VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[IlikebeingaDIK]

The MMA fight is so underrated. Writing fighting scenes can be tricky sometimes and the reader can become bored real fast but EvaKiss did a good job, and the transitions between images are well polished too.

She traced after good ass fights too. The front kick knockout is Chandler vs Ferguson.

Now if only sparring with Jeremy doesn't always end up in a knockdown, that shit irks me cuz even when you do everything right (feint and low kick or grab the single and get a takedown) you still get laid out.

Wasn't Billy originally a Black dude too? I'm pretty sure in the Alisson-Billy-Jeremy video that Ian gets sent, he wasn't originally a pasty alabaster dude.

The irony of Eva doing her best to avoid making a GGGB 2 by NOT having two black fuckboys banging white girls just for her to come back full circle with a GGGB-style event later always intrigues me.

Holly's a lost cause. Eva can still save the day by giving Bad Jess a compelling new beginning.

 

[BlandChili]

Eva can still save the day by giving Bad Jess a compelling new beginning.

Eva has heard you and the corruption of Good Jess will commence forthwith.

 

[Saerwen]

She traced after good ass fights too. The front kick knockout is Chandler vs Ferguson.

Now if only sparring with Jeremy doesn't always end up in a knockdown, that shit irks me cuz even when you do everything right (feint and low kick or grab the single and get a takedown) you still get laid out.



The irony of Eva doing her best to avoid making a GGGB 2 by NOT having two black fuckboys banging white girls just for her to come back full circle with a GGGB-style event later always intrigues me.

Holly's a lost cause. Eva can still save the day by giving Bad Jess a compelling new beginning.

Returning characters for GGGB spin off would be better either for new female protagonist(s) or direct sequel of GGGB not for ORS.

 

[BigOlP]

She traced after good ass fights too. The front kick knockout is Chandler vs Ferguson.

Noticed this right away as well, I'm looking forward to more fights. Would be cool to see a trace of some other weirdly cinematic KOs like Usman v Masvidal 2 or Ngannou v Overeem. At this rate we're not gonna get another Ian update before the year is up though lol.

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Returning characters for GGGB spin off would be better either for new female protagonist(s) or direct sequel of GGGB not for ORS.

I generally agree that cameos muddy the waters in general... But not really in Bad Jess's case since the character is brought back with some story tied to it. she ain't back just for cheap sex scenes, she has story and dare I say... Intrigue. In comparison, most intrigue we've had so far is whether Jordan Peterson really is Ian's father, when is Lena's brother gon show up and do Holly's parents really sequestrate her and forcer her to read the bible until dawn. I wanna know what's up with Bad Jess. She actually bring something interesting that isn't tied to dicks in pussies.

Noticed this right away as well, I'm looking forward to more fights. Would be cool to see a trace of some other weirdly cinematic KOs like Usman v Masvidal 2 or Ngannou v Overeem. At this rate we're not gonna get another Ian update before the year is up though lol.

I fully expect more MMA action by early 2027 so I'm hopeful.

Edwards/Usman or Usman/Mas knockouts would be pretty cool to witness IG ngl

 

[sztrb]

Returning characters for GGGB spin off would be better either for new female protagonist(s) or direct sequel of GGGB not for ORS.

I'm of the mind that Nat needs to become Ian's buttslut in this game too.

 

[wahoooizzle]

I'm off the mind that Nat needs to become Ian's buttslut in this game too.

Haven't played in a while. which one is Nat?

 

[sztrb]

She's a character from GGGB that introduces the MC to anal, she makes a late-late appearance in ORS, Ian flirts with her and is seemingly able to get her to consider a "date" with him, inspite of her dating her hipster boyfriend:

 

[Ray_D]

The MMA fight is so underrated. Writing fighting scenes can be tricky sometimes and the reader can become bored real fast but EvaKiss did a good job, and the transitions between images are well polished too.

It was quite entertaining. Eva could have done something simple and finished quickly, but she decided to put up a pretty good fight.

Black Billy will return

Not while Eva is on guard.

It's that time of the year I succumb to my illness of buying the new FIFA game, playing it for 2 months then dropping it for the rest of the year after it inevitably annoys me until the new FIFA game comes out and the cycle repeats. My other illness of monitoring this thread for when the update drops will sadly have to be put on hold.

Do yourself a favor and play something decent.

 

[Deleted member 8740082]

How do I ask Nat out on a date? I remember only getting this scene once in my playthroughs and I don't remember how to get it again, does anyone know?

