, or more, because of this one decision. Honestly curious where you all are getting that? It seems incredibly far fetched, bordering on lunacy to read that far into, to me, a throwaway decision.

Depraved fetishists leaking into this thread and imposing their idiotic scenarios just because they're starved of Seymour content.

 

[Andrea9999]

A bit of advice if you may, mods delete posts with multi colors(first hand experience) that's why I'm using one color in my posts lately. They don't tolerate this shit (sighs).

Thank you for the advice. I added colors to both my response and to the comments to which I was responding in a color coded way; in the same manner that the petroleum refineries use to indicate which fuels are in which pipes (so I have been told). I think it likely though, that the reply would remain up long enough to be read by the person to whom I am responding....and I actually sympathize to aome extent with the moderators; too much clutter tends to make things cluttered. But thank you; should I post something I want up for the ages, I will post in B&W.
(btw: why do they have a color text option if it is forbidden to use it?)