VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[ffive]

My bad but I messed up and accidentally said Alison instead of Louise, lol. I meant the threesome with Louise.

Oh. Yeah then, neither Ian nor Lena treats poor Louise as anything but just a bit of FWB fun, she gets discarded and forgotten as soon as the Trinity happens, smh.

Come to think of it, it's going to be interesting to see her reaction to the Trinity news after she comes back from her vacation.

 

[Erotica Biblion]

I think i'd point to Crossing the Lines as the one which deserves that sort of recognition, although it is far more similar to GGGB due to single female protagonist and quick developing plots. But it has something like 5-6 distinct "career paths" and similar amount of LIs (with reactivity to cheating etc) so when it comes to amount of playthroughs it may give even ORS a run for its money.

So I have just started playing a bit of this, and I do like things (like doing drawn art) and I'm slightly amused by the francophone English, but I really think the dev needs to cool it with the ORS borrowing. I got to an early conversation and the background music is the same as Eva uses for a similar setting, likewise a club background seems to be the same, and of course the icons. Now it's entirely possible (and probably in the case of the music) that these are stock assets, but it still feels a bit too much like copying. The dev's game would be stronger if it did not copy direct elements from ORS.

 

[GibboBtw]

Come to think of it, it's going to be interesting to see her reaction to the Trinity news after she comes back from her vacation.

We're turning this throuple into a quadruple is what's happening.


/s

 

[Jonathan Reid]

Oh. Yeah then, neither Ian nor Lena treats poor Louise as anything but just a bit of FWB fun, she gets discarded and forgotten as soon as the Trinity happens, smh.

Come to think of it, it's going to be interesting to see her reaction to the Trinity news after she comes back from her vacation.

I can't help but feel bad for Louise though. I don't really think she deserved the shit she went through with Jeremy and Lena fucking her and then discarding her afterwards is a pretty shitty move considering Louis's issues. But then again I'm the one who did it so I guess I'm the actual asshole.

 

[Gicoo]

Of course, cream pie is the best with milk!

And the worst with chocolate.

 

[Gicoo]

I can't help but feel bad for Louise though. I don't really think she deserved the shit she went through with Jeremy and Lena fucking her and then discarding her afterwards is a pretty shitty move considering Louis's issues. But then again I'm the one who did it so I guess I'm the actual asshole.

The most hilarious setup is Ian/Lena and Jeremy/Louise, but Lena and Jeremy cheat on them, so Ian and Louise just get together to spite them.

 

[yuvce]

I can't help but feel bad for Louise though. I don't really think she deserved the shit she went through with Jeremy and Lena fucking her and then discarding her afterwards is a pretty shitty move considering Louis's issues. But then again I'm the one who did it so I guess I'm the actual asshole.

When a parasitic leech is sucking the life out of you, you remove said parasitic leech by any means necessary.

 

[MagicMan753]

Oh. Yeah then, neither Ian nor Lena treats poor Louise as anything but just a bit of FWB fun, she gets discarded and forgotten as soon as the Trinity happens, smh.

Come to think of it, it's going to be interesting to see her reaction to the Trinity news after she comes back from her vacation.

We're turning this throuple into a quadruple is what's happening.

Yeah I actually love Louise. She grew on me so much. I really wish her relationship with Ian started a few chapters earlier, just cause I want so much more of her. As of just treating a Fwb, I think Ian can get a little deeper though.

As for what happens with Trinity, I would be ecstatic if we could add her, not holding my breath, but I want to give her a happy ending too. We can all live together, all cuddled up on one big bed. Honestly a dream, really hope Eva does this and does turn in a quadruple relationship in some way.

 

[Djoki996]

The most hilarious setup is Ian/Lena and Jeremy/Louise, but Lena and Jeremy cheat on them, so Ian and Louise just get together to spite them.

Another one (the one I'm doing now) is Ian and Lena casually dating, then Ian fucking but not dating Holly on the trip.

Afterwards, Lena and Holly Korrasami that little bitch.

 

[varpep]

Yeah I actually love Louise. She grew on me so much. I really wish her relationship with Ian started a few chapters earlier, just cause I want so much more of her. As of just treating a Fwb, I think Ian can get a little deeper though.

As for what happens with Trinity, I would be ecstatic if we could add her, not holding my breath, but I want to give her a happy ending too. We can all live together, all cuddled up on one big bed. Honestly a dream, really hope Eva does this and does turn in a quadruple relationship in some way.

Hell no! Have you seen how possessive and clingy she is? She's gonna want Ian all to herself and complain non-stop when she doesn't have him. And when she's had enough she'll get Lena and Holly out of the picture "permanently".

 

[GibboBtw]

Yeah I actually love Louise. She grew on me so much. I really wish her relationship with Ian started a few chapters earlier, just cause I want so much more of her. As of just treating a Fwb, I think Ian can get a little deeper though.

As for what happens with Trinity, I would be ecstatic if we could add her, not holding my breath, but I want to give her a happy ending too. We can all live together, all cuddled up on one big bed. Honestly a dream, really hope Eva does this and does turn in a quadruple relationship in some way.

It's not gonna happen. But just imagining the potential scene we could get with a 'Mistress' Lena, 'Dom' Ian and two 'Subs' in the form of Holly and Louise...

