VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

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MinkoSvk

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Imo, the update was pretty good. For slutty path a lot of content. We moved little with story but unfortunately this expands the plotlines that I am afraid 20 chapetrs won't be enough to finish the game and with the update frequency will take years. I didn't expect GGGB party like because with the art complexity and character development it would be much more diffuclut to implement but 2 or 3 more random characters would be nice. I think that Eva give us characters and wants to have LI with all of them, but it is not rly needed.
 
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PilotLara

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ffive said:
Hmm, PilotLara there're some inconsistences in the update, not really odd for an alpha i guess.

* If Lena chooses to go topless, the game marks it as
Python: 
            $ v14_topless = 1
and if she then puts the top back on for the photoshoot with Danny, the game "downgrades" the variable to
Python: 
                        $ v14_topless = 0.5
But subsequent checks after the photoshoot all tests simply
if v14_topless:

So they are also passed with value of 0.5, and the game is acting as if Lena is still going around topless. These tests should be for
if v14_topless == 1
instead.

* not sure if intentional, but Lena can either accept Danny's photoshop or reject it "because she doesn't feel like it", but there's no option/mention that she isn't allowed to do any work, in scenario where she's working for Seymour.

* Ivy's disguise as a human being briefly fails at this point:

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(the game shows ivy1 object which it shouldn't)

* the checks here are in wrong order:
Python: 
                if ian_lena_open:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? You've got an open relationship for a reason!"
                elif ian_lena_couple and lena_cheating == 2:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? When has having a boyfriend stopped you? You and Mike are birds of a feather in that sense..."
                elif v12_ian_lena_breakup:
                    v "But you're not ruling it out, huh? You're single now, after all!"
It should be checking for breakup first, otherwise (since variables like _cheating and _open are preserved when breakup happens) it causes Ivy to speak as if Lena is still in relationship with Ian and either cheating on him or in open relationship.

* after Billy's presentation, Jess gets removed from the scene along with everyone but Zarina, but she still gets some lines while invisible:
Python: 
    hide jessg
    hide jessb
//...
    if jess_bad:
        js "Pretty much what I expected. But I've been filmed wearing worse, so..."
    else:
        $ fjess = "sad"
        js "Ugh, not the styling I would've chosen at all..."
    if seymour_desire:
        js "Lucky for you, you don't have to wear it."
* charisma requirement for this line seems to be reversed:
Python: 
            menu:
                "{image=icon_charisma.webp}I'm not shy" if lena_charisma < 5 or v14_zarina:
//...
                    l "Oh, don't worry, I'm not shy. Just curious what you've got planned for me."
Pretty sure it makes more sense for actually charismatic Lena to act bold.

* a typo in variable name causes a crash here:
Code: 
While running game code:
  File "game/scripts/story/chapter14b.rpy", line 12014, in <module>
NameError: name 'v14_anthiny_massage' is not defined
* this check ignores possibility Lena has used will point to avoid creampie:
Python: 
            elif v14_pill == False:
                "I ran my fingers across my pussy, dripping with cum."
* Lena finally gets her MMF:

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:whistle::coffee:
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1. Fixed for day 1, have to ask Eva if 0.5 still means automatically going topless on day 2.
2. Noted, i'll pass it on.
3. Fixed
4. Fixed
5. Noted
6. Fixed
7. Fixed
8. Fixed, I think
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9. Fixed


arman11 said:
my good jess is with ash but she talk about dave instead to lena
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1. Fixed.
 
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Saerwen

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sztrb said:
Forgetting to take BC one time isn't likely to cause a pregnancy.
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Um, did you men went to school? It can happen, that's why many women use birth control pills regularly and guys condoms at the same time. Nothing is 100% effective. Pregnancy happen most of the time when you think that you are safe. There's sperm even in precum. Lena forgot her pill, she should use en emergency pill for the morning after. Anyway, this game kill the realism by characters having sex without protection or checking for diseases.
 
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Saerwen said:
Um, did you men went to school? It can happen, that's why many women use birth control pills regularly and guys condoms at the same time. Nothing is 100% effective. Pregnancy happen most of the time when you think that you are safe. There's sperm even in precum. Lena forgot her pill, she should use en emergency pill for the morning after. Anyway, this game kill the realism by characters having sex without protection or checking for diseases.
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Lena is going to baby trap Anthony:whistle:
 
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Yellowie The Goldie

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Saerwen said:
Um, did you men went to school? It can happen, that's why many women use birth control pills regularly and guys condoms at the same time. Nothing is 100% effective. Pregnancy happen most of the time when you think that you are safe. There's sperm even in precum. Lena forgot her pill, she should use en emergency pill for the morning after. Anyway, this game kill the realism by characters having sex without protection or checking for diseases.
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Lena and Ian constantly use protection with their partners in the beginning of the game, actually. I think it's sometime after Mike when he 'accidentally' (Lena's doing) cums inside of her during cowgirl style sex that she gets a morning after pill and starts taking pills consistently from then on.

Ian can't do condom-less sex most of the time, unless he chooses to burst inside of Alison's coochie, losing relatonship points with her. But later on it gets put on the table (weekend trip with her) if he did it before.
 
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