VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Jeremy is the most basic and realistic form of fuckboy you can come across tbh

There's his Brazilian equivalent at my muay thai gym, constantly talking about the girls he's got in his DMs and where he gonna party next weekend. Same exact mentality of fuck first think next, same non-committal approach to relationships,etc.

If you make em 6'4, athletic in a country with hook up culture, you gotta expect society to mold em to some degree to be like that.

Axel is a bit more nuanced since the character has some psychopathic tendencies. I'm sure there's thousands of copies of him in places like Miami where models/content creators and wannabe adult photographers converge.

 

[Gicoo]

Well, Jeremy owns it. He doesn't want commitment and 99% of his hookups know this in advance. Alison knows it, Emma knows it. Lena has technically a love option, but I'm sceptical on how much it differs from the lust path.
The exception is Louise and he is to blame partly for that shitshow. But considering how needy Louise is portrayed towards Lena and now Ian, its also clear she created most of this mess.

 

[MightbeSomeone]

There is a new game out that is using her characters anyone know if it is authorized or plan old stealing?

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Well, Jeremy owns it. He doesn't want commitment and 99% of his hookups know this in advance. Alison knows it, Emma knows it. Lena has technically a love option, but I'm sceptical on how much it differs from the lust path.
The exception is Louise and he is to blame partly for that shitshow. But considering how needy Louise is portrayed towards Lena and now Ian, its also clear she created most of this mess.

That's what I'm saying. Jeremey isn't particularly unrealistic character or even "morally" bad. His one and only default is having one brain and said brain ain't located in his cranium. He's like douchebag bad at worse.

Louise does emotional blackmail and from experience, that shit is wack. It wears you down, sucks your joy and energy away.

Then there's Alison using guerilla tactics to trap Ian.

Ignoring MCs since we can mold em however we want, Emma is surprisingly the most well-adjusted character to this point which is ironic, considering she's a homeless commie.

There is a new game out that is using her characters anyone know if it is authorized or plan old stealing?

Idk which game you talking about but if someone is using her resources as they are, it's theft. If it's redrawn with different names and shit, it's fine. Eva herself using real life photos for her scenes, characters, etc.

 

[varpep]

I don't see Axel being a manchild. If anything, it's Jeremy (and Wade and Perry, but those are intentionally written that way).

Spoiler: Jeremy if he real

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Jeremy wishes he had a molecule of the majesty Dale has.

Spoiler: Motivational Speech

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[MightbeSomeone]

That's what I'm saying. Jeremey isn't particularly unrealistic character or even "morally" bad. His one and only default is having one brain and said brain ain't located in his cranium. He's like douchebag bad at worse.

Louise does emotional blackmail and from experience, that shit is wack. It wears you down, sucks your joy and energy away.

Then there's Alison using guerilla tactics to trap Ian.

Ignoring MCs since we can mold em however we want, Emma is surprisingly the most well-adjusted character to this point which is ironic, considering she's a homeless commie.



Idk which game you talking about but if someone is using her resources as they are, it's theft. If it's redrawn with different names and shit, it's fine. Eva herself using real life photos for her scenes, characters, etc.

Same names same characters different story.
Supposed to be fan fiction but patreon and other paying sites up for it if any one on here is a patreon of hers let her know . I was a few months ago but let it laps

https://f95zone.to/threads/cindys-diary-ch-1-full-v1-1-skull-design.255244/

 

[Saerwen]

Same names same characters different story.
Supposed to be fan fiction but patreon and other paying sites up for it if any one on here is a patreon of hers let her know . I was a few months ago but let it laps

https://f95zone.to/threads/cindys-diary-ch-1-full-v1-1-skull-design.255244/

We know about the game, I was the first who already mentioned several times about it when the game was in the requests section.

 

[Erectosaurus]

At the very least I think Jeremy tries to be a good friend to Ian, even if he is a bit shady about it like the whole Gillian thing.

With the upcoming pool party I guess we’ll see if he’s a Bro or a Hoe since Ivy is his weakness and she’s going to absolutely pull something with Lena

 

[yuvce]

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This is why we need facepalm back.

 

[Maditau26]

What was the best NTR game you played (with husband's consent) ? I don't know if this question is forbidden on this page, if so I apologize. But I trust the audience who loves this game (Our Red String)

 

[Noonwraith]

Jeremy wishes he had a molecule of the majesty Dale has.

