VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Hungover00]

I think I wasn't clear. Eva made Jeremy only go after Emma if Ian suggests he should. That's different then what happens with Allison.

Eva seems to go out of her way trying to interject him with Alison and it was annoying especially on the love route.

Yeah, basically you have to full on claim Alison, and drop all other possible lovers, to keep Jeremy from fucking her. But at least you can try to ignore it as much as possible. I think Alison is the 6th place girl? Lena, Holly, Emma, Cindy, Cherry, Alison, Louise/Minerva. But others might be hunting her spot. Ivy won't have a hard time pushing up the ranks. Neither will Nat, or the clothing store lady. And Gillian may come back into the picture, though that's just kinda weird at this point.

 

[GokutheG]

Yeah, basically you have to full on claim Alison, and drop all other possible lovers, to keep Jeremy from fucking her. But at least you can try to ignore it as much as possible. I think Alison is the 6th place girl? Lena, Holly, Emma, Cindy, Cherry, Alison, Louise/Minerva. But others might be hunting her spot. Ivy won't have a hard time pushing up the ranks. Neither will Nat, or the clothing store lady. And Gillian may come back into the picture, though that's just kinda weird at this point.

Alison's my favorite LI for Ian so going all in on her isn't difficult. The constant Jeremy intersections with her were very annoying tho. Holly would be first if them getting together didn't block Lena/Holly. Cindy's route was also very interesting but I had to abort it since it blocks Alison's love route. I really need to give Cherry and Emma a go even if it results in Jeremy getting with Alison at some point. Personally I was surprised/dissapointed that Minerva wasn't a femdom route. Eli, Louise and Ivy are for Lena so I'm not looking forward to them getting with Ian. I think a Gillian route could be interesting but I'm not sure if Eva is going to make her a full blown LI or what her plans are.

 

[BGINaN]

Can y'all share some saves for different paths please? I just lost all of mine

 

[Gicoo]

That's a good piece of evidence. And we've never heard of her being adopted, so I suspect you're right, though she's barely talked about her background at all.

Emma is adopted, so her last name could refer to her step-parents.
She looks like a latina, still.

 

[Gicoo]

Can y'all share some saves for different paths please? I just lost all of mine

https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-13-2-full-eva-kiss.48813/post-9479697

 

[Babubabz]

Will there be any progress in the Marcel/bbc storyline?

 

[Canto Forte]

Fan service, nostalgia, member berries, fiction was just that.

Will there be any progress in the Marcel/bbc storyline?

You got Jeremy, that is all. Deal with it!

 

[BlandChili]

Will there be any progress in the Marcel/bbc storyline?

Probably not in the next update, since it's Ian POV. Unless Eva decides that now is the time for Ian to start sharing Holly in their relationship and to do so with Marcel, but that'd come out of no where.

 

[GokutheG]

Probably not in the next update, since it's Ian POV. Unless Eva decides that now is the time for Ian to start sharing Holly in their relationship and to do so with Marcel, but that'd come out of no where.

Honestly I can see a Holly/Marcel route being interesting if she never gets with either mc. I also see Eva having her get with Stan possibly. Both cases have some breadcrumbs that can be developed into a relationship if she gives it time.

 

[Gicoo]

A bit weird how Holly/Marcel didn't develop, while we got her with Clark and Robert. At the beginning, it roughly gave the same amount of attention as with Mark.

I suppose Marcel is meant to be a higher level of corruption than the rather plain Mark/Robert, so it should come soon, considering Holly even met a gloryhole.

Wholesome Holly/Marcel seems to be dismissed, could've been an unusual pairing for a change.

As for Stan, its consistent that this pairing isn't rushed, since nonslut Holly and Stan don't have the confidence to rush into a relationship.

 

[ffive]

A bit weird how Holly/Marcel didn't develop, while we got her with Clark and Robert. At the beginning, it roughly gave the same amount of attention as with Mark.

Give the girl some time, she's just had her first taste of a BBC at the gloryhole.

 

[BlandChili]

Honestly I can see a Holly/Marcel route being interesting if she never gets with either mc. I also see Eva having her get with Stan possibly. Both cases have some breadcrumbs that can be developed into a relationship if she gives it time.

Non-slutty Holly could perhaps be interesting with him. Certainly more interesting than Stan ...

A bit weird how Holly/Marcel didn't develop, while we got her with Clark and Robert. At the beginning, it roughly gave the same amount of attention as with Mark.

Wholesome Holly/Marcel seems to be dismissed, could've been an unusual pairing for a change.

Yeah, Marcel mainly lacks a real connection, no one is batting for Holly to pay attention to him like Ivy did with Mark. That said the variable for potential Holly/Marcel exists outside of her slutty status, so it's not entirely out of the running yet I suppose.

I suppose Marcel is meant to be a higher level of corruption than the rather plain Mark/Robert, so it should come soon, considering Holly even met a gloryhole.

I think the sky's the limit for slut Holly at this point. Given how Marcel comes onto Lena, by knowing she's into BBC first, I guess the same could be the case with Holly? Professional distance until he hears she's actually a freak.

Give the girl some time, she's just had her first taste of a BBC at the gloryhole.

