VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Saerwen]

why are u gay?

 

[DaLuke2]

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Precisely.

 

[Virpgoil]

Eddie

 

[stuffygames]

On the Third Day, Stan is reborn as a god among men, he shows up at the mansion and all the girls flock to him. He turns Nymph swimsuits into something sexy. He makes Sonia pretty. He makes Billie black. He has a whateveryouwouldcallit with all the women at the same time, and then he ascends.

 

[stuffygames]

Could give us an example of the type of "representation" you are looking for?

I'm not sure which part you are referring to, it is largely personal preference. If big butts sell games great, but just putting out games with big butts big tits isn't going to keep everyone interested. I can get into characters that I don't find that attractive if they are written well, and that is a rarity, like less than 5% of the time in my experience. Of course I can also put up with some not so stellar writing if the characters are attractive to me, but it isn't as easy.

Character representations in avn games are usually based in the real world, so if the dev likes white girls with giant breasts and huge asses, that's what they use, or they are pandering to what is popular on social media just to sell a game.

There aren't a lot of characters like Cherry in any games I have played, maybe she is the only one. An artistic intellectual black woman who is slim and athletic, she likes sex but it isn't her main focus in life. She is not the internet's idea of a black woman, but she is realistic at the same time. Maybe being an artist that has her own exhibitions and is sometimes a nude model is a stretch, or maybe it isn't.

 

[Nifferman]

I'm not sure which part you are referring to, it is largely personal preference. If big butts sell games great, but just putting out games with big butts big tits isn't going to keep everyone interested. I can get into characters that I don't find that attractive if they are written well, and that is a rarity, like less than 5% of the time in my experience. Of course I can also put up with some not so stellar writing if the characters are attractive to me, but it isn't as easy.

Character representations in avn games are usually based in the real world, so if the dev likes white girls with giant breasts and huge asses, that's what they use, or they are pandering to what is popular on social media just to sell a game.

There aren't a lot of characters like Cherry in any games I have played, maybe she is the only one. An artistic intellectual black woman who is slim and athletic, she likes sex but it isn't her main focus in life. She is not the internet's idea of a black woman, but she is realistic at the same time. Maybe being an artist that has her own exhibitions and is sometimes a nude model is a stretch, or maybe it isn't.

I get you, but for me the characters ethnicity, race etc doesn't matter as long as they are well written and since majority of the AVN authors are white or/and male, it is easier for them to write characters that are in the same category. But I do hope someday we can see some sexy representation and I would really dig in if she looked like Nathalie Emmanuel or something close.

 

[MagicMan753]

Maybe we can get a Zarina Lena threesome on the third day, since we have a chance to come. Feels like this may be the only chance, cause I doubt we will see her again back in the city.

Also, I hope there is a Ian pov this chapter. PilotLara said there was a while back in discord, so better be, cause I want to see some progression there with his prospects like Cindy, Louise, Gillian, Holly, Allison, maybe push Nat along a bit, really want something with her and some other girls too.

Also I think coming to the party could open opportunities for other things like Jess, side girls perhaps, so maybe if Lena doesn't invite us, maybe someone like Jeremy or someone else gets us an invite. Just some thoughts and other hopes for chapter 14.

 

[stuffygames]

I get you, but for me the characters ethnicity, race etc doesn't matter as long as they are well written and since majority of the AVN authors are white or/and male, it is easier for them to write characters that are in the same category. But I do hope someday we can see some sexy representation and I would really dig in if she looked like Nathalie Emmanuel or something close.

We share the same view then. I get tired of the same old stereotypes being used universally in a lot of the games I have tried, but there aren't a lot of great writers putting these games together, so I can't expect much.

 

[Mareares]

Since when the player chose to be with Lena and Holly just for fucking them and break with all the other girls as Ian? I don´t know why Eva Kiss chose this but it´s a bad thing that the player can´t choose inside his choices. I mean, in my run as Ian I told Lena to have an open relationship then we both have sex with Holly and I have to break with the rest of the girls. At least give me some middle options or put me in a hard situation to make me choose but don´t choose for me, please.

 

[Sterwan83]

Since when the player chose to be with Lena and Holly just for fucking them and break with all the other girls as Ian? I don´t know why Eva Kiss chose this but it´s a bad thing that the player can´t choose inside his choices. I mean, in my run as Ian I told Lena to have an open relationship then we both have sex with Holly and I have to break with the rest of the girls. At least give me some middle options or put me in a hard situation to make me choose but don´t choose for me, please.

Ian x Holly x Lena is treated as a committed relationship which is why Ian and Lena break up with everyone else. I assume they will eventually get a chance to cheat (like Lena already did with Seymour) or invite someone for a foursome. I too would prefer more player freedom but I guess that would create too many story permutations for Eva.

