VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

Btw, a funny thing re: Lena's Pill Hunt. If you have a bad Jess you can get a pill from her because she is taking them herself, but if you have good Jess, she doesn't have pills because she's with Ashley so pregnancy isn't a concern for her.

Lena effectively gets punished for being a nice girl. :hidethepain:

(although on second thought, that may be decided by the Seymour's contract, can't quite remember anymore)

 

[GordoFaper]

Still no Jeremy x Cindy

 

[ExtremeLips]

A really great and hot update!
The only thing missing is the best girl - Alison, blonde with piercings. She would be right at home here and would outshine all the other girls. Only Lena could compete with her. And missing maybe some guys Ian, Axel and maybe Jack, Marcel.

Dear varpep , thank you so much for your post with the saves.
https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-14-1-1-alpha-eva-kiss.48813/page-3679#post-18115574
You wrote that "Still have 4 more in mind" – when will you add them?
And if it's not too much trouble, could you please rename the saves, for example, Ian_Holly or Ian_Trinity, otherwise it's unclear which path load.
In any case, thank you for your work and thank you to Eva Kiss for an amazing and multifaceted game!

The third day they are having a party. Maybe Alison will be invited by either Jeremy or Billy. Lena talks about inviting Ian

 

[SearingFive]

Bravo EK! You literally made Ivy the most hated person in this update.

 

[Turret]

I disagree. She was pushing Holly to degrade herself since the beginning. Given that Mark was a presence in GGGB, and clearly picks up women at the club Ivy works at, to take what seems like unsolicited pics of them. I think Ivy was pushing Holly in a specific way, that wasn't to help her.

While I see your point, I disagree on the beginning (Since I did a restart of a path quite recently). In these earlier chapters Ivy might already have pushed bounderias for the lulz, but there was a definite, deeper friendliness towards Lena and Holly. She might have approached some things with her typical going as far as she can attitude, but there was genuine caring about them.
Around chapters 10/11 then there was a first, feelable drop on Ivy´s side in behaviour and talk and this downward spiral continues to the current chapter.

Btw, a funny thing re: Lena's Pill Hunt. If you have a bad Jess you can get a pill from her because she is taking them herself, but if you have good Jess, she doesn't have pills because she's with Ashley so pregnancy isn't a concern for her.

Lena effectively gets punished for being a nice girl. :hidethepain:
(although on second thought, that may be decided by the Seymour's contract, can't quite remember anymore)

Had not had the time to play all paths, but we also have good Jess with Dave, so what happens there?

 

[ExtremeLips]

Bravo EK! You literally made Ivy the most hated person in this update.

I knew Ivy was a snake from the start

 

[jollyjoker27]

Had not had the time to play all paths, but we also have good Jess with Dave, so what happens there?

Can confirm that version of good Jess has the right pills.

 

[BraziLisk]

Around chapters 10/11 then there was a first, feelable drop on Ivy´s side in behaviour and talk and this downward spiral continues to the current chapter.

If you pay attention on the crumbs EvaKiss left us, its pretty obvious something happened behind the scenes before her birthday party.
Her boss probably demanded something in return(slept with her, gangbang, etc) for all the free shit in the nightclub that day.

For all the hate Louise gets i think shes right when mentioning Ivy puts a facade(at least i think it was Louise, correct me if im wrong)
I think she noticed her life is not going the way she liked so she will try to drag everyone around her trough the mud.

 

[sztrb]

Alison has good traits? This is the first I'm hearing of it.

Is it just me or is the Alison forcing Ian to wear condoms, only an Ian thing, considering it seems that all the pics of her and Jeremy, she doesn't force him to wear a condom?

For all the hate Louise gets i think shes right when mentioning Ivy puts a facade(at least i think it was Louise, correct me if im wrong)
I think she noticed her life is not going the way she liked so she will try to drag everyone around her trough the mud.

My girl Louise is a victim here.