I find slut Holly less interesting now that it's all just phone pictures from Ivy, but if Lena is into BBC perhaps we can get some interactions with Holly to emphasise that kink. Ivy doesn't seem to really care about cock-specifics. It'd be fun if Lena could corrupt her for a change, pull her along for the BBC adventure.

Usually BBC kink doesn't interest me that much, but at least there, there'd be a potential of switching up the dynamic a bit if Lena could advocate for a kink to her slutty pals.

 

[amber111]

Cheating Lena and Slut Holly do sound like a great pair.

 

[BlandChili]

Cheating Lena and Slut Holly do sound like a great pair.

Unfortunately slut Holly can't get into a relationship yet.

As for just being a sexual pair, yeah it would be fun. Just a pity that slut Holly = Ivy control now, so everything would more likely be directed by her rather than Lena.

 

[GokutheG]

Unfortunately slut Holly can't get into a relationship yet.

As for just being a sexual pair, yeah it would be fun. Just a pity that slut Holly = Ivy control now, so everything would more likely be directed by her rather than Lena.

Yeah Holly getting sexual with Ivy lost all appeal when it became only about hooking her up with random guys. The glory hole was the last straw. Don't know why Lena has no involvement if they had a threesome. Guess that was a branch too much.

 

[BlandChili]

Yeah Holly getting sexual with Ivy lost all appeal when it became only about hooking her up with random guys. The glory hole was the last straw. Don't know why Lena has no involvement if they had a threesome. Guess that was a branch too much.

I don't mind the hooking up with random guys part, I was just hoping it would be something Lena could participate in. (She can potentially with Mark, but only if her and Holly are not in a romance apparently).
I think there's lots of interesting kinks to explore with a female bisexual relationship that GGGB only really scratched the surface with.
There'd be great options for lesbian kinks too of course, but that's why I wanted the door to that route to be open rather than closed.

Now that it's all just directed by Ivy I find it much less appealing to play with. Especially because Lena loses out on lesbian content with that route now.
It's not fun when it's just Ivy sharing static sexual scenes.

 

[ionogo]

Unfortunately slut Holly can't get into a relationship yet.

As for just being a sexual pair, yeah it would be fun. Just a pity that slut Holly = Ivy control now, so everything would more likely be directed by her rather than Lena.

I'd like to see slut Holly overtake Ivy. She is less 'used', fresher, maybe she achieves what Ivy cannot?

 

[BlandChili]

I'd like to see slut Holly overtake Ivy. She is less 'used', fresher, maybe she achieves what Ivy cannot?

Hm, well, Holly would need to start having similar desires to Ivy, which could work well with the slut route.

What Ivy wants is glamour, independence and affirmation of her lifestyle. Holly meanwhile
What Holly wants, at least when the game begins, is self-assurance, social contacts and an affirmation of her worth. The difference between her relationship routes and her slut route how she gains that, or alternatively learns to value something else (such as seeking sexual gratification over romantic on the slut route).

 

[ionogo]

Hm, well, Holly would need to start having similar desires to Ivy, which could work well with the slut route.

What Ivy wants is glamour, independence and affirmation of her lifestyle. Holly meanwhile
What Holly wants, at least when the game begins, is self-assurance, social contacts and an affirmation of her worth. The difference between her relationship routes and her slut route how she gains that, or alternatively learns to value something else (such as seeking sexual gratification over romantic on the slut route).

I am thinking more along the lines of Holly's sweetness/innocent look leading to a successful modeling or porn career - something Ivy really wants IMO, but she is settling for the bad girl thing because she can't seem to get where she wants to. Ivy's corrupting Holly leading to her creating her better would be interesting. Not suggesting it will happen but would be interesting.

 

[Night Hacker]

Playing yet another route. This time, Ian has sex with all the girls, and prefers Holly over Alison. I have him go full out on relationships, click the HEART option for every girl. With Lena I do the same, no girls for her this run, only guys... all the guys and don't break up with any of them given a choice. She is not snobbish this run so no Seymour at all. She defends Stan when given the choice.

It can be a difficult route as I can't stand Robert and I normally don't go for Mike with her.

So far Lena had sex, several times with Mike, Robert, Ian, posed nude for Stan, teased him, gave Jeremy a blow job at Ivy's and even kissed Ivy (though I tried to avoid her with girls, it was that or lose the bet). I was surprised at one even, when Jeremy didn't want Lena to do anything with him as Ian confessed he was falling for her, that was the first decent thing I seen that guy do in the game, but it was short lived after I had Lena insist and it happened anyhow.

Anyhow, I laughed out loud just now after Ian finally had sex with Holly and then felt guilty afterwards then he confessed what he did to Lena... why, I don't know, they're not a couple! And then when Lena got upset at him and decided to stop "hooking up" with him, I almost died laughing. I was thinking "oh no Lena, now you're down to only four men!" LMFAO... who the fuck writes this shit?! Seriously?! Lena has been fucking Robert, sometimes on the same day as she fucked Ian. Fucked Mike, a guy with a legit girlfriend, sucked Jeremy, Ian's "friend", but she's pissed that he fucked someone else?!?!

Oh yeah, and I have Lena still interested in Axel. But Ian and Holly = Bad.

Anyhow, I'm going to continue this route, keep fucking and loving up to everyone as described and see what other shit this has.