 

[dolfe67]

On the Third Day, Stan is reborn as a god among men, he shows up at the mansion and all the girls flock to him. He turns Nymph swimsuits into something sexy. He makes Sonia pretty. He makes Billie black. He has a whateveryouwouldcallit with all the women at the same time, and then he ascends.

and then he ascends wakes up from his wet dream. -FTFY

Maybe we can get a Zarina Lena threesome on the third day, since we have a chance to come. Feels like this may be the only chance, cause I doubt we will see her again back in the city.

Also, I hope there is a Ian pov this chapter. PilotLara said there was a while back in discord, so better be, cause I want to see some progression there with his prospects like Cindy, Louise, Gillian, Holly, Allison, maybe push Nat along a bit, really want something with her and some other girls too.

Also I think coming to the party could open opportunities for other things like Jess, side girls perhaps, so maybe if Lena doesn't invite us, maybe someone like Jeremy or someone else gets us an invite. Just some thoughts and other hopes for chapter 14.

By "we/us" you mean Ian? I see you self-insert as him. I don't think there will be a Ian's POV nor that he'll be invited in the next update

 

[DaLuke2]

and then he ascends wakes up from his wet dream. -FTFY


By "we/us" you mean Ian? I see you self-insert as him. I don't think there will be a Ian's POV nor that he'll be invited in the next update

Lena says she will invite him to the party.

 

[ffive]

At least give me some middle options or put me in a hard situation to make me choose but don´t choose for me, please.

No one "chooses for you" The choice whether to form a trinity or tell either Lena or Holly that you want to keep your relationship exclusive is your own. You get to make it during the hangout at Perry's beach house, as a culmination of earlier choices you've made for Lena and Ian how to interact with Holly.

And no, there's no "middle ground" option for the trinity. You either take it or leave it. Although i'd guess there's a possibility to just feed Holly to the wolves Ivy and hope that Ian/Lena can have some casual hookups with her down the road. If that's more of your thing.

 

[Yellowie The Goldie]

By "we/us" you mean Ian? I see you self-insert as him. I don't think there will be a Ian's POV nor that he'll be invited in the next update

If he's a cuck, Jeremy might send pictures to show him how he cleaned out Lena's behind.

I'm just kidding ofc lmao. I think there might be an Ian POV, even if smaller in scale.

 

[SearingFive]

We need Mommysboiii's wisdom! Where is he?

 

[Skylark21]

Maybe we can get a Zarina Lena threesome on the third day, since we have a chance to come. Feels like this may be the only chance, cause I doubt we will see her again back in the city.

Also, I hope there is a Ian pov this chapter. PilotLara said there was a while back in discord, so better be, cause I want to see some progression there with his prospects like Cindy, Louise, Gillian, Holly, Allison, maybe push Nat along a bit, really want something with her and some other girls too.

Also I think coming to the party could open opportunities for other things like Jess, side girls perhaps, so maybe if Lena doesn't invite us, maybe someone like Jeremy or someone else gets us an invite. Just some thoughts and other hopes for chapter 14.

Billy's trip is Lena's event, having Ian pov there wouldn't make any sense and that to at the climax of the said event but fortunately I don't think there is going to be Ian pov for this chapter, This chapter is similar to beach trip one which was basically an entire Ian pov chapter with Lena's pov getting a scene and that's only if she's on Axel path. Even if he does get a pov it'll be similar to that.

 

[HeyZen_]

Billy's trip is Lena's event, having Ian pov there wouldn't make any sense and that to at the climax of the said event but fortunately I don't think there is going to be Ian pov for this chapter, This chapter is similar to beach trip one which was basically an entire Ian pov chapter with Lena's pov getting a scene and that's only if she's on Axel path. Even if he does get a pov it'll be similar to that.

"Fortunately", you don't like Ian?

 

[Da¥e]

Since when the player chose to be with Lena and Holly just for fucking them and break with all the other girls as Ian? I don´t know why Eva Kiss chose this but it´s a bad thing that the player can´t choose inside his choices. I mean, in my run as Ian I told Lena to have an open relationship then we both have sex with Holly and I have to break with the rest of the girls. At least give me some middle options or put me in a hard situation to make me choose but don´t choose for me, please.

Eva said on the discord server, that there are changes coming regarding the trinity.

 

[Maviarab]

Eva said on the discord server, that there are changes coming regarding the trinity.

Holly and Lena realise they don't need dumb ass anymore?

 

[DaLuke2]

I have just discovered the scene where Lena cheats on Ian with Jeremy, I was not even aware it was possible. I even tried to play it again but I missed it this time, she only teases him.

Besides the low friendship points, does anyone know the other minimum requirements to get that scene ?