VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[mommysboiii]

I'm sure that at some point Ivy is going to get revenge on Cindy for all the work she took from her and for being a bitch

this will be so hot I cant wait for this part ivy pimping cindyy uffff

ivy on her way with cindy on her leash to her new business meeting

No doubt in my mind Ivy doesn't take every dick in the game

 

[lucadiadis]

I know now what bothers me with that game. When you read all thoughts all dialogs carefully, the only credible path is the vanilla path. Every other path is unbelievable. I suggest you try it: read every thought and dialog from Lena from the very first chapter: this is not a girl who will suck three cocks the same night ten chapters later. Complete bullshit. One of the very few superiorities of GGGB was that Ash's corruption was well built, if you chose the right options. The bookwrom-nerd Lena of chapter 1 becoming an onlyfans porn worker a few weeks later is just nonsense.

 

[SerHawkes]

I know now what bothers me with that game. When you read all thoughts all dialogs carefully, the only credible path is the vanilla path. Every other path is unbelievable. I suggest you try it: read every thought and dialog from Lena from the very first chapter: this is not a girl who will suck three cocks the same night ten chapters later. Complete bullshit. One of the very few superiorities of GGGB was that Ash's corruption was well built, if you chose the right options. The bookwrom-nerd Lena of chapter 1 becoming an onlyfans porn worker a few weeks later is just nonsense.

From my gathering, Lena does have a bit of a slutty side to her (likely thanks to Axel and prior fun times in the past with Ivy), so the onlyfans side of her is semi believeable. However, I do semi agree that the proposed ramp up of onlyfans content for Lena does seem a bit much.

 

[ffive]

I suggest you try it: read every thought and dialog from Lena from the very first chapter: this is not a girl who will suck three cocks the same night ten chapters later. Complete bullshit.

I think the writing is actually more subtle than that -- when Lena tells Ian about how her relationship with Axel was full of drama and jealousy, you can potentially interpret this as Lena being sexually open and chafing under Axel's demands. That is to say, Axel's jealousy and drama wasn't necessarily something completely unfounded. In latter chapters there's also pretty obvious mentions of events which suggest Lena even way before wasn't some sort of shy virginal flower who would panic at the thought of a penis.

Lena in first chapter is smarting from being cheated on, but it doesn't mean she's "vanilla girl".

 

[mommysboiii]

we already had 12 chapters for build up with all relationships with every girl and also for lena

I think its time that the corruption finally start and the game gets more kinky

 

[SerHawkes]

we already had 12 chapters for build up with all relationships with every girl and also for lena

I think its time that the corruption finally start and the game gets more kinky

Handholding and getting knocked by said handholding? Yes please.

 

[ffive]

Handholding

Look, there's filth and there's absolutely crossing the line, and this is it.

 

[SerHawkes]

Look, there's filth and there's absolutely crossing the line, and this is it.

I am a degenerate. I have no regrets.

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

I can't stand Lena, so in my versions, I chose all the possible girls for Ian, except Lena, mostly Lena is a slut who plays with many and agrees with Symour, which is the right life for her, For Ian my favorites are Holly, and a bit of an ex-lover of Axel, I don't remember the name, they are perfect for him, the rest are just good for fucking, in fact Jeremy fucks the others he can, hahahha

 

[lucadiadis]

From my gathering, Lena does have a bit of a slutty side to her (likely thanks to Axel and prior fun times in the past with Ivy), so the onlyfans side of her is semi believeable. However, I do semi agree that the proposed ramp up of onlyfans content for Lena does seem a bit much.

Not sure you will follow me on this but please just consider:
=> if you play the game carefully, Ian does not ask Lena to explain what happened with Cherry and in that case, there was officially NO threesome with Cherry and Axel.
=> If you deny Ivy, nothing happened between them apart from training to kiss (innocent enough) and if you turn down the cigarette on chapter 11 epilogue, Ivy expands on how Lena was the nerdest of nerds in her youth.

GRANTED:

- if you fool around with Ivy, then yes they did things in her youth + if Ian offers to listen, Lena had a threesome with Axel and Cherry + if you accept the fag, you were a naughty teenager.

=> I come back to my initial post:

Read the thoughts and dialogs of Lena in the first chapters carefully: is this the kind of girl that did crazy stuff in high school ? Is this the kind of girl that fools around easily ? Is this the kind of girl that accepts threesomes from her boyfriend easily ?

Sorry but No. That slut side from Lena comes from nowhere if she fucks Robert. Goodness gracious, even the line, when she invites Robert for drinks sounds wrong compared to anything we have read before about her.

 

[Leongen43]

we already had 12 chapters for build up with all relationships with every girl and also for lena

I think its time that the corruption finally start and the game gets more kinky

I'm looking forward to it, cuckolding, gangbang, orgies, bukkake, golden shower and a double anal friendship scene with Jeremy, Ian with Lena or Holly, will there be offers for lubricants and rubber gloves because Ian never has much money?

 

[SerHawkes]

Not sure you will follow me on this but please just consider:
=> if you play the game carefully, Ian does not ask Lena to explain what happened with Cherry and in that case, there was officially NO threesome with Cherry and Axel.
=> If you deny Ivy, nothing happened between them apart from training to kiss (innocent enough) and if you turn down the cigarette on chapter 11 epilogue, Ivy expands on how Lena was the nerdest of nerds in her youth.

GRANTED:

- if you fool around with Ivy, then yes they did things in her youth + if Ian offers to listen, Lena had a threesome with Axel and Cherry + if you accept the fag, you were a naughty teenager.

