VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[yuvce]

Dinosaur brain need instant gratification, I understand.

Instant gratification with a yandere who isn't even into anal.

 

[LoneWaker59]

any news about the next update? what content will it cover? when its going to be released?

everytime i come to this thread to see whats new i always find lots of porn philosophers and intelectual and no actual information because if there is an, its probably swiming among all those philosophical discussions you guys love lmao

Best comment of the last 500 pages, it's annoying to come here looking for news and find only porn guru comments.

And it's worth remembering that since the epilogue Eva changed the structure of the episodes, we only get one part with one character and then the other with the other with the promise of releasing updates faster but it seems it's going to take as long as before lol

 

[Xupuzulla]

Godamn 5 quotes for that post,Holly fans are FUMING

 

[Xupuzulla]

Best comment of the last 500 pages, it's annoying to come here looking for news and find only porn guru comments.

And it's worth remembering that since the epilogue Eva changed the structure of the episodes, we only get one part with one character and then the other with the other with the promise of releasing updates faster but it seems it's going to take as long as before lol

You literally can read all the Evakiss patreon update posts for free in patreon,what come here at all if you want news?

 

[JohnnyKiss]

any news about the next update? what content will it cover? when its going to be released?

everytime i come to this thread to see whats new i always find lots of porn philosophers and intelectual and no actual information because if there is an, its probably swiming among all those philosophical discussions you guys love lmao

Gee, imagine people discussing the game on this forum dedicated to discussing the game. How fucking dare they!

 

[metagrossrj]

any news about the next update? what content will it cover? when its going to be released?

everytime i come to this thread to see whats new i always find lots of porn philosophers and intelectual and no actual information because if there is an, its probably swiming among all those philosophical discussions you guys love lmao

The last update was that the writing was challenging and the illustrations are 50% done. That was 3 days ago. Make of that what you will.

 

[Andrea9999]

The last update was that the writing was challenging and the illustrations are 50% done. That was 3 days ago. Make of that what you will.

I believe it means that the writing is difficult and the illustrations are 30% done.

 

[Andrea9999]

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Axel fucking Lena in front of Ian seems both hardcore and the natural conclusion of the domination/cuck arc without feeling outlandish despite being so emotionally outrageous.

If you really want things to "go animal" it might be better to have Axel fucking Ian in front of Lena to establish his dominance over Ian, making himself more primitively attractive to Lena. Such an act is not strictly homosexuality as it is more a function of putting the competition in its place. I suppose Axel would then "finish" in Lena to give her a taste of the overall sordidness.

Billy has the closest chance opening up the porno route, if his event turns out to be that debauched. Lena and Ivy can already be on it.

So far, it sounds like the creation of a small scale Hugh Hefner-like Playboy club. If yacht parties get introduced, it may ramp up....listen carefully for screams heard across the sea on a still night.

Okay new topic. When the game is finally done (in 2030) what will be the most depraved scene in the game. Give me a brief outline for both pure sexual act and scene (storywise): e.g for GGGB

1. Storywise: Ashley being an addict getting gangbanged for her fix
2. Sexual act: the triple penetration in terms of sexual act

Seymour seems singularly obsesses with Lena, so I don't see him as a harem guy. Maybe a continuance of him and Agnes watching Axel and Lena. Frankly, just ask Andrea999 on that topic, she conjurs something up for you.

This would be difficult to address. Situations like this require the depravity to build up gradually with surprises injected that once digested leaves the reader longing for more and trying to anticipate the next step.

• for actual corruption of Lena, Seymour seems to be the safest bet, although he seems to be playing the long/boring game
• as for the Dubai trip, although this has the biggest potential for depravity
  • there won't be any Dubai Porta Potty stuff
  • at most some Seymour pimping out Lena; blowbang at best
  • my bet would be that it will be a "secret" ending like certain routes in GGGB

I like the actual interludes of Seymour with Lena, although as I have mentioned before, I was disappointed with the retooling of the mirror scene; I thought the original was more exciting. The scenes are too slow in coming; probably because they are the most difficult to construct. By comparison, in my view, all of the other arcs are quite mundane, dominated by small talk and stock porn scenes. EK needs to draw out the LSD arc much more carefully. In addition to Lena exhibiting herself to Seymour's "watch parties" I think he will at some point lend Lena to Agnes forming a side plot in which Agnes has some private sessions with Lena, exhibiting herself to Lena

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and having a joining between her bottom half with Lena's upper half

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.

Lena will eventually be lured to Dubai by the poshness characteristic, leading to escorted shopping trips during the day for the most expensive and revealing outfits which, at night, she will display and parade in front of a new and much more predatory audience, than the ones to which she catered back in Spain. I think the real depravity of the Dubai nights will begin with Lena sitting on the laps of the Emirs; they will probe and caress her suggestively while watching the more ferocious acts perpetuated on less exotic slaves. I also do not expect any explicit scat, but when EK breaks this arc off from ORS into a nonregulated forum, some of the Emirs' more outlandish tastes may be indulged. Lena may be instructed to drop her lingerie in front of a... well... different type of audience

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and then prepared for a new experience

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With the Emirs fully aroused, it will be time:

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. Hopefully their hunger will not lead them to a one-off

Spoiler: *sigh*

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Just my two cents.

 

[vgbestly]

Just my two cents.

Bruh. That wasn't just two pennies but the whole dollar bill...plus the coke you snorted still on the rolled up bill.

Also, don't give me hope. I WISH it's more crazier sex game like GGGB but Eva wants this to be on steam.