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[varpep]

Merry Christmas guys. Hope you enjoy spending time with family.

 

[MagicMan753]

As we get closer to release, it does feel like Ian won't even be at the party, which is a shame. That tease in game of Lena inviting us, probably a lie.

Just a whole chapter without one of the MC's feels bad and is a first. Just feels to me like Eva doesn't even care about Ian if he can't at least get a little bit of content for this chapter. Plus it affects routes, like what do we look forward to.

Just a whole chapter dedicated to Lena slut simulator(cheating, or no relationships.) Cause what do others have to look forward to if your're Lena is in a relationship, if its just Lena only again, it would be just cheating or slutting it up.

Just a shame, I just want a bit of Ian at party, just a little bit, but seems it will just be Lena only, sadly and unfortunately. Just a bad chapter.

 

[BlandChili]

As we get closer to release, it does feel like Ian won't even be at the party, which is a shame. That tease in game of Lena inviting us, probably a lie.

Just a whole chapter without one of the MC's feels bad and is a first. Just feels to me like Eva doesn't even care about Ian if he can't at least get a little bit of content for this chapter. Plus it affects routes, like what do we look forward to.

Just a whole chapter dedicated to Lena slut simulator(cheating, or no relationships.) Cause what do others have to look forward to if your're Lena is in a relationship, if its just Lena only again, it would be just cheating or slutting it up.

Just a shame, I just want a bit of Ian at party, just a little bit, but seems it will just be Lena only, sadly and unfortunately. Just a bad chapter.

Saying Lena can only be a whore if Ian isn't there is a bit much. Lena can be potentially pursuing other characters individually too.

 

[MagicMan753]

Saying Lena can only be a whore if Ian isn't there is a bit much. Lena can be potentially pursuing other characters individually too.

Yeah, maybe a bit over the top. There a couple characters like Jeremy and Mike. Ivy if we count her. But there are a lot more that we will never see again. So it kind of just feels that way to me at least. Just not much to look forward to for other fans or Ian relationship people or Trinity, etc.

Its just so disappointing that Ian gets ZERO content this whole chapter, nothing with Lena, seems like he won't be at party, even though Lena mentioned it in game. There were so many opportunities for threesomes or fun to be had with both there. Now another chapter with nothing to look forward to.

Just let down that Eva completely is neglecting Ian for the Whole chapter, which should never be a thing with muiple MC's. I have just waited so, so long, for nothing apparently.

 

[BlandChili]

Yeah, maybe a bit over the top. There a couple characters like Jeremy and Mike. Ivy if we count her. But there are a lot more that we will never see again. So it kind of just feels that way to me at least. Just not much to look forward to for other fans or Ian relationship people or Trinity, etc.

Its just so disappointing that Ian gets ZERO content this whole chapter, nothing with Lena, seems like he won't be at party, even though Lena mentioned it in game. There were so many opportunities for threesomes or fun to be had with both there. Now another chapter with nothing to look forward to.

Just let down that Eva completely is neglecting Ian for the Whole chapter, which should never be a thing with muiple MC's. I have just waited so, so long, for nothing apparently.

That's fair, I was surprised that Eva went away from the regular chapter structure too, though she did do something similar in the beach update as well. It's not fun when the plan seems to change like that.

 

[mannice431]

Does anyone have an exclusive Allison save (no threesome with Jeremy) for the beginning of chapter 13?

(It can be from earlier saves as well, i wanna try something out)

 

[varpep]

Does anyone have an exclusive Allison save (no threesome with Jeremy) for the beginning of chapter 13?

(It can be from earlier saves as well, i wanna try something out)

View attachment 23-9-LT1.save here

 

[Private West]

As we get closer to release, it does feel like Ian won't even be at the party, which is a shame. That tease in game of Lena inviting us, probably a lie.

Just a whole chapter without one of the MC's feels bad and is a first. Just feels to me like Eva doesn't even care about Ian if he can't at least get a little bit of content for this chapter. Plus it affects routes, like what do we look forward to.

Just a whole chapter dedicated to Lena slut simulator(cheating, or no relationships.) Cause what do others have to look forward to if your're Lena is in a relationship, if its just Lena only again, it would be just cheating or slutting it up.

Just a shame, I just want a bit of Ian at party, just a little bit, but seems it will just be Lena only, sadly and unfortunately. Just a bad chapter.

Glad that our girl Eva Kiss have learnt a lesson from DarkCookie, also know as Darth Milker. Ending games is not profitable at all when we talk about a long-term things like adult VNs. That's why she'd milk that shit to the oblivion, you'll see. I'm not gonna be surprised at all if we'll see a continuation of Ian+Lena route not until 2030.

 

[Vengeance_11]

seems like he won't be at party, even though Lena mentioned it in game.

To be honest, I don't see any real reason why Ian would ever be at the party.

While Jeremy frames it as chilling at the pool with girls in bikinis (largely so he can brag about it), the "party" is first and foremost a business event, with Jeremy only "invited" because he's serving as "logistical support"
Since Ian has nothing to offer Billy in terms of money or services related to his business venture, the only thing he would provide is sex scenes that are likely to be overshadowed by more interesting and/or important events at the party.

This is shaping up to be a Lena only chapter and I'm honestly okay with that considering that the vast majority of Chapter 12 was dedicated to Ian.