ffive

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How do we get Ian to get his promotion in chapter 13?
You need to pick the right book to recommend to your superiors. Depending on Ian's wits attribute you can get a bit of leeway there, but the right choices are to pick 2&4 and can the others, iirc.
 

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I will make it my mission for Jeremy to never lay his hands on...or anything else on Ivy.
She's pretty...shameless, but even she should have some standards :sneaky:
Praying for a route where you can just throw Alison at him like a sacrificial pokemon to babytrap him, and then he freaks out and leaves the country to avoid paying child support.
 

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TBH, she couldn't care less. You wouldn't even know that the book was published unless you are an avid bookworm.
I mean, Gillian is currently working at publishing house that'd handle it, so she'd probably find out.

"See, Ian, this book of yours shows exactly why we ended the way we did. Our sex life, it was as boring as this tripe."

:whistle::coffee:
 

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I mean, Gillian is currently working at publishing house that'd handle it, so she'd probably find out.

"See, Ian, this book of yours shows exactly why we ended the way we did. Our sex life, it was as boring as this tripe."

:whistle::coffee:
Isn't Holly's publisher different? Gillian's working as a secretary though.
 

ffive

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Isn't Holly's publisher different? Gillian's working as a secretary though.
Yeah, but if Ian is a co-author then Seymour would probably throw his weight around to publish it instead. Plus, not sure if Holly's regular publisher would be keen to get involved with erotica, given Holly's previous works were some fantasy stuff.
 

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Yeah, but if Ian is a co-author then Seymour would probably throw his weight around to publish it instead. Plus, not sure if Holly's regular publisher would be keen to get involved with erotica, given Holly's previous works were some fantasy stuff.
I'd love for there to be a publisher who's actually able to tell Seymour to fuck off. There needs to be viable alternatives for players who want to avoid him. He can be a threat but he shouldn't be untouchable.
 
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I'd love for there to be a publisher who's actually able to tell Seymour to fuck off. There needs to be viable alternatives for players who want to avoid him. He can be a threat but he shouldn't be untouchable.
Victor and his buddies, i intentionally fuck up Ian's promotion in the hope that in the future he could work with/for Victor.

Also Seymour is a shitty antagonist, yes he blacklisted Lena and she's poor (in my playthrough), but she gets by.
 
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That's Mike - if Lena is having fun with Mike every time,at some point she will decide to surprise him by offering Louise the same think they did with Jeremmy not so long ago (you need to make sure they had threesome) and Lena,Mike and Louise will have some fun as you can see here at that picture :devilish:
this is ian, mike doesn't have that skin tone lol
 
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Very impressive game -- great artstyle, and the dialogue is top notch in this category. Kudos to the author Eva Kiss!

Which is why it may be paradoxical that I want to point out something that looks like a (small?) flaw to me. The writing is so good, when something doesn't go perfectly it becomes noticeable. :)

If you enter the cuck route with Ian and Lena from a more typical love story route (say, via the "one of the biggest?" [cocks] option when Ian and Lena are having a dialogue after sex), Lena appears, all of a sudden, to change her sexual behavior to Ian. When before she was lustfully whispering to herself how perfect Ian's body and especially his cock was, now suddenly she's all into denying him and teasing him. I understand that this is probably meant as her doing what she thinks he wants (and apparently he really does in this route), but this makes her a bit ... mechanical. Can she change her desires that easily and that quickly?

My impression was that that Lena was probably designed for a different path -- say, one in which Lena and Ian didn't have sex (or had it only once and very late), so Lena didn't wax poetically about how great sex with Ian (and especially Ian's cock) was. So it wouldn't feel like she was denying herself something, especially if, in this route, she was getting sex from other guys. But to just default to this Lena, even in the case in which she and Ian had lots of sex before suddenly veering into the cuck route, feels a little... jarring.

Perhaps specific dialogue for this set of choices could be written instead? Something like a frank conversation between them about this (and they're such a nice couple to each other -- how come they're not communicating about their sexual preferences? Even after Ian said 'they could do some experimenting together'? I had thought that choice would lead to Lena and Ian opening up to each other about their sexual experiences and preferences, but nothing of the kind happened). In such a conversation Lena could give more information about how and why she's changing her behavior. Or maybe she could have a monologue in one of her alone viewpoint scenes, talking to herself about how things are going with Ian and explaining better what is on her mind and why she is giving up on his cock.

To me, feels unfair to Lena, more so than to Ian, who may be getting what he wants. Still... even to Ian this seems a bit strange. He was all into having intercourse with her, and how great he felt inside of her, and now suddenly he kinda likes being denied? Some explanation is necessary here, too. (It feels to me as it would if we suddenly found out Jeremy was dating Minerva... it's not impossible, but one feels the need to know how and why this happened.)
 
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I know Jeremy's the biggest whore as far as men go but for the women in this game, who's the biggest slut? Would it be Lena because she has the most options?
 
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I know Jeremy's the biggest whore as far as men go but for the women in this game, who's the biggest slut? Would it be Lena because she has the most options?
Technically Ivy, but we are merely told so and barely see it onscreen.

Lena can be played to overtake Ivy.
Holly gets lots of attention ingame, it can be considered the most radical change from wallflower barely interacting with men to gloryhole slut.
Alison can become very freaky after her breakup, even more so if Ian and Jeremy team up on her instead of monopolizing her.
Emma is reciptive from the getgo, but Ian can also corrupt her, even more so if Jeremy and Lena are included.
Louise can be a big sub if Lena and Ian use her.

The other girls usually stick with one guy.

Bad Jess was the biggest slut as a former porn star, but that is just backstory.
 
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