 

[Leongen43]

The only thing I hope is that in the update there will be very hot scenes on the beach with Emma and if I could do a threesome that includes Holly/Emma/Ian or I would also like sex scenes with Cindy/Axel in a photo shoot where Lena I discover them and we have the option for her to get excited where she masturbates while they have intense and dominant sex that brings back more memories for Lena. Will it be interesting?

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[CreativeCritic2]

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Just to say, this is an amazing post and I would gladly subscribe to your patreon and continue sending you money for months while you produce nothing but whine about having been sick and writing being hard.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

I want to preface this reply by reminding people who dislike my posts that if they are bothered by the posts, they can click on "my" avatar, locate and click the ignore button, and their problem will be solved. If, on the other hand, they find bashing my posts to be entertaining, then forget this preface; my goal is achieved since I post to entertain myself and others.

If you really want things to "go animal" it might be better to have Axel fucking Ian in front of Lena to establish his dominance over Ian, making himself more primitively attractive to Lena. Such an act is not strictly homosexuality as it is more a function of putting the competition in its place. I suppose Axel would then "finish" in Lena to give her a taste of the overall sordidness.

So far, it sounds like the creation of a small scale Hugh Hefner-like Playboy club. If yacht parties get introduced, it may ramp up....listen carefully for screams heard across the sea on a still night.


This would be difficult to address. Situations like this require the depravity to build up gradually with surprises injected that once digested leaves the reader longing for more and trying to anticipate the next step.

I like the actual interludes of Seymour with Lena, although as I have mentioned before, I was disappointed with the retooling of the mirror scene; I thought the original was more exciting. The scenes are too slow in coming; probably because they are the most difficult to construct. By comparison, in my view, all of the other arcs are quite mundane, dominated by small talk and stock porn scenes. EK needs to draw out the LSD arc much more carefully. In addition to Lena exhibiting herself to Seymour's "watch parties" I think he will at some point lend Lena to Agnes forming a side plot in which Agnes has some private sessions with Lena, exhibiting herself to Lena

You must be registered to see the links

and having a joining between her bottom half with Lena's upper half

You must be registered to see the links

.

Lena will eventually be lured to Dubai by the poshness characteristic, leading to escorted shopping trips during the day for the most expensive and revealing outfits which, at night, she will display and parade in front of a new and much more predatory audience, than the ones to which she catered back in Spain. I think the real depravity of the Dubai nights will begin with Lena sitting on the laps of the Emirs; they will probe and caress her suggestively while watching the more ferocious acts perpetuated on less exotic slaves. I also do not expect any explicit scat, but when EK breaks this arc off from ORS into a nonregulated forum, some of the Emirs' more outlandish tastes may be indulged. Lena may be instructed to drop her lingerie in front of a... well... different type of audience

You must be registered to see the links

and then prepared for a new experience

You must be registered to see the links

With the Emirs fully aroused, it will be time:

You must be registered to see the links

. Hopefully their hunger will not lead them to a one-off

Spoiler: *sigh*

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Just my two cents.

If anyone is going to cuck Ian with Lena it's going to be Jeremy. He already cucked him with Allison. Axel seems more like the BDSM type.

 

[ffive]

If anyone is going to cuck Ian with Lena it's going to be Jeremy. He already cucked him with Allison. Axel seems more like the BDSM type.

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

 

[Leongen43]

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

It's true there is no NTR route if Lena has sex with Jeremy but Lena can have sex with the rest of the boys so I don't know if it's a great consolation for Ian that she doesn't have sex with Jeremy, right?

 

[ffive]

It's true there is no NTR route if Lena has sex with Jeremy but Lena can have sex with the rest of the boys so I don't know if it's a great consolation for Ethan that she doesn't have sex with Jeremy, right?

I guess it can be some consolation if it's doesn't involve his good friend, since that'd be even worse. Of course, for Ian who fucks Cindy it'd also be pure hypocrisy to complain about it

 

[Leongen43]

I guess it can be some consolation if it's doesn't involve his good friend, since that'd be even worse. Of course, for Ian who fucks Cindy it'd also be pure hypocrisy to complain about it:sneaks:

I always see that there are too many temptations among them to be able to avoid them all, that's why Ian/Lena should have a swinger or free relationship for their relationship to work because otherwise we lose a lot of sex content in the game if we are faithful to both

 

[obolocreo17]

The last update was that the writing was challenging and the illustrations are 50% done. That was 3 days ago. Make of that what you will.

Great update in September

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Axel already potentially fucks Lena who is in relationship with Ian. Meantime Lena/Jeremy is largely mutually exclusive with Lena/Ian.

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now. There is a cuck route for Ian where he seemingly enjoys listening to Lena talk about all the guys she has had sex with and considering Ian can watch Jeremy fuck Allison in front of him, I think the natural evolution of this storyline would be Ian watching Jeremy fuck Lena.

 

[ffive]

Cheating and Cucking isn't the same. I thought from all of the discussions about the topic on here this would've been obvious by now.

I'm sadly not an expert in cuckology, so i read it in the common way used around this forum (cheating when MC fucks people other than their partner, cucking when it's MC's partner getting fucked by someone else). But you're right, i could see Jeremy getting involved in the context you describe.

Although, i'd argue that if Ian is on explicit cuck route, then having Lena's former boyfriend of all people fuck Lena in front of him could also be something he'd be willing to go for and a huge turn on for him, given he can potentially find it hot when he has dream of Gillian getting fucked by her current boyfriend and telling him how pathetic lover he was. This might actually be one of outcomes of the current crisis at beach house, if Ian was told by Jeremy that Lena is cheating on him with Axel.

 

[DeemLeem12]

EK will have a faster time in development if the illustrations are made first. Ideas for writing can more easily flow with all the illustrations and more can be done on development time. Less headache, more art. Even just drawing random sex scenes can make this faster.