 

[Arata20]

overall this game feels epicly boring its the complete opposite of GGGB i try to understand why. artwork is nice but the story is absolutely not interesting and choices has no real effect, the card bullshit is also bad. Eva Kiss make it simple

Because EK, right at the beginning of development, refused to add trash elements gggb-styleto this game. However, she apparently later changed their minds, as the scene with Holly in gloryhole clearly doesn't fit in with the game's everyday life, but rather with the gggb style. Unfortunately, this isn't a game, it's a soap opera. While in gggb you waited for every update and were curious about what would happen next, in this game you know that each update will bring you monotonous sex with the same, often uninteresting partners (im referring to Lena's perspective. Ian has a great variety of scenes and partners, unfortunately for me as a fan of whore simulators).

 

[varpep]

A really great and hot update!
The only thing missing is the best girl - Alison, blonde with piercings. She would be right at home here and would outshine all the other girls. Only Lena could compete with her. And missing maybe some guys Ian, Axel and maybe Jack, Marcel.

Dear varpep , thank you so much for your post with the saves.
https://f95zone.to/threads/our-red-string-ch-14-1-1-alpha-eva-kiss.48813/page-3679#post-18115574
You wrote that "Still have 4 more in mind" – when will you add them?
And if it's not too much trouble, could you please rename the saves, for example, Ian_Holly or Ian_Trinity, otherwise it's unclear which path load.
In any case, thank you for your work and thank you to Eva Kiss for an amazing and multifaceted game!

Thanks for the feedback. As you've asked I've renamed the saves so they are more descriptive. As for the 4 more playthroughs, those have to do with slutty Holly, Jess, louise and the cuck path. I scrapped the cuck path cause I couldn't stomach it. As for the other ones there is not enough content yet to warrant a separate playthrough. When there is though I will make it and update my saves.

 

[varpep]

On a different note, who shat in Ivy's cereal? She's kinda being a dick this whole update.

 

[BlandChili]

On a different note, who shat in Ivy's cereal? She's kinda being a dick this whole update.

Is that unexpected? We saw at her birthday party how she'll act towards Billy if someone else tries something with him and we've always known she's vindictive towards women who she either thinks wronged her or are just hogging the spotlight.

 

[Spectre161]

Please tell me how to unlock these two scenes: the first one is Lena, the second one is IanxHolly. Thanks.

 

[DaLuke2]

I have not played all the paths yet. What I will say is this, being very consistent with what I thought before about the marketing "almost satisfying frustration" strategy EK has been applying to make money out of her patreons:

if this thing was a prologue to an update, then this would probably be the best release since Chapter 9.

BUT then, you realize that this release is NOT a prologue. This actually is the whole fucking update.

What you are expecting is not what's on this update, but what's coming next. And you'll have to wait six fucking months for that.

Ergo: EK screwed her patreons once again.

EK is an enormous business person, I'll grant her that.

She will not get a penny from me though. I'll let dumber players waste their money on this charlatanism of hers.

 

[000009pl]

with each update the game becomes less interesting and tries to satisfy the cucks from patreon :/

 

[Xupuzulla]

On a different note, who shat in Ivy's cereal? She's kinda being a dick this whole update.

Brother,ever player chapter 1?or 2,3,4,etc?
Shes a bitch,theres nothing new here,her whole character is being a cunt.

 

[OdenTwoSword]

My favorite character is Louise, she has a very big pussy. Jeremy's dick is no match for it.

 

[Yellowie The Goldie]

My favorite character is Louise, she has a very big pussy. Jeremy's dick is no match for it.

A pussy made for Ian's BWC, fr fr.

 

[Xiaen]

So is there like a way to make DP with Mike and Jeremy happen or do we have to wait for that still?

Overall good update, though I'm personally not a fan of the new girls and Jess. I'd prefer my girl Holly to be there though it wouldn't really make sense I guess since she is aiming to be a writer, but slutty Holly who knows, maybe one or two more chapters? Billy has had his eyes on her while browsing through Lena's phone, it might be foreshadowing to something bigger with slutty Holly which I'm all about.

I think this game is pretty balanced across kinks and preferences everyone will find something for themselves. Though I wonder how this update plays out for fans of classic relationship/harem stuff, since I feel like it's purely focusing on slutty Lena, I don't really have save for this path so I can't really check myself.