Spoiler: Motivational Speech

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Just wait till Rocks Ian flops out that BBC Jr. on that right asscheek, on the left.

Spoiler: More Daleposting

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[robs1234]

Just wait till Rocks Ian flops out that BBC Jr. on that right asscheek, on the left.

Spoiler: More Daleposting

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bro what is going on on that video ?XD

 

[ffive]

I don't see Axel being a manchild.

He is a walking thin-skinned ego, puffing himself up as a dom but getting pathetically obsessed over one girl who actually dumped him.

It's not a behavior of well-adjusted adult, that's for sure.

 

[Noonwraith]

He is a walking thin-skinned ego, puffing himself up as a dom but getting pathetically obsessed over one girl who actually dumped him.

It's not a behavior of well-adjusted adult, that's for sure.

In that it's not behaviour of a well-adjusted adult I agree with. However, I interpret him "getting pathetically obsessed over one girl who actually dumped him" as a deliberate theatre act put on by a manipulator who cannot get over the fact that his prey slipped from his grasp.

 

[Saerwen]

In that it's not behaviour of a well-adjusted adult I agree with. However, I interpret him "getting pathetically obsessed over one girl who actually dumped him" as a deliberate theatre act put on by a manipulator who cannot get over the fact that his prey slipped from his grasp.

There's nothing wrong with trying to make up and bring someone back when you aren't over them, it means you aren't ready to move on. The problem with Axel is his approach and not respecting Lena's decision for not wanting him again. When there are still feelings left, then there's a chance but if not, it's time to separate ways. I'm all for second chances but when two are constantly splitting up and making up over and over again, it's not working because those two aren't meant to be together. Then it's the best to break up for good. So yes, Axel is a man child.

 

[sztrb]

Well, Jeremy owns it. He doesn't want commitment and 99% of his hookups know this in advance. Alison knows it, Emma knows it. Lena has technically a love option, but I'm sceptical on how much it differs from the lust path.
The exception is Louise and he is to blame partly for that shitshow. But considering how needy Louise is portrayed towards Lena and now Ian, its also clear she created most of this mess.

Yeah... but sometimes sticking your dick in crazy is worth it.

 

[Radnos Salazar]

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As I mentioned earlier, in my plans the next chapter, which encapsulates the Billy event, will be split across three playable days. For now, my idea is to release it in two parts: the first covering the first two days, and the second focusing on the third. These days I’m finishing up the content for Day 1: I’ve already drawn about 95% of the art, which is now in the hands of the colorist, and I’m wrapping up the corresponding spicy scenes. I’ve also started editing some of the images, so they go from looking like this to something more like this:

The number of tasks and processes involved is ramping up the development pressure, especially since the modular complexity of the scenes I’m writing is keeping me from progressing as quickly as I’d like (though that’s usually the case, to be fair). That said, work isn’t stopping, and I hope to have this first narrative block fully assembled soon so I can start testing it while writing the second part and creating the remaining artwork.

Would you like me to consider releasing this first chunk on its own once I’ve received and finalized the graphic assets? Or do you prefer getting as much content as possible all at once? Let me know in the comments!

 

[zoomzoomzoom]

Yeeep, that place is a McFuck Mansion.

 

[tzfangtz]

Looks like Dubai to me.

 

[Marley300]

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As I mentioned earlier, in my plans the next chapter, which encapsulates the Billy event, will be split across three playable days. For now, my idea is to release it in two parts: the first covering the first two days, and the second focusing on the third. These days I’m finishing up the content for Day 1: I’ve already drawn about 95% of the art, which is now in the hands of the colorist, and I’m wrapping up the corresponding spicy scenes. I’ve also started editing some of the images, so they go from looking like this to something more like this:

The number of tasks and processes involved is ramping up the development pressure, especially since the modular complexity of the scenes I’m writing is keeping me from progressing as quickly as I’d like (though that’s usually the case, to be fair). That said, work isn’t stopping, and I hope to have this first narrative block fully assembled soon so I can start testing it while writing the second part and creating the remaining artwork.

Would you like me to consider releasing this first chunk on its own once I’ve received and finalized the graphic assets? Or do you prefer getting as much content as possible all at once? Let me know in the comments!

Three Days.... Damm !