 

[Gicoo]

How do I ask Nat out on a date? I remember only getting this scene once in my playthroughs and I don't remember how to get it again, does anyone know?

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Not while Eva is on guard.

Ngl OG Billy looked cooler than white boy Billy. He coulda been rebranded so he isn't Jeremy's buddy so the trope gets 'avoided'. Idk, I'd take OG Billy over Marcel any day if the purpose was just to add black male characters.

FIFA/FC or whatever they're calling it now has basically been the same game for over a decade now.

Their formula works, just add slightly better graphics and updated teams and boom you got yourself all football fans to buy it cuz it's the next best thing when they can't book a local soccer field for the weekend.

 

[What'sNew]

She traced after good ass fights too. The front kick knockout is Chandler vs Ferguson.

Yooo I never noticed that.

I sure hope Ian doesn't become a Chandler himself where his greatest enemy is himself.

 

[sztrb]

Ngl OG Billy looked cooler than white boy Billy. He coulda been rebranded so he isn't Jeremy's buddy so the trope gets 'avoided'. Idk, I'd take OG Billy over Marcel any day if the purpose was just to add black male characters.

Their formula works, just add slightly better graphics and updated teams and boom you got yourself all football fans to buy it cuz it's the next best thing when they can't book a local soccer field for the weekend.

White Billy makes me think of Dave Chappelle in White Face tbh.

 

[Nifferman]

White Billy makes me think of Dave Chappelle in White Face tbh.

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Should have kept him black tbh. A white rich boi and black sidekick doesn't sound too good.

 

[robs1234]

I generally agree that cameos muddy the waters in general... But not really in Bad Jess's case since the character is brought back with some story tied to it. she ain't back just for cheap sex scenes, she has story and dare I say... Intrigue. In comparison, most intrigue we've had so far is whether Jordan Peterson really is Ian's father, when is Lena's brother gon show up and do Holly's parents really sequestrate her and forcer her to read the bible until dawn. I wanna know what's up with Bad Jess. She actually bring something interesting that isn't tied to dicks in pussies.

I fully expect more MMA action by early 2027 so I'm hopeful.

Edwards/Usman or Usman/Mas knockouts would be pretty cool to witness IG ngl

Same, it was interesting for me cuz for the first playthroughs i did i always had Lena be good and i ended up with good Jess, didnt even know you can have bad Jess in game if Lena fucks around. She seems more than a walking pussy(for now) and her warming up to Ian if you are good to her is nice, specialy with the new clothes we see her in the preview update. like i said i rly wonder if we get a scene like her texting him or she ends up fucking everyone in the house anyway..

 

[Yoheijin]

Look how dumb ian here, even i make sure ian go cindy == 0, he can't talk the truth to his friends but with lena and holly, he will never lie.

 

[BraziLisk]

She's a character from GGGB that introduces the MC to anal, she makes a late-late appearance in ORS, Ian flirts with her and is seemingly able to get her to consider a "date" with him, inspite of her dating her hipster boyfriend:

Nat is no doubt the most attractive redhead in the game (unless Ivy original hair color is red too) Holly is great, she can be sexy but she is not that attractive and Gillian has her own appeal with her freckles but...i dont know...that smile of hers freaks me out

 

[IlikebeingaDIK]

Yooo I never noticed that.

I sure hope Ian doesn't become a Chandler himself where his greatest enemy is himself.

There's a world where Jeremy gets Alison pregnant and Ian has a late relationship path with her.

Ian ends up full Michael Chandler.

Same, it was interesting for me cuz for the first playthroughs i did i always had Lena be good and i ended up with good Jess

Same! Always ended up with Good Jess and never bothered with that corny ass scene where you go on a psychedelic trip to bug town so when I actually got Bad Jess I was pretty happy to find out the character had more than a cheap sex scene.

I hope we see more of her.

 

[sztrb]

Nat is no doubt the most attractive redhead in the game (unless Ivy original hair color is red too) Holly is great, she can be sexy but she is not that attractive and Gillian has her own appeal with her freckles but...i dont know...that smile of hers freaks me out

Nah. Holly is hot af.

I love me some uptight religious girls or girls from uptight religious families. They usually are the funnest fucks.

Funny to realise that apart from the landwhale, the sales girl, the old rich bitch, Ivy, Gillian and Nat are the only women who haven't had sex with the MCs yet.

I wonder if Ian will sleep with Lena's mom too?