VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

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IlikebeingaDIK said:
Pretty sure there's drama surrounding condoms for that relationship regardless. If Ian accepts all the "put this condom real quick" from Alison, he'll complain or have a negative reaction about it at some point cuz it dont feel good. If he nuts in her early, the baby trap is set. If he goes raw and pulls out she still puts him on a rubber diet and you get same negative dialogues about it.
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Alison's pill issue is one of the most unnecessary forced drama plots in the game. There are plenty of contraceptive alternatives that somehow doesn't seem to exist in the game's universe. The breeding kink and the baby trapping if Ian doesn't show interest/commitment are cool but all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.

IlikebeingaDIK said:
Pretty sure Alison was written to be an annoying character like Louise, she just had more screen time to simmer so ppl are used to her corny ass behavior while Louise came in so late that EK had to get her acting crazy obsessive right after the hook up.
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The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.
 
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Socrambus said:
The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.
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I'd beg to differ on Louise's part. I think her fast-driven infatuation with Ian lines up quite nicely with her clingy personality. Add to that the messy breakup from Jeremy, and you have your typical needy one.
 
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JKING92 said:
I'd beg to differ on Louise's part. I think her fast-driven infatuation with Ian lines up quite nicely with her clingy personality. Add to that the messy breakup from Jeremy, and you have your typical needy one.
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I was not saying otherwise, even if it happens a little too much, too fast IMO. My point was her and Alison are different cases.
 
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I was not saying otherwise, even if it happens a little too much, too fast IMO. My point was her and Alison are different cases.
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Everything happens too much too fast in porn stories in general (even in non-porn stories) otherwise it would be boring. Not many slow burn lewd games are successful, the ones that are have good erotic tension.
 
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dolfe67 said:
Everything happens too much too fast in porn stories in general (even in non-porn stories) otherwise it would be boring. Not many slow burn lewd games are successful, the ones that are have good erotic tension.
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Yes. You know it's a good writing when erotica is keeping your interest.
 
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Socrambus said:
Alison's pill issue is one of the most unnecessary forced drama plots in the game. There are plenty of contraceptive alternatives that somehow doesn't seem to exist in the game's universe. The breeding kink and the baby trapping if Ian doesn't show interest/commitment are cool but all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.



The background of the characters is also different, Alison is one of Ian's best friends since at least high school and that makes more believable/less crazy her obsession with him than Louise getting hooked up after a "I like your style" comment.
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i always thought that allison's guilt is making her demand from ian to wear a condom and that she instead secretly desires to get pregnant so that her throwing tantrums about contraceptives is just an excuse to slowly work up the courage to not take any contraceptives. and i don't mean that in a sinister way how she wants to manipulate ian into agreeing becoming a father, i think she is conflicted with herself and that's why she does one thing but desires another.
 
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Socrambus said:
all the arguments about her issues with the pill become repetitive too fast and are bullshit.
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Agree with it becoming kinda repetitive, that being said, Alison being annoying and the whole relationship becoming frustrating does make sense. It fits the character.

mehGusta said:
i think she is conflicted with herself and that's why she does one thing but desires another.
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Ngl I dont think it's that deep. :BootyTime:
 
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Ray_D said:
It's a slut tattoo, you know, to symbolize her change. Google slut tattoos and you'll see different examples.
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I dont mean that, somewhere i read that, even though Holly is slut, tattoo is available in specific path(s). what choices do we have to take for slut holly to have that tattoo?
 
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