=> I come back to my initial post:

Read the thoughts and dialogs of Lena in the first chapters carefully: is this the kind of girl that did crazy stuff in high school ? Is this the kind of girl that fools around easily ? Is this the kind of girl that accepts threesomes from her boyfriend easily ?

Sorry but No. That slut side from Lena comes from nowhere if she fucks Robert. Goodness gracious, even the line, when she invites Robert for drinks sounds wrong compared to anything we have read before about her.

So a girl can't have two sides to her? She has to be either a total nerd or a total slut? She can't be both?

Finding a bit reaching here.

 

[lucadiadis]

I think the writing is actually more subtle than that -- when Lena tells Ian about how her relationship with Axel was full of drama and jealousy, you can potentially interpret this as Lena being sexually open and chafing under Axel's demands. That is to say, Axel's jealousy and drama wasn't necessarily something completely unfounded. In latter chapters there's also pretty obvious mentions of events which suggest Lena even way before wasn't some sort of shy virginal flower who would panic at the thought of a penis.

Lena in first chapter is smarting from being cheated on, but it doesn't mean she's "vanilla girl".

I have full respect for the posts I have read from you, you seem to be the forum member that understands EK the least unaccurately. But on this, I disagree. I repeat what I've written: play back from the start, read Lena's parts. Anything slutty coming up afterwards is inconsistent.

 

[lucadiadis]

So a girl can't have two sides to her? She has to be either a total nerd or a total slut? She can't be both?

Finding a bit reaching here.

Two things:
- I was not disserting on the essence of women here, I was talking about what was credible AND not credible in THAT specific game. Of course women and men can have dozens of sides. All I'm saying is that as far as this game is concerned, only the vanilla version is well written. Any dark side added is not philosophically or morally unwelcome, but artistically and narativelly not well brought.
- I will make one exception: hanging to Axel. Having played several paths, the most narratively credible option with a darker side is a vanilla Lena who ends up cheating on Ian with Axel because she did not get over him. This path is believable.

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

Not sure you will follow me on this but please just consider:
=> if you play the game carefully, Ian does not ask Lena to explain what happened with Cherry and in that case, there was officially NO threesome with Cherry and Axel.
=> If you deny Ivy, nothing happened between them apart from training to kiss (innocent enough) and if you turn down the cigarette on chapter 11 epilogue, Ivy expands on how Lena was the nerdest of nerds in her youth.

GRANTED:

- if you fool around with Ivy, then yes they did things in her youth + if Ian offers to listen, Lena had a threesome with Axel and Cherry + if you accept the fag, you were a naughty teenager.

=> I come back to my initial post:

Read the thoughts and dialogs of Lena in the first chapters carefully: is this the kind of girl that did crazy stuff in high school ? Is this the kind of girl that fools around easily ? Is this the kind of girl that accepts threesomes from her boyfriend easily ?

Sorry but No. That slut side from Lena comes from nowhere if she fucks Robert. Goodness gracious, even the line, when she invites Robert for drinks sounds wrong compared to anything we have read before about her.

The way she fucks with Robert and Jeremy, she could honestly give lessons to the best porn stars, especially when it comes to busting her ass, so you're wrong, Lena is a born slut

 

[ffive]

I have full respect for the posts I have read from you, you seem to be the forum member that understands EK the least unaccurately. But on this, I disagree. I repeat what I've written: play back from the start, read Lena's parts. Anything slutty coming up afterwards is inconsistent.

We'll have indeed to disagree on this. I think it's a mistake not to consider Lena/Axel/Cherry canonical event no matter if Ian is told about it or not. Similarly it's not optional that 19 year old Lena had an affair with college professor 20 years her senior, that involved foot play and water sports. Lena is, simply put, not Holly. She likes to read books and have some time for herself, but it doesn't mean she's a nerdy shut-in with little to no sexual experiences or appetite.

 

[lucadiadis]

The way she fucks with Robert and Jeremy, she could honestly give lessons to the best porn stars, especially when it comes to busting her ass, so you're wrong, Lena is a born slut

Glad to see see people reply to posts without even trying to understand them. We're still on a porn forum.

 

[lucadiadis]

We'll have indeed to disagree on this. I think it's a mistake not to consider Lena/Axel/Cherry canonical event no matter if Ian is told about it or not. Similarly it's not optional that 19 year old Lena had an affair with college professor 20 years her senior, that involved foot play and water sports. Lena is, simply put, not Holly. She likes to read books and have some time for herself, but it doesn't mean she's a nerdy shut-in with little to no sexual experiences or appetite.

We definitely have to disagree indeed. With a Chad Ian who does not like foot job, the story with the professor never happened. My disagreement is backed by facts, again with genuine respect for you.

 

[SerHawkes]

We definitely have to disagree indeed. With a Chad Ian who does not like foot job, the story with the professor never happened. My disagreement is backed by my own interperation of the text presented, again with genuine respect for you.

Fixed for you.

There is no such things as facts here. Your interperting the text one way while others are seeing it different.

 

[yuvce]

We definitely have to disagree indeed. With a Chad Ian who does not like foot job, the story with the professor never happened. My disagreement is backed by facts, again with genuine respect for you.

Just because you don't see something happen or hear about it, doesn't mean it didn't happen. By that logic, all ORS events that happened offscreen are actually false. Chad Ian not wanting to hear about Lena's weirdo professor doesn't make